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 Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:44 pm
Tytun Rpc Name: Mitrian Hyuuga Village: Sunagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Byakugan/Hyuuga What you know about the clan/bl:From what I recall, the main thing about the Byakugan is that it can only be used by Hyuugas, as well as giving the wielder’s eyes a white pupil-less color. It’s possible for a very light level of coloring in the eye, though. When the user activates the Byakugan, veins grow around his/her eyes from the sides of his face, as well as his eyes bulging somewhat almost in a way that can barely show the pupil’s location. Once in this state, the Hyuuga can see the chakra channels within his opponent’s body, as well as the main points that allow Chakra to flow freely through the body. With the Gentle Fist style known by the Hyuuga, if he/she is close to an expert in the style, he/she then can force his/her own Chakra into an opponent’s Chakra point, thus effectively knocking it out to unstable the opponent’s Chakra flow. If enough points are taken out this way, the Hyuuga can essentially prevent his opponent from using Chakra. Another fact of the Byakugan is that it gives the Hyuuga a near 360 degree vision field, allowing them to see any attacks coming from most angles. The only downfall is that there is a blind spot, which resides about near the very back of his head elevated upward. If attacks get through there, the Hyuuga could be in a bad spot. The main factor of the Hyuuga clan, though, is that they divide their clan among two groups, which specific names escape me. The main group leads the clan in its important things and regulating the people there, while the minor group is simply a shield for the main group. If a Hyuuga is part of the minor group, a symbol is branded upon their forehead, which looks to be an x on their forehead with elegant lines running among the sides of the x. If I recall correctly, the minor Hyuuga will die from the symbol’s effect if he fails to keep the main Hyuuga he is charged with alive. Rp Sample: (For this example, I shall play as if I’m a Chunnin level ninja) Along the forest path, a lone ninja leaped from tree limb to tree limb as he made his way to a point known only to him. His mission was simple; locate a rogue ninja and capture him alive. This kind of mission was a bit difficult for most ninjas, as any combat sequence would normally end in a ninja being killed due to unstable and overpowering jutsus. He, however, was not one of those kinds of ninjas. No, he was a strong member of the Hyuuga clan, and thus he had a technical advantage. However, he couldn’t say he exactly proud to be a member… Before he had received the mission, the ninja had been walking among his clan, examining his surroundings. On one side of the walking path, he could see children from the main section of the clan playing around with sticks and dolls. On his other side, he could see a few members of the minor section staring down the children, forced to watch over those they truly didn’t want to. Although he himself was part of the main section, the ninja cursed the way his clan worked. It wasn’t a fair system, almost at a level that could be called slavery. Who had the right to force others to follow him? The ninja’s daydream stopped abruptly as he landed quietly on a tree limb. Something was off with the atmosphere of this area in the woods. His brow burrowed as he scanned his surroundings cautiously. …Hmm, nothing of concern in normal view, but… Closing his eyes, the ninja could feel the power of his Kekkei Genkai surging through his body as he breathed in slowly. “…Byakugan!” Opening his eyes abruptly, veins seemed to expose and throb around the sides of his face as well as on his eyeballs themselves. Immediately, his vision changed the landscape, turning everything to black and white with his environment being white. At first, he couldn’t see anything that looked as if it should be of concern but, after using the Byakugan’s scope vision effect, he could see what appeared to be a campsite in the distance about 25 meters north. Nodding to himself, the ninja began to move forward… Suddenly, a kunai whizzed by his head as he ducked under the surprise attack. Thanks to his Byakugan’s near circular vision, he had seen it coming before it had even neared him. Using his duck to slide around underneath the tree limb and then dropping to the ground, he looked around to see three silhouettes that most likely belonged to enemy ninja. While these three could only see him in general, the ninja himself saw beyone the layer of skin each enemy had, taking note of their Chakra system as it coursed freely. Without much wait, one of the enemies began weaving handsigns, which the ninja was able to tell due to the elevated flow of Chakra. With a deep inhale, the enemy fired an enormous ball of fire at him, which in response caused the ninja to jump away to safety. Upon