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 Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 10:38 pm
Fill out the form and post it here in this forum.
-Remember, only The Waktu are capable of Blood Script.
-Currently being accepted by: rusbob13 & Violent Fox (Approved by Fenrir)
[b]RPC Name:[/b] (Name of Your Character)
[b]Rank:[/b] (Your Characters Rank)
[b]Class:[/b] (Your Characters Class)
[b]Free Blood Script:[/b] (Can others learn this ability? Or is it only for your RPC?)
[b]Name of Blood Script:[/b] (Name of the Ability)
[b]Description:[/b] (Tell me how it works)
[b]RP Sample:[/b] (Now show me how you use it in battle, I get picky with RP samples. Make sure you clearly show how it would be used)
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:00 pm
dramallama RPC Name: Balthazar Arlaise
Rank: trainee
Class: Brawler
Free Blood Script: Nope =]
Name of Blood Script: Glutton
Description: The blood script causes the waktu's teeth to sharpen and elongate to a certain degree, but it also causes their mouth to enlarge. D rank energy makes their mouth big enough to bite someones head off, and B rank makes the mouth big enough to bite off half of someone's body off. But because of the drastic change in the size of the users mouth, they are more awkward with it, causing them not to be able to turn their head as well and suffer some speed loss.
RP Sample:
(I may just do a crappy version >.>)
Balthazar had been tailing the fey creature for quiet some time, and it finally came to stop at the pond in the middle of a grove. Once he had quietly hid behind a tree near the fey person, he took out a vial of blood and dipped a finger into it. He had never tried fey before, but he wanted to find out how they tasted like. He placed his now bloodied finger on his bicep and drew jagged tooth onto it, and then one of a feather below it. First the jagged tooth blood symbol gave off a soft red glow as strength flowed out of it and into Balthazar's jaws. His mouth then started to grow in size, and his teeth started to elongate in proportion to his mouth. Then the feather blood script started to glow as well, and Balthazar dashed from behind the tree and lunged at the delectable looking fey. The woman didn't have enough time to react as Balthazar's jaws enveloped her, bit down on her neck and gave a quick jerk, severing her head from her body. Hmm, doesn't taste too bad. he thought as he started to chew on her.
Lets go with "D" large enough to enclose a normal sized person's head for 2 posts, but decreases speed by two ranks.
and "B" large enough to enclose half of a normal sized person's body for 2 posts, but decreases speed by four ranks.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:35 am
Hrmmmm.... Because it makes your mouth bigger, it also makes you slower, and harder to turn your head because it weighs more. Add this and then it's accepted. I better not see you abusing that combination of Blood Script to kill everyone, lol XD
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:07 pm
I made the changes in red and *coughcough* I make no promises >.>
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:48 am
RPC Name: Raiden Gahiji
Rank: Trainee
Class: Shinobi
Free Blood Script: Yes
Name of Blood Script: Heal
Description: By drawing a cross on your chest, the body's healing factor increases. The higher the rank, the quicker the regenerating is and the strength of the healing. After duration expires one will have to reapply the seal.
E Rank: Has a regenerating factor equal to a vampire/werewolf at Trainee rank | Duration: two posts
C Rank: Has a regenerating factor equal to a vampire/werewolf at Adept rank | Duration: two posts
A Rank: Has a regenerating factor equal to a vampire/werewolf at Master rank | Duration: two posts
Rp Sample:
Raiden held up his arms to block the fireball, his arms quickly being burned and he leaped back, vanishing into the trees that surrounded the field. The man looked around, wondering where the Waktu took off to. Behind the tree trunk, he took out a veil and dipped his finger in it, pulling back a bloody finger. He brought it to his chest, drawing a cross on it. After a moment or so, the crossed glowed light blue, and slowly the burns and small cuts went away. Leaping out of the tree he landed silently behind the man, throwing his fst at him. At the last second the man managed to stab his fist with a dagger before being sent flying into the tree. Raiden hissed and pulled the dagger out, the man laughing at him bleeding and the hole in his hand. However, his laughing stopped when he saw the hole close, the bleeding no longer present. He looked to see Raiden's face, who was suddenly in his own face, a shark like grin was last seen before all went black for the man.
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:47 pm
While I like the idea of it, one of the only real downsides the bloodline has is that it gets hurt alot easier than others. So it's gona need to be edited a little bit.
My suggestion would be to make the regenerating factor trainee at E(just because it's only an E amount of energy), adept at C, and master at A.
Cuz if it's sage rank, they would be able regenerate an arm or leg, and that just seems like too much =/
And probably reduce the durations of all of them to two posts, and probably make it so that you have to apply a new seal every time you use it.
