I like it so far, it looks very interesting. You should also proof read it more and correct the few spelling mistakes in it (they distracted me a bit from the story), but otherwise I really like it. I hope you continue it soon, I am curious to know what happens next.
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 10:39 pm
i agree i lik it and would like to read more it has a very good "tug" to it if you understand what i mean sweatdrop i would definately be pulled into the story just from this begining 3nodding
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