landing, the first thing he did was drop himself into the fighting stance Hyuugas were known to use for their Gentle Fist. To spite him, the three enemies surrounded him and attempted to finish him off with a combination attack. Watching as all three strikes came at him, the ninja sighed as he began to spin on his feet. Immediately, Chakra from his own body came out and covered him in a spherical manner, not only blocking the enemies’ attacks but also throwing them about into trees and bushes. Finishing up his spin, the ninja looked upon the fallen enemies with a sigh. It seemed that this wasn’t his target’s hideout after all… If it hadn’t have been for the sound of a kunai flying at him, the ninja would have never known about the oncoming attack. Dodging at the last possible second, the kunai sliced across his right shoulder before vanishing into the shrubbery. Turning around as he gripped his wound with clinched teeth, the ninja could see a man standing in the trees. His target… was here the entire time, and had managed to attack him in the one spot he couldn’t see with his Byakugan. Without the usual villian monologue, the male dropped down and rushed him with a new kunai in his hand. From the intel he was given, the ninja knew that this man was deadly in close quarters combat, which easily explained why he didn’t attack from afar. Dropping back down into his Gentle Fist stance, the ninja clashed with the man, parrying blow to blow. Eventually, a mistake was made and the man kicked the ninja in the chest. As he fell over gasping for air, the man didn’t hesitate to plunge the blade straight into the ninja’s heart. Smirking at his victory, the male almost had time to gloat before a sharp pain emerged from his back. Then another, and another, and another… Turning around, the male managed to see the ninja attacking his back with his own palms. The ninja who had been stabbed exploded in a cloud of smoke, revealing a log as the actual target. With each palm thrust, the ninja took down a Chakra point in his enemies’ chest, slowly cutting off the Chakra flow within. Feeling his own strength fade with each hit, the male cursed to himself as he tried to land a hit upon the enemy. Seeing the attack coming, the ninja spun around the male before hard palming him in the neck. Normally, this would have caused an opponent to fall over and choke, but the male, having lost quite a few of his Chakra points, just simply fell over and was unconscious before he hit the ground. Seeing that the battle was over, the ninja sighed as he straightened out his clothing and wiped the line of sweat from his head. With that little bit done, he pulled a line of rope he had stored in his back pouch and began tying up the target. Once that was accomplished, he picked the male up and, with a bit of discomfort, began his journey back to the village. The mission was a success, now the ninja had to keep his part of the bargain… I'm fairly surprised that you have not considered trying to Auto-rank. Alas, an excellent rp sample with only one misspelling in it. I give you my stamp of Approval! APPROVED!
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Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2010 2:14 pm
keishi_rin Rpc Name: Panku E. Angelo Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Valkyrie No Enzeru What you know about the clan/bl: First of all, it is the angelic side of a two part bloodline that is separated in two branches, the Enzeru branch (the one I'm applying for) and the Tenma branch, that are rather demonic. It's first found in Orochimaru's labs, and the two branches absolutely hate each each other, and will attack at the moment of meeting each other; let alone they are known to have split personalities. There is no way to have a RPC with both branches' jutsu, as angelic demonic people is just plain wrong as it is. Anyways, more detail to the Enzeru branch. The Enzeru branch are the angelic side, like I said, as they are known to Protect a certain person; making them seem like gauridan angels. Now, they can gain a medical and taijutsu boost, as it's alot easier for them to learn it...Though this is true, they can NEVER learn genjutsu, and can be possessed easily, so making genjutsu, Yamanaka, Nara, etc. their worst nightmares. They have special medical-like jutsus that are capable of refilling other people's chakra, and they have a starter Medical/Taijutsu move that replaces the Body switching, transformation and clone jutsus, as they have to get them the hard way. These fellows start out not in a village, but rather have to make the village their entering trust them; even though they are outsiders...and that can take awhile. They, have a very dangerous ability. They, can sense demonic beings, to sense the tenma branch...but they can pick up Bijuu hosts; making a possible target for the akatsuki. They, are fully dedicated to the person they protect, willing to die in their place by having a suicidal resurrection