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Axel89_89

PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:56 am


Information

RPC Name: Oktomaji
RPC Age: Unknwon (Old)
RPC Gender: Male
RPC Height: 5'7"
RPC Weight: 156 Pounds (LBS)
RPC Hair Color: Natural Brown [Dyed Pink]
RPC Eye Color: Green
RPC Biography:

Oktomaji, when still Adjuchas-class, resembled a large moth like hollow. Oktomaji was extremely slow in evolving from Gillian to Adjuchas, and even more so when evolving into Vasto-lorde class. It took him over 7000 hollows devoured before his power increased enough for him to evolve. Oktomaji, before coming into relations with the leader of Heuco Mundo, had a rampaging, murderous, vengeful impudent personality. He often acted inane which caused him a great deal of trouble, being attacked at unpredictable times. When he first came to be a Vastor Lorde, he was classified as an inept candidate for an Espada rank, and was titled a numerous. However, as he grew and became more sane of mind, he grew out of his insouciant attitude, which got him acknowledged by the higher authorities, landing him the position of Quinto Espada.
RPC Personality:

Oktomaji displays a calm, contemplative personality. Apparently, Oktomaji likes to keep himself in a calm and peaceful state of mind. He has a great deal of respect for any leader that is commanding him, with no chance of betrayal.
Beneath this composed exterior, however, he hides a considerable loathing for the Shinigami, believing them to be arrogant for hunting down and killing Hollows just because the Shinigami consider them to be evil. However, he believes that Hollows can eat Humans without any consequences, making him seem hypocritical. Despite his level-headed composure, he is an overzealous individual who tends to treat others as though they were an equal, but consistently underestimates his opponent's abilities. Whenever Oktomaji would take control of his battle with another, he will remain calm and assertive in his supposed superiority, but when caught in a helpless situation, he will show signs of despair and become even more intense in his anger towards his opponent.

RPC Rank: Quinto
RPC Fraccion:
RPC Physical Appearance:

Oktomaji

Zanpakutou

  • Fuerza ('Spanish for'Strength') In its sealed state, Fuerza is a very long thin sword, it has no sheath, resembling a saber. It has an oval guard that is in-crested with many different dying golden creatures, symbolizing despair and strength of their destroyer. Fuerza is carried on Oktomaji's left side, however, the blade is extremely sharp, though it posses no threat to Oktomaji alone, anyone else that might touch it would be cut badly. It is released by the command "Shred"

    • Resurrection Form

      • Upon Fuerza release, Oktomaji's left arm is consumed by a massive amount of bone, it extends past his shoulder and far reaching above his head, the top sprouts out horizontally and the edges of the bone are extremely jagged. Each small pointy tip has an extremely small opening, and while being very heavy, it is lighter than air to Oktomaji. His arm is referred to as Olvido (Oblivion). His upper and lower body are covered in a very dull black substance, resembling ancient armor, a set of two snakes, one devouring the other, in gold, placed on the chest area. His one free arm os clothed in a silky garment, whilst his feet have been transformed into sharp points made of bone. His face holds a small line of bone across his left cheek to his nose and his hair now hangs more prominently in his face.


Resurrection Form Abilities:

  • Los Demonios Entregan - Fiends Hand

    • Oktomaji focuses all his power into his right arm. After allowing it to build for a short time, his reiatsu is visibly shown pouring out from the tips of the bone attached to his shoulder. After the concentration is at its peak, Oktomaji will slam his fist into anything he is attacking (ground/wall/person) At the moment of impact, the reiatsu that released itself due to the pressure, suppresses and forms around the point of impact, that, along with the power that is still residing in his hand, discharges, causing devastating power to be released, capable of destroying large areas. This ability is also capable of instantly disintegrating anyone who is hit by it that does not posses some sort of defensive power.


Enhanced Hierro: Oktomaji's Hierro receives an augmentation as well. Oktomaji's has the toughest Hierro above most Espada in both his normal state and his release form, therefore, his release form offers an unbelievable boost in strength.

Enhanced Speed & Agility: Complimenting his already impressive speed and power, Oktomaji's released state augments his speed drastically, giving him animalistic agility and movement to match.

Enhanced Strength: His strikes pack enough power to incidentally destroy incredibly large sky-scraper size buildings. Oktomaji's strength receives a large augmentation, more so then his other enhanced abilities.

Blast Wave: Oktomaji is able to concentrate reiatsu and send it out in a singular powerful shock towards enemies.

Resurrection: Segunda Etapa


Resurrection Segunda Etapa Form:

  • Released by the command 'Manifest'

  • When Fuerza is released for the second time, Oktomaji's skin is completely covered in a thick what & black bone like armor. This armor is jagged and spiked all across his body, now completely covering his head, appears to have taken the place of his normal hair as well. His release state offers him Superior defense abilities over other Espada.

    Fuerza Second Release Appearance


    • Resurrection Segunda Etapa Abilities:

      • Elpoder de Demonio - Power Of Fiend

        • This ability allows Oktomaji to inhale spiritual powers around him, depending on how weak or strong they are, he is able to completely consume ones strength. Upon doing so, he adds this to his own power to generate physical attacks, such as punches, that are powerful enough to turn a large portion of the massive extent of Las Noches into dust.


      • Los Demonios Blindan - Fiends Armor

        • This ability allows Oktomaji to literally become nearly untouchable on a number of levels, being able to withstand for a time attacks as high as Primera. Combined with his grand hierro, Oktomaji's armor becomes nearly perfect. The bone that covers his body spreads outward and forms a crystal like structure that conceals Oktomaji. However, while in this state, Oktomaji is completely cut off from using any sort of offensive ability, unable to attack in any way.


