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raijin_tsubasa

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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:55 pm

i just drew a picture of uzumaki kushina but i drew a teenager one.. i'd like to know your opinion so please comment.. redface
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:33 pm

The details are really nice and sharp, but the neck seems to thick for it to be a girl's neck. Try slimming down the neck and you'll be good to go. smile

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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:48 pm

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The details are really nice and sharp, but the neck seems to thick for it to be a girl's neck. Try slimming down the neck and you'll be good to go. smile

really?... ya. tnx for your opinion.. any other thing you noticed?

Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:37 pm

*Sorry if I'm starting to seem like a Simon Cowel of art sweatdrop

The nose seems a little flat, kinda alien like (Roswell Grey) you could try giving the right side a harder edge and darkening the shadows on that side just a bit to make the nose protrude more.

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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 7:35 am

xena91388

*Sorry if I'm starting to seem like a Simon Cowel of art sweatdrop

The nose seems a little flat, kinda alien like (Roswell Grey) you could try giving the right side a harder edge and darkening the shadows on that side just a bit to make the nose protrude more.

hmm.. i kinda noticed that one but it's hard to do shadings in MS-Paint.. i couldn't clearly emphasize the parts with it. but that's a challenge for me..

Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 11:54 am

I know, guh! If MS Paint just had one lousy smudge tool, no one would ever buy Photoshop ever again! pirate (a gradient tool would be nice too)

I just downloaded GIMP today, it's really awesome with the gradients and smudging, after you toy around with it for a bit and get the hang of it.

Paint for the outline + GIMP for the color/shading = WIN!

raijin_tsubasa

xena91388

*Sorry if I'm starting to seem like a Simon Cowel of art sweatdrop

The nose seems a little flat, kinda alien like (Roswell Grey) you could try giving the right side a harder edge and darkening the shadows on that side just a bit to make the nose protrude more.

hmm.. i kinda noticed that one but it's hard to do shadings in MS-Paint.. i couldn't clearly emphasize the parts with it. but that's a challenge for me..

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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:54 pm

raijin_tsubasa

XxMusic Is My TalentxX

The details are really nice and sharp, but the neck seems to thick for it to be a girl's neck. Try slimming down the neck and you'll be good to go. smile

really?... ya. tnx for your opinion.. any other thing you noticed?

No, not really. Xena made a good point about the nose, but I don't mind it.

Now your drawing seems kind of like an android. smile

Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 10:33 pm

xena91388

I know, guh! If MS Paint just had one lousy smudge tool, no one would ever buy Photoshop ever again! pirate (a gradient tool would be nice too)

I just downloaded GIMP today, it's really awesome with the gradients and smudging, after you toy around with it for a bit and get the hang of it.

Paint for the outline + GIMP for the color/shading = WIN!

raijin_tsubasa

xena91388

*Sorry if I'm starting to seem like a Simon Cowel of art sweatdrop

The nose seems a little flat, kinda alien like (Roswell Grey) you could try giving the right side a harder edge and darkening the shadows on that side just a bit to make the nose protrude more.

hmm.. i kinda noticed that one but it's hard to do shadings in MS-Paint.. i couldn't clearly emphasize the parts with it. but that's a challenge for me..

GIMP? never heard of it.. but from the sounds of it, it seems interesting! 3nodding