technique, that will kill them right after they use it. They, can learn to have wings at chunin level, that let them fly (obviously) and used in other technique. This bloodline is under my customs, because I'm unsure if I have to post it in the bloodline section or not. sweatdrop Rp Sample: ((This will be a full throttle type of Sample, meaning I'll be acting like I have all the techniques and I'll be acting as if I was the clan head.)) Panku sighed, as she had her sword in her hand, resting it on her shoulder, as she huffed. She was being very overprotective of the group she was in at the time, as she had a bad premonition for what was to come.... This seemed like a simple enough mission; as they had to pick up litter in fire country.... Though, the rest of the group was snickering at her paranoia, including that jerk of a Tenma member, as she was just itching to attack the boy. Though, she was stuck picking up old soup cans, and random pieces of paper.... She leaned down to pick up another piece, as her eyes widened. "GET DOWN!" She yelled, as she jumped out of the way, as the paper had exploded; an explosion note. She had finally seen the look of panicked members in the group, as the Tenma was looking all over the place. "There's another Enzeru..... A byakugan.... an Anigan..... And I cant figure out the last one; for it's a clan...." the boy panicked, as she looked at the group that had appeared; as she put her sword in-front of her, and stared at the group currently coming at them. "Tenma boy! You keep the anigan and enzeru busy! I'll deal with the other two! And you, the one with the pink hair! Supply him some chakra!" Panku growlled, as a rather darker side had suddenly had came out of her when she talked to the boy. She formed quick handseals, as she had thousands of feathers appeared from her back, from a simple tattoo she gained from gaining a person that was needed of her protection. "Take off: Angel!" She said, as for now, she flew alittle off the ground, as she darted off to the byakugan user, as she tried to closeline the fellow. She failed, as the Byakugan was more agile, as she landed on the ground, as she preformed another set of handseals. "Acid wing!" She said as her wings had dispersed; as few of the feathers had became dart-like they shot over towards the target, like many kunai that burns like acid. As Many missed the target (stupid byakugan) her target as a few skimmed the hyuuga's arms, causing flesh to burn up. She huffed, as check how everyone was at that moment; That.... was a bad decision. As she did, she couldnt move, whatsoever. Well this meant one thing: she was shadow bound by a Nara clan member... the unknown in this situation, as the Tenma had to Buff up, as his strength and defense increased, though he became alot slower. She could move, and she was in a mad panic because the person she was supposed to be protecting was getting pummeled, and Panku had her aggression rising...and then..... That very person was out for the count...... They had ran out of every bit of chakra they had; and she couldnt use sacred mark on them because she couldnt move her arms to make the handsigns..... She was a sitting duck while she saw the person that she was basically designed to protect die in front of her. [about an hour later] Anbu had finally came, and everyone was beaten up pretty badly, as she was released from the Nara's shadow possession technique, as she automatically attempted medical jutsu on the dead body, as she was crying and panicking, and simply couldnt think at all. She closed her eyes and formed a long set of handseals, as she readied herself to to die. "Angel's salvation...." Panku whispered, as she started the resurrection progress. As she done so, she felt weaker and weaker every minute....Every second really; that had past. Finally, as they were resurrected to perfect health, as she dropped to her knees, and face planted the ground, as she closed her eyes. There was truly nothing else that she may help with..... The group had surrounded her (besides the Tenma who was cackling in the background) as they realized there was absolutely no way that they could help either. Panku was dead.
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:04 pm
Rpc Name: Kay Onsataru
Village: Undecided
Rank: undecided
Bloodline or Clan applied for: ONsataru
What you know about the clan/bl: Well, sound dependant, blind, weaker to genjutsu affecting sound, immune to those affecting eyes. Explosions weaken them. Basically... everything... lol
Rp Sample:
"Five ninja, Jounin level, COmmander in the center. He's giving them orders huh?" Kay asked himself as he walked through the forest with his bow staff, tapping against the ground which sent out vibrations for him to see with. Suddenly, those exact ninja thought they were pulling one over on him, suppossedly silently moving around him to have him surrounded. He stopped and picked up a flower, and the ninja found their moment to strike...