        Nentin Cero: A cero far more powerful than Cero or Gran Rey Cero. Dark purple in color, Oktomaji fires this from either of his hands.

        Grand Hierro: When in this state, Oktomaji's defense is masterful and is not able to be pierced even by some of the fiercest attacks.


Special Abilities

  • Sonido Master: As the 5th Espada, Oktomaji is very proficient in the use of Sonído. Even in his unreleased state, he is able to keep up with higher ranked opponents.

  • Garganta: Garganta is how Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Being the rank he is, Oktomaji is able to perform this ability with no effort.


  • Cero: Grimmjow is capable of firing a red Cero from the palm of his hand, as well as his fist. He has shown firing it at point-blank range to increase lethality.

    • Gran Rey Cero: As an Espada, he is able to use this Espada-exclusive Cero variant, which produces a much larger and more powerful version of the normal Cero, enough potentially to cause great damage to his surrounding environment.


  • Highly Perceptive Combatant: Oktomaji is able to discern from simple observation his opponents fighting level and fighting limit.

  • Great Spiritual Power: His spirit energy is very high.

  • Enhanced Strength: Oktomaji's strength, even when not in his released state, has proven to be worthy of recognition.

  • Hierro: As the Quinto Espada, Oktomaji's has the well developed ability known as hierro.

  • Pesquisa: Oktomaji's skill in Pesquisa is perfected.

  • Expert Swordsmanship Specialist: Although he usually prefers hand-to-hand combat, Oktomaji is also able to fight effectively with his Zanpakutō as well.

  • Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant: He is a very proficient hand-to-hand combatant, possessing considerable masterful skill using it as his primary means of attack. Equally lethal using punches and kicks as well as being highly unpredictable. His fighting technique is incredibly destructive using his speed and reflexes to quickly take out his opponents. He is skilled enough to even hold his own against stronger opponents for short amounts of time.


Unique Character Abilities:

Liberación Rápida - (Rapid Release)

  • An ability that allows Oktomaji to rapidly release shots of reiatsu in powerful bursts. This ability is akin to Bala, but far surpasses it in both strength and rate of fire.


Special Weapons

Special Weapons 1:
Several small swords, each about 5 inches in length. Kept under his robes. These swords are specially designed to return after hitting their intended target.

Reiatsu Information

Oktomaji's reiatsu color is deep purple. When felt, it gives the opponent a sense of sadness and despair.

Arrancar Character Ranking Points

  • Agility
    • Sonído - 100

    • Speed - 100


  • Hollow Techniques
    • Hollow Abilities - 70

    • Regeneration Abilities - 100


  • Physical Stamina
    • Resist Damage - 100

    • Fatigue - 100


  • Physical Strength
    • Reiatsu Pressure - 100

    • Physical Strength - 135


  • Intelligence
    • Controlling Reiryoku - 100

    • Intelligent - 100


  • Defense
    • Hierro - 145

    • Sword Defense - 100


Total Points ~ 1250
PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:11 am


What I find weird is that your description of his Resureccion Form was absolutely beautiful, but the description of his Abilities was found to be lacking a bit in terms of detail.

Though I see no real problem with it, I'd like to see a bit more detail to be added.

I myself approve of this, but it would be a welcome polishing in my opinion.

Dan the Dante
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  • Signature Look 250
  • Guildmember 100

Axel89_89

PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 5:49 pm


I updated my profile, can someone have a look?
PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:34 am


1st - Quinto Espada starts with 480 points, not 650. That surpasses the Primera. gonk

2nd - I'm a bit wary of your Stone Creature ability. It's honestly more of an actual Res ability, if you ask me, but it doesn't seem to match your theme here. Especially since it says it's harder than any substance on earth, the hardest of which is Diamond... at least naturally occurring. This technique would outstrip Zenos' Ressureccion and Segunda Etapa, and as such, it should not be a mere character ability. I suggest toning it down some, mostly because it seems too powerful for a single sub-ability.

II Palmtop Tiger II
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II The Metal Alchemist II
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:42 am


Your points should be about 70 less Axel, I handed out a 100 in total to you, so you should have 580, sorry if you got confused.

Also, I agree with Kit. If you made an ability that better went with your theme then that's fine, but having such an ability as a mere character ability, well, it doesn't fit.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:48 am


I was a bit confused about the points, I'll change that up now blaugh

And, I do agree that the ability is a bit off, I think I'll scrap it all together and make something else that better fits my character. 3nodding

Besides these points, is there anything else I should change?

Axel89_89


Axel89_89

PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:50 pm


Updated.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:41 pm


Quote:
Enhanced Hierro: Oktomaji's Hierro receives an augmentation as well. Oktomaji's has the toughest Hierro above all other Espada in both his normal state and his release form, therefore, his release form offers an unbelievable boost in strength.


You might want to rethink that since his Hierro is 100, whereas Zenos' is 150 before he even releases.

Also, I'd watch out for the wording for Los Demonios Blindan, especially with words like "untouchable." Make sure you aren't trying to downplay our Primera, he's strong. u.u

Either way, approved after that "has the toughest Hierro" business is fixed.

II Palmtop Tiger II
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Dan the Dante
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  • Guildmember 100
PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 1:15 am


1. Hmm... I can't comment on the Enhanced Hierro section. For me it's alright for your RPC to have it as long as it is correct-- in that he actually does have the strongest hierro out of all the other arrancar RPCs.

2. How strong is the Blast Wave?

3. Exactly how powerful is the Nentin Cero?
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