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 Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:55 pm
I would appreciate your thoughts on my poem
Above The Horizon:
above the horizon,
a dark, gray mist settles in,
slowly growing darker,
shadowing the sun,
as day turns to night.
the sand beneath my feet grows cold
and the crashing torrents of the sea,
slowly swallow the shore.
I look up, seeing the silhouettes of flying gulls
fleeing inward for the night.
then, above the horizon,
a single, shining star emerges,
giving light,
giving a small, gleam of hope,
to a darkened world.
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Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2010 1:37 pm
Wow i like your poems and the time and though you put into them. I love this one and to me, you put a lot of work into it and make it work out for you, great job and I hope to see more like it.
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