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the fox and the bee

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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:31 am

Crits and red-lines welcome.

Right now I'll just post my dA for you all to see. Feel free to critique them as you see fit ... I need help BAD.

But as I go along and draw new things, I will post them individually if I would like some help. <3

http://aspiringdahlia.deviantart.com/

Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 10:28 am

well to be honest i don;t think you need help as badly as you think. you have a good grasp of the basics from what i see on the front page. good understanding of lighting and form. good comps, and your anatomy is basically right(well i only see faces but faces can be hard). well your nose could use some work but imo noses are the hardest to get right cause the sing(nostril area) is very odd. but that comes with time and practice.

other then that you seem o be pretty well on your way. if there is some specific help you need. let me know i can address it for you.

also high five for WA XD

Folken_Schezar
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the fox and the bee

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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:32 am

Thank you very much. ^^ Kind of inspires me to go draw right now. xD

Faces are hard for me ... harder than hands and feet, which is weird since that seems to be everyone else's hardest area. @_@

Do you redline? That helps me the most, progressive-wise. Written critique on a piece is alright, but actually being able to see how to fix something really helps me do better the next time. 3nodding

And high five back! Although I hate it here, weather-wise. scream

Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:04 am

I find it's easier to draw noses and such with shading. The harsh lines can make it look big, small or unreal. You're actually very good!

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Folken_Schezar
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:52 am

and yes i do if there is something particular you'd like me to red line let me know

Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:49 pm

Respirometric

I find it's easier to draw noses and such with shading. The harsh lines can make it look big, small or unreal. You're actually very good!

Ooooomgfuuuuuuu I suck at shading. @_@ My hatching is alright ... but actual shading ... no. @_@ Not yet anyway, I can get better if I take time to learn.

@ Schezar: Thanks. :] I'll PM you if I need help. :]

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