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Deafening the Silence

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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 8:58 am

but there is 3 Twilight haters now smile That made my morning

Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 10:30 pm

Zerotheslayer

I hate Harry Potter too though, so don't celebrate yet...

lol i'm not a big fan of harry potter either....

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Deafening the Silence

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Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:21 am

That's quite depressing to hear from you both.. I would marry Harry Potter (not daniel radcliff). I saw someone with a tattoo quote form Harry Potter yesterday, it's tempting to get lol

Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 1:01 pm

Dominic? Seriously Jay. What kind of a name is Dominic? You sould've chosen something more manly like Falon.

Great read dude. I really do like it. Definate turn from where you had it before. Plus names are a lot more helpful now as I read it.

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Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:57 pm

You are the only MAN I know named Falon. All the rest are GIRLS!! lol

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:38 pm

LivingTattoo

Dominic? Seriously Jay. What kind of a name is Dominic? You sould've chosen something more manly like Falon.

Great read dude. I really do like it. Definate turn from where you had it before. Plus names are a lot more helpful now as I read it.

hey yo, i have a best friend and cousin named dominic, so shut yo mouth!! i totally missed that you put out chapter 2! keep it up!!

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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:36 pm

Oh yay, chapter 2! : )
Thank goodness you aren't a Twilight person or I would be worried about Dominic being a vampire/werewolf/demon/supernatural being (Pick one.) Every time I go to the bookstore... [insert rant here] ...and Edward is just plain creepy. One suggestion I have is that you may want to read this out loud to yourself just to hear if it sounds right. I think Dominic is a good name too, I have never met anyone named Falon.

I love Harry Potter books. The movies are okay I guess. The director likes to change the plot but at least they got Luna right.

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