Removing a sword from their hips, each ninja dashed at him one by one leaving a window of two seconds in between them. "Sloppy," he said swinging the staff in a wide arc around him, his sage robes flying out around him, as well as they fresh, crisp autumn leaves. He jumped straight up, and did a few hand rebound from a tree branch as he flew down towards the slowest of the group. He swung the staff in circular patters around himself and smacked the disoriented ninja over the head. He recovered rather fast, the ver strands of his hair betraying his movements ans his fist flew through the open, colorless, perfect soundsight towards him. He moved to the left one inch out of his range, it takes twice as much energy to miss after all, and slapped down his hand with the staff. "Did you all read my file at all? Or did you just see a blind man in the bingo book with no background and choose him to go after?" He asked amused as the ninja scrambled to his fet. His teeth were clenching tightly, his nostrils flaired, his blinking eyes making an audible tick to Kay's ears, and he jumped back, handseals flying. Kay recognized the pattern and did seals of his own as well. "Oto Sheild!" he called as a sheild protected him from the jutsu coming his way. The fire was stopped, Kay now flying towards the airbourne ninja, and hit him in his temple with extreme strength. They both landed, Kay listening to the shocked ninja around him falter to their feet. ONe of them had been killed. Shizzle just got real...
"NOW!" One man yelled throwing a kunai with something fluttering on it's end at Kay. NO! he thought jumping far back, just out of range of damage as it exploded. His ear drums felt like ballons after popping as he flew into the treeline. Now with his sound sight scrambled, he was at a huge disadvantage if they found him. He could hear well enough in close range, but outside an arm's length he was useless. "Where did he go? He must have gotten caught in the blast guys!" one ninja called out. The one who attacked his senses. He was up above him in a tree, listening to his enemy walk away from him. He did handseals though he couldn't see, and a clone of himself appeared from sound behind the ninja, running with a screech. The ninja ran away, using guerilla tactics to lead the clone to his friends, and out of Kay's earshot luckily. They sprung the trap, and the enemy ninja were suprised as the clone sent out a wave of soudn that deafened them all temporarily. They looked around, Kay could see now that his sound had finally returned, and he jumped down from his perched position, his feet letting out vibrations that he could pick up from his enemies. They ran deafly towards him. He was better at using disabilities to his advantage than them, and they were quick to find this truth to be painful. THe staff swept the one in front off of his feet, and then pushed right into his chest, knocking the other two over. While they struggled, Kay stabbed the staff into the ground seeing they had lost their arms thanks to the clones. "Well come one, you can take a blind, former ANBU right?" he taunted taking an odd stance. Oblivious to his taunts, the first ninja threw a solid fisted punch at him. The air's rustling against his jacket gave it away, and Kay grabbed his fist, using his driving momentum to toss him overhead. He landed on the bow staff, right into his neck, breaking it and killing him. Kay was then assaulted by two punches at his ribs. They were sloppy, disorientated, which made them easier pickings. He caught both fists and quickly wrapped his arms around his enemies' arms. Bending the arms at an angle they snapped, and Kay let them go, grabbing one by the neck and DDT-ing him so hard his skull cracked. When he bounced to his feet, the other ninja used his good arm to try for one last desperate haymaker. Kay jumped and flew overhead, grabbing his head as he flew and twistng his entire body. Good night. THat left only the commander.
