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 Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 7:45 pm
Mistreated, abused, neglected
Hopes crushed and rejected
You sent me into depression
Treated me like an ornament in your sick collection
What did I do to deserve this?
Your abusive behavior is something I won't miss
I'm afraid to be myself
You single me out from everyone else
Tell me now, are you happy? Are you glad that you made a freak?
I once was strong but because of you I now am weak
You try to change almost everything I do
Is nothing ever good enough for you?
It doesn't matter; I'll soon be gone
Maybe then you'll realize you were wrong.
Can you guys tell me what you think, please?
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 6:34 am
I like it. It's got a weird pattern - but you get used to it after you've read it a few times. Again, I like it. It's quite touching and fairly bitter - but then again it's very commanding and, I think I'm right, very personal.
I think you should stick in and write more, I'd love to see them when you finish them.
TL+K.
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