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muse_4_music

PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:21 am


A Laugh Too Far...
The Story

The life of a comedian is not an easy one. Constantly feeling like you need to please the audience, and worried about whether or not the general public will think your jokes are funny. It's a hard life, but at times it can be very intersting. You get to travel to different places, and see things regular people dont normally get to see.
This is a story of a group of comedians who formed their own group, and toured the world together. How their life was at home, compared to how life is on the road. Although they all come from different backgrounds, They always seem to get along well with one another.


The Plot

One day, when on the road heading
to their next show in Dallas, Texas, The 4 comedians got into a huge argument about whos going on stage first. It was a huge fight that they decided that this was going to be their last show together.
Is this really going to be their final show? or are they going to make this show so spectacular, that they will put their personal feelings aside and realize that they will always have each other, and that there is no greater feeling in the world.
 
PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:04 am


Let me be straightforward with you:

This is a VERY flimsy plot. You're looking for 4 (3, if you count yourself as one) people who can come up with comedy routines on the fly- and be funny (that is, if you expect us to believe they're popular and funny). Not likely. Before anything has even begun, you've already created conflict by coloring all the characters as standoffish or egotistical; I can't see this ending well at all. Last of all, you have no long-term aim for the future. The conflict will be resolved in perhaps a day or two, and then what? You have to make it up as you go, and roleplays of that nature tend not to fare very well.

I wouldn't recommend carrying through with this.

Mr. Blackbird Lore

Dapper Codger


muse_4_music

PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:49 pm


Thank you for your honesty. Thats all i needed to hear.
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