"Commander Tenchi Hyuuga I presume?" Kay asked walking into the clearing where his enemy stood like neji would have been. "What brings you here? The bounty or revenge?" Kay asked. Tenchi nodded both times. Kay shrugged and took his stance. Not very diferent from the gentle fist, but his front foot was only touching the ground at the soles of his feet, and the back foot only at the toes. His hands were held as iff holding a ball upside down, and his eyes betrayed his excitement. The two ninja ran towards each other, hoping to end the battle in one blow as the two similar fighters nearly collided. Their was a mighty flash of light, a moment of slow motion. The difference between the two styles and lineages. The byakugan can literally see chakra, making it a sight dependant bloodline. But the Onsataru sound sight, it relies on sound, the complete opposite. So as the two fingers aimed for his middle tenketsu came close to impact, Kay moved slightly to the left, aiming his fist at his opponents neck. Then everything went black. In the end the one weakness of relying solely on his eyes led to Tenchi's down fall as the quick hands of Kay moved. Kay's downfall c ame from his needing to hear those faster hands of Tenchi. Kay lay one the ground, coughing out blood, as did Tenchi. THe two destined enemies would die together that day... or so the story goes...
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:14 pm
Six_Paths_God Rpc Name: Kay Onsataru Village: Undecided Rank: undecided Bloodline or Clan applied for: ONsataru What you know about the clan/bl: Well, sound dependant, blind, weaker to genjutsu affecting sound, immune to those affecting eyes. Explosions weaken them. Basically... everything... lol Rp Sample: "Five ninja, Jounin level, COmmander in the center. He's giving them orders huh?" Kay asked himself as he walked through the forest with his bow staff, tapping against the ground which sent out vibrations for him to see with. Suddenly, those exact ninja thought they were pulling one over on him, suppossedly silently moving around him to have him surrounded. He stopped and picked up a flower, and the ninja found their moment to strike... Removing a sword from their hips, each ninja dashed at him one by one leaving a window of two seconds in between them. "Sloppy," he said swinging the staff in a wide arc around him, his sage robes flying out around him, as well as they fresh, crisp autumn leaves. He jumped straight up, and did a few hand rebound from a tree branch as he flew down towards the slowest of the group. He swung the staff in circular patters around himself and smacked the disoriented ninja over the head. He recovered rather fast, the ver strands of his hair betraying his movements ans his fist flew through the open, colorless, perfect soundsight towards him. He moved to the left one inch out of his range, it takes twice as much energy to miss after all, and slapped down his hand with the staff. "Did you all read my file at all? Or did you just see a blind man in the bingo book with no background and choose him to go after?" He asked amused as the ninja scrambled to his fet. His teeth were clenching tightly, his nostrils flaired, his blinking eyes making an audible tick to Kay's ears, and he jumped back, handseals flying. Kay recognized the pattern and did seals of his own as well. "Oto Sheild!" he called as a sheild protected him from the jutsu coming his way. The fire was stopped, Kay now flying towards the airbourne ninja, and hit him in his temple with extreme strength. They both landed, Kay listening to the shocked ninja around him falter to their feet. ONe of them had been killed. Shizzle just got real... "NOW!" One man yelled throwing a kunai with something fluttering on it's end at Kay. NO! he thought jumping far back, just out of range of damage as it exploded. His ear drums felt like ballons after popping as he flew into the treeline. Now with his sound sight scrambled, he was at a huge disadvantage if they found him. He could hear well enough in close range, but outside an arm's length he was useless. "Where did he go? He must have gotten caught in the blast guys!" one ninja called out. The one who attacked his senses. He was up above him in a tree, listening to his enemy walk away from him. He did handseals though he couldn't see, and a clone of himself appeared from sound behind the ninja, running with a screech. The ninja ran away, using guerilla tactics to lead the clone to his friends, and out of Kay's earshot luckily. They sprung the trap, and the enemy ninja were suprised as the clone sent out a wave of soudn that deafened them all temporarily. They looked around, Kay