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 Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:12 pm
Part 1
Soldier: Wake up! The French are fighting their way through our barriers!
We have to stop those Communist fiends before they wipe the entire camp!
Person: Wh-Where am I?
Soldier: Have you forgotten that we've been in war with the French, British, and the rest of the UN? It's been this way for years and you're now wondering where you are?!
Person: I don't remember anything. One moment I was resting at my house in Florida and now I'm... I'm in a military base, aren't I?
Soldier: Affirmative.
Person: Did you drag me here to fight a war I've never heard about?!
Soldier: No, sir. You are Private Oublier. You're in my regiment. -- Look, we're being attacked by the Commies, get up and prepare yourself. We need to fend them off so we can call for backup.
Oublier: Fine, then. I have no effing idea why I'm here or how I'm a soldier, but if it's for the good of the present, it's better than dying.
Part 2
"Here's your uniform. Don't ask why it's a different color than mine. Just wear it. You'll need this for special protection. We'd all wear this uniform, but we wouldn't want deceived guns to fire at the wrong side now, would we?", he said while handing Oublier an oddly familiar article of clothing.
Oublier unfolded the uniform and looked at it curiously. It wasn't camouflage like the soldier's. Instead, it was just a black uniform with an American flag on its right arm sleeve. An American flag with inverted red and blue and thirteen blue stars. "Why does the flag on your sleeve have...27, 28, 29, 30... Thirty stars? And it's colored differently too. Aren't we all of the RSA?", said Oublier. "That isn't important right now! Do you want the Commies to kill us or not?!", replied the Soldier in a very serious tone. "There are over fifty countries all controlled by the United Nations out there who's sole purpose is to spread their Communist government to our Democra--"
All of the sudden, a loud explosion is heard from afar. The soldier picks up his weapon and knells onto the floor. Oublier, not knowing what to do, runs to the weaponry, grabs a long, sleek gun, and kneels behind the soldier. "ALLEZ, ALLEZ, ALLEZ!!" A group of two French soldiers are heard running down the hall perpendicular from Oublier and the soldier, guns cocked and alert...
(This is the first time I've ever made a story, so sorry if it isn't good. D: I'll be adding to the story little by little. I'm really not a good writer at all... xD I can think of a good story in my head, but I have trouble making it interesting to read. I might correct grammatical errors one of these days. Again, I'm sorry! D: )
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 6:59 pm
Keep on writing, this could be a very interesting story.
(Maybe you could put into more of a book form, instead of like a screenplay...)
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 7:39 pm
Tonberry Crunch Keep on writing, this could be a very interesting story. (Maybe you could put into more of a book form, instead of like a screenplay...) I had those intensions. xD I just wanted to open it with a screenplay to get it started. Right now, I'm writing a whole history of what happens before what I wrote in Part 1. It's starting to get complicated. xD This is a dystopian, by the way. :3
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:03 am
bleu_flame Tonberry Crunch Keep on writing, this could be a very interesting story. (Maybe you could put into more of a book form, instead of like a screenplay...) I had those intensions. xD I just wanted to open it with a screenplay to get it started. Right now, I'm writing a whole history of what happens before what I wrote in Part 1. It's starting to get complicated. xD This is a dystopian, by the way. :3 Cool. Dystopia stories are usually cool.
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