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:16 pm
rusbob13 While I like the idea of it, one of the only real downsides the bloodline has is that it gets hurt alot easier than others. So it's gona need to be edited a little bit. My suggestion would be to make the regenerating factor trainee at E(just because it's only an E amount of energy), adept at C, and master at A. Cuz if it's sage rank, they would be able regenerate an arm or leg, and that just seems like too much =/ And probably reduce the durations of all of them to two posts, and probably make it so that you have to apply a new seal every time you use it. Yeah I see what you mean. I made E regerate like an Novice because they are hurt more easily, so ya know? So would it be ok that its be like this? E = Novice C = Expert A = Master Expert would be a bit between master and adept, so a bit of the two. Master is master lol. I reduced the duration and I added the reapplying part, so what do you think?
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 3:24 pm
Shruikan Tenshi rusbob13 While I like the idea of it, one of the only real downsides the bloodline has is that it gets hurt alot easier than others. So it's gona need to be edited a little bit. My suggestion would be to make the regenerating factor trainee at E(just because it's only an E amount of energy), adept at C, and master at A. Cuz if it's sage rank, they would be able regenerate an arm or leg, and that just seems like too much =/ And probably reduce the durations of all of them to two posts, and probably make it so that you have to apply a new seal every time you use it. Yeah I see what you mean. I made E regerate like an Novice because they are hurt more easily, so ya know? So would it be ok that its be like this? E = Novice 10C = Expert 50A = Master 100Expert would be a bit between master and adept, so a bit of the two. Master is master lol. I reduced the duration and I added the reapplying part, so what do you think? They do get hurt more easily, but I think it should reflect how much energy is put into the seal. (I put the energy cost in red) An E amount of energy isn't really all that much, so I'm not sure if it's ok to heal deep gashes with a skill that's basically the lowest rank we have in this guild. And I don't think the C ranked one should be expert because it's too vague and people wont know exactly what the van or cant regenerate. Plus it will give them an extra incentive to cough up the extra 50 energy to use the A ranked skill.
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:16 pm
True true true, alrighty I'll change it accordingly to your liking ^^
edit: XD already was. So its good to go?
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:10 pm
Yep looks good 3nodding
I'll probably edit it into the Waktu bloodline at some point tomorrow.
Edit: I messed up. Waktu's aren't allowed to have any healing bloodline abilitie's xP
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 8:24 pm
RPC Name: Akura Bashirou
Rank: Trainee
Class: BioAlch
Free Blood Script: Free =3
Name of Blood Script: Snake's Fang
Description: By making an S sideways in the back of the palm the user is able to send a red snake from the palm of his/her hand toward the enemy, the snake is 10ft long and it lasts three posts. It has a 4 post cooldown
RPC Name: Akura Bashirou
Rank: Trainee
Class: BioAlch
Free Blood Script: =3 yesh
Name of Blood Script: Elemental Burst
Description: The user makes a single vertical line in any part of the arm, after this is done a burst of elemental energy appears on the user.
D rank= the arm the seal was done, It lasts 2 posts.
C rank= Both arms, it lasts for 4 posts.
B rank= Both arms and another part of the body, lasts for 6 posts.
A rank= Any four parts of the body, lasts for 8 posts.
RP Sample:
Akura sighed as he stood on top of the main library of the city, he made two seals on his right arm, first he made a S seal, the other was a bloody hand print. He then jumped off the 20 foot tall library, and then extended his arm toward a nearby building, he missed the top pole of said building which meant he was falling to his death. Akura smiled and activated his second seal which made a snake rush out of his arm and bite the pole. " That was close." He said as the snake began to pull him upward to the pole, once he was there he glanced to the side only to find his two targets. " Good day to you.... And good night!" He said calmly as the snake shot out at one of the men biting his neck, crushing it and killing him. The other man ran away from Akura scared since his partner was just killed with one attack. Akura sighed as he activated the power of the first seal once more, allowing his arm to extend toward his target, he grabbed the man by his leg and pulled him back, as the man was being pulled back, Akura made another seal on his arm, this time a vertical line, suddenly, fire exploded around Akura's arm and it began to burn the man's leg.
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:38 am
Alright, I have a few things to say, so I'm just going to do it in list form so that it's more organized.
1) Snake's fang: You didn't say what rank it is. Makes it hard to gauge how strong it is.
2) Snake's fang: Make it so that you have to re-apply the blood script each time you use it.
3) Elemental burst: Put in that it's the character's element, instead of something vague like elemental energy.
4) Elemental burst: Then post what each element is able to do.
5) Elemental burst: Shorten C rank to 3 posts, B to 4 posts, and A to 5 posts. Having something like that last for 8 posts seems a little much. =/
Bear in mind that I wont accept it with just these changes. It's just to have a better base, and to see what needs to be changed more.
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