could see now that his sound had finally returned, and he jumped down from his perched position, his feet letting out vibrations that he could pick up from his enemies. They ran deafly towards him. He was better at using disabilities to his advantage than them, and they were quick to find this truth to be painful. THe staff swept the one in front off of his feet, and then pushed right into his chest, knocking the other two over. While they struggled, Kay stabbed the staff into the ground seeing they had lost their arms thanks to the clones. "Well come one, you can take a blind, former ANBU right?" he taunted taking an odd stance. Oblivious to his taunts, the first ninja threw a solid fisted punch at him. The air's rustling against his jacket gave it away, and Kay grabbed his fist, using his driving momentum to toss him overhead. He landed on the bow staff, right into his neck, breaking it and killing him. Kay was then assaulted by two punches at his ribs. They were sloppy, disorientated, which made them easier pickings. He caught both fists and quickly wrapped his arms around his enemies' arms. Bending the arms at an angle they snapped, and Kay let them go, grabbing one by the neck and DDT-ing him so hard his skull cracked. When he bounced to his feet, the other ninja used his good arm to try for one last desperate haymaker. Kay jumped and flew overhead, grabbing his head as he flew and twistng his entire body. Good night. THat left only the commander. "Commander Tenchi Hyuuga I presume?" Kay asked walking into the clearing where his enemy stood like neji would have been. "What brings you here? The bounty or revenge?" Kay asked. Tenchi nodded both times. Kay shrugged and took his stance. Not very diferent from the gentle fist, but his front foot was only touching the ground at the soles of his feet, and the back foot only at the toes. His hands were held as iff holding a ball upside down, and his eyes betrayed his excitement. The two ninja ran towards each other, hoping to end the battle in one blow as the two similar fighters nearly collided. Their was a mighty flash of light, a moment of slow motion. The difference between the two styles and lineages. The byakugan can literally see chakra, making it a sight dependant bloodline. But the Onsataru sound sight, it relies on sound, the complete opposite. So as the two fingers aimed for his middle tenketsu came close to impact, Kay moved slightly to the left, aiming his fist at his opponents neck. Then everything went black. In the end the one weakness of relying solely on his eyes led to Tenchi's down fall as the quick hands of Kay moved. Kay's downfall c ame from his needing to hear those faster hands of Tenchi. Kay lay one the ground, coughing out blood, as did Tenchi. THe two destined enemies would die together that day... or so the story goes... I apologize it took me a while to find the clan. Please post it in the Clan page. Your rp sample was really well done with only a few mistakes. I will excuse the lack of extended explanation about them, as you did create the clan. Approved!
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:18 pm
keishi_rin keishi_rin Rpc Name: Panku E. Angelo Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Valkyrie No Enzeru What you know about the clan/bl: First of all, it is the angelic side of a two part bloodline that is separated in two branches, the Enzeru branch (the one I'm applying for) and the Tenma branch, that are rather demonic. It's first found in Orochimaru's labs, and the two branches absolutely hate each each other, and will attack at the moment of meeting each other; let alone they are known to have split personalities. There is no way to have a RPC with both branches' jutsu, as angelic demonic people is just plain wrong as it is. Anyways, more detail to the Enzeru branch. The Enzeru branch are the angelic side, like I said, as they are known to Protect a certain person; making them seem like gauridan angels. Now, they can gain a medical and taijutsu boost, as it's alot easier for them to learn it...Though this is true, they can NEVER learn genjutsu, and can be possessed easily, so making genjutsu, Yamanaka, Nara, etc. their worst nightmares. They have special medical-like jutsus that are capable of refilling other people's chakra, and they have a starter Medical/Taijutsu move that replaces the Body switching, transformation and clone jutsus, as they have to get them the hard way. These fellows start out not in a village, but rather have to make the village their entering trust them; even though they are outsiders...and that can take awhile. They, have a very dangerous ability. They, can sense