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Saint Hallow

PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 9:29 pm


Name: Hisaru Enoki

Nickname: Enoki
Race: Shinigami
Height: 5" 8'
Weight: 185 LBs
Phys Desc: Bright green eyes, hair similar in colour and length to Kaiens, and a small black soul patch.
Rank: (currently) N/A

Personality: Poor social skills, extremely unfocused, terrible sense of humor, loves to tell jokes that make no sense.

Zanpakutou

Zanpakutou Spirit: Akasaru; a fiery blue demon gorilla. He tends to share the same sense of humor as Enoki, but with a lot shorter temper.
Inner World: Akasaru lives in a thick jungle, in a mayan-esque temple, filled with blue fire torches and statues depicting the great battle victories of Akasaru.

Name:Akasaru
Desc: Tai-chi style sword, with 4 foot blade. on the hilt are 2 tassles, red and blue, respectively.

Shikai (Not Yet Learned): Sword shortens by 6 inches, attains 6 inch hook on dull side of blade. Tassles become one 7 foot long chain.

Shikai powers: none

Bankai (Not Yet Learned): Sword grows by one foot, hook lengthens, becomes serated. Blade attains blue tint. chain becomes black, and attains a 8 inch serated blade on end.

Bankai Powers: Enoki can control the effect of gravity on his sword (ONLY the BLADE, HANDLE, and CHAIN are effected. nothing else.) The extent of the increase in gravity is to about X100 the weapons normal weight, and decrease to weightless. Whilst the weapon's weight is increased, Enoki will have more difficulty handling the weapon. At X100, however, he cant lift the blade. That weight is usually used for when Enoki would drop the blade on the opponent.

Special Accesories: A blue headband with japanese character "Aka" on it.

Biography: Enoki was 23 when he died. Failing to support his family, he turns to his father for a loan. Enoki receives his money, and has enough to just get by. However, Enoki didnt know his father was also heavy in debt. His father had been taking thousands of dollars from loan sharks, and they thought it was high time he payed up. Now, Enoki and his father weren't close, so when the loan sharks interrogated him for where his money went, Enoki's name almost eagerly jumped from his lungs. But now that the sharks had their answer, they no longer needed Enoki's leech of a father. With a push, he went soaring over the nearest 100 drop. But now they were after Enoki. The next day, Enoki received a key for apartment S27, and a note telling him to go there noon tomorow. Of course, being as naive as Enoki is, he went. He opened the door to apartment S27, and crumpled to the ground. hot blood ran down from his shattered nose as they struck him a second time with the shovel. He blacked out shortly, partly from the blood, partly, from pain. He awoke to see he was back in his house. then, he saw the horrific thing in front of him. His son and wife, had been killed, mutilated, and posed in front of him with meat hooks. After about 12 hours of no sleep, staring at his dead family, Enoki went insane. When the sharks returned to question him, he had no idea what was happening. As soon as one came close enough, he snapped and chomped at the shark, catching him in the forearm. A shot rang out, and Enoki slumped to the floor. A bullet through the brain. After arriving at soul society, he was put into the care of squad 4 to correct his mental insanity. After seven human years of treatment, Enoki was near normal mental state. Over the course of his treatment, the shinigami of squad 4 were given glimpses of the sheer power Enoki had stored within. If channeled, he could be an effective warrior. After a quick synopsis of the shinigami training, Enoki was graduated from the academy, but just barely. You see, enoki's mind is darkened by what he saw in his mortal life. These thoughts were stored in his reiatsu, thus making channelling it near impossible. And with that, Enoki graduated with exceptional grades in swordsmanship, and was assigned to locate a suitable squad.

Abilities: The Spirit of the Blue Gorilla; a sort of placebo power, when he where's his headband, the pride he has for his family name makes him very determined, focused, and cunning. He tends to think things out a bit more, and will come up with things he wouldn't otherwise.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 9:15 pm


There's a few problems with you profile. The biggest one is that you used the wrong layout. Here'sa link to the layout you should be using.
The second one is that you mentioned something about "the Spirit of the Blue Gorilla", but it's not mentioned in detail in your abilities. Once you fix those things your profile will be fine.

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Saint Hallow

PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 9:23 pm


Blaze_Kynine
There's a few problems with you profile. The biggest one is that you used the wrong layout. Here'sa link to the layout you should be using.
The second one is that you mentioned something about "the Spirit of the Blue Gorilla", but it's not mentioned in detail in your abilities. Once you fix those things your profile will be fine.

I'm on it.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 11:09 pm


Okay that's better ^_^ I approve.
I don't think any of the other mods will see anything wrong with it either.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 11:16 pm


Ummm.. I see a slight problem actually. Although it is minor at this point.
You need to specify the limits of the gravity control on your blade in bankai, as well as how your body can deal with the changes.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 11:32 am


Mirouni
Ummm.. I see a slight problem actually. Although it is minor at this point.
You need to specify the limits of the gravity control on your blade in bankai, as well as how your body can deal with the changes.

i thought of that as well, but wasn't sure if it was a necessary detail. I'll fix it right away. by the way, thanks for the corrections, i really appreciate it.

Saint Hallow

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