demonic beings, to sense the tenma branch...but they can pick up Bijuu hosts; making a possible target for the akatsuki. They, are fully dedicated to the person they protect, willing to die in their place by having a suicidal resurrection technique, that will kill them right after they use it. They, can learn to have wings at chunin level, that let them fly (obviously) and used in other technique. This bloodline is under my customs, because I'm unsure if I have to post it in the bloodline section or not. sweatdrop Rp Sample: ((This will be a full throttle type of Sample, meaning I'll be acting like I have all the techniques and I'll be acting as if I was the clan head.)) Panku sighed, as she had her sword in her hand, resting it on her shoulder, as she huffed. She was being very overprotective of the group she was in at the time, as she had a bad premonition for what was to come.... This seemed like a simple enough mission; as they had to pick up litter in fire country.... Though, the rest of the group was snickering at her paranoia, including that jerk of a Tenma member, as she was just itching to attack the boy. Though, she was stuck picking up old soup cans, and random pieces of paper.... She leaned down to pick up another piece, as her eyes widened. "GET DOWN!" She yelled, as she jumped out of the way, as the paper had exploded; an explosion note. She had finally seen the look of panicked members in the group, as the Tenma was looking all over the place. "There's another Enzeru..... A byakugan.... an Anigan..... And I cant figure out the last one; for it's a clan...." the boy panicked, as she looked at the group that had appeared; as she put her sword in-front of her, and stared at the group currently coming at them. "Tenma boy! You keep the anigan and enzeru busy! I'll deal with the other two! And you, the one with the pink hair! Supply him some chakra!" Panku growlled, as a rather darker side had suddenly had came out of her when she talked to the boy. She formed quick handseals, as she had thousands of feathers appeared from her back, from a simple tattoo she gained from gaining a person that was needed of her protection. "Take off: Angel!" She said, as for now, she flew alittle off the ground, as she darted off to the byakugan user, as she tried to closeline the fellow. She failed, as the Byakugan was more agile, as she landed on the ground, as she preformed another set of handseals. "Acid wing!" She said as her wings had dispersed; as few of the feathers had became dart-like they shot over towards the target, like many kunai that burns like acid. As Many missed the target (stupid byakugan) her target as a few skimmed the hyuuga's arms, causing flesh to burn up. She huffed, as check how everyone was at that moment; That.... was a bad decision. As she did, she couldnt move, whatsoever. Well this meant one thing: she was shadow bound by a Nara clan member... the unknown in this situation, as the Tenma had to Buff up, as his strength and defense increased, though he became alot slower. She could move, and she was in a mad panic because the person she was supposed to be protecting was getting pummeled, and Panku had her aggression rising...and then..... That very person was out for the count...... They had ran out of every bit of chakra they had; and she couldnt use sacred mark on them because she couldnt move her arms to make the handsigns..... She was a sitting duck while she saw the person that she was basically designed to protect die in front of her. [about an hour later] Anbu had finally came, and everyone was beaten up pretty badly, as she was released from the Nara's shadow possession technique, as she automatically attempted medical jutsu on the dead body, as she was crying and panicking, and simply couldnt think at all. She closed her eyes and formed a long set of handseals, as she readied herself to to die. "Angel's salvation...." Panku whispered, as she started the resurrection progress. As she done so, she felt weaker and weaker every minute....Every second really; that had past. Finally, as they were resurrected to perfect health, as she dropped to her knees, and face planted the ground, as she closed her eyes. There was truly nothing else that she may help with..... The group had surrounded her (besides the Tenma who was cackling in the background) as they realized there was absolutely no way that they could help either. Panku was dead. There were numerous mistakes within the rp sample.The biggest problem I had was: How did the boy know what bloodlines they were facing? He certainly could not have sensed it and it never states that he saw them clearly enough to describe that.
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 11:51 am
It says in The tenma ablities that he can sense what bloodline the opponent has; it says in my custome page; and here's a qoute just to make things alittle clearer. My custom bloodline Name: Valkyrie no Enzeru or known as Banin no Tenma, depend on which branch the person falls under. Description: This came from the fact demonic beings and angelic beings seemed to go down to earth an fall for humans, without knowing it really. Orochimaru discovered this in his labs, and it is considered in two branches, the Enzeru branch, and the Tenma branch. Sadly, this unique bloodline is never found in villages. Never. They always seem to be in small towns and marketer's families... Now, they have a split personality type of disorder. It is known that their, well, feral sides can come out, and their personalty would be the exact opposite of the user. This, would cause rather problems, and most are dubbed insane because of this feral side. The people of this clan, and different branches, have to earn the right to become a ninja, by doing various tasks for the kage closet to their home town. This could take weeks, months, even years. They do not start with the transformation, clone, and body switch techniques. they start with the necessary jutsu from the list of jutsu capable to learn: The chakra bite for Tenma, and Healer's revenge for Enzeru. Strengths: Tenma branch: - Can learn Ninjutsu and Genjutsu with -1 posts. - Can learn Genjutsu one rank higher, up to three extra from the limit. - Flight (After a few stages) - Can sense what bloodline the opponent has- Vampiric chakra ability Enzeru branch: - Can learn Medical jutsu and Taijutsu with -1 posts - Can learn medical jutsu one rank higher, up to three jutsu - Skilled with poisons, acids, etc. - Flight (after a few stages) - Can sense where demonic beings are Weaknesses: Tenma Branch: - incapable of using medical jutsu - taijutsu is very hard for them, so +3 posts. (I'm serious.) - Cannot get along with the Enzeru branch, and will attack the opposite branch. - Easily possessed (required) - Tenma have low chakra, but start only enough to preform E-rank tech (If person gains clan head boosts in this branch, medium chakra) Enzeru Branch: - incapable of using genjutsu - Ninjutsu is very hard for them, so +3 posts. (I'm serious,) - cannot get along with the Tenma branch, and will attack the opposite branch. - Easily possessed (required) - Incapable to withdraw from chakra biting. (aka, once someone uses it, they auto-paralyze to cooperate)
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 1:10 pm
keishi_rin It says in The tenma ablities that he can sense what bloodline the opponent has; it says in my custome page; and here's a qoute just to make things alittle clearer. My custom bloodline Name: Valkyrie no Enzeru or known as Banin no Tenma, depend on which branch the person falls under. Description: This came from the fact demonic beings and angelic beings seemed to go down to earth an fall for humans, without knowing it really. Orochimaru discovered this in his labs, and it is considered in two branches, the Enzeru branch, and the Tenma branch. Sadly, this unique bloodline is never found in villages. Never. They always seem to be in small towns and marketer's families... Now, they have a split personality type of disorder. It is known that their, well, feral sides can come out, and their personalty would be the exact opposite of the user. This, would cause rather problems, and most are dubbed insane because of this feral side. The people of this clan, and different branches, have to earn the right to become a ninja, by doing various tasks for the kage closet to their home town. This could take weeks, months, even years. They do not start with the transformation, clone, and body switch techniques. they start with the necessary jutsu from the list of jutsu capable to learn: The chakra bite for Tenma, and Healer's revenge for Enzeru. Strengths: Tenma branch: - Can learn Ninjutsu and Genjutsu with -1 posts. - Can learn Genjutsu one rank higher, up to three extra from the limit. - Flight (After a few stages) - Can sense what bloodline the opponent has- Vampiric chakra ability Enzeru branch: - Can learn Medical jutsu and Taijutsu with -1 posts - Can learn medical jutsu one rank higher, up to three jutsu - Skilled with poisons, acids, etc. - Flight (after a few stages) - Can sense where demonic beings are Weaknesses: Tenma Branch: - incapable of using medical jutsu - taijutsu is very hard for them, so +3 posts. (I'm serious.) - Cannot get along with the Enzeru branch, and will attack the opposite branch. - Easily possessed (required) - Tenma have low chakra, but start only enough to preform E-rank tech (If person gains clan head boosts in this branch, medium chakra) Enzeru Branch: - incapable of using genjutsu - Ninjutsu is very hard for them, so +3 posts. (I'm serious,) - cannot get along with the Tenma branch, and will attack the opposite branch. - Easily possessed (required) - Incapable to withdraw from chakra biting. (aka, once someone uses it, they auto-paralyze to cooperate) I must have missed that when I was approving the custom. I thought they both had the ability to sense demons. I'll allow it for now but if it proves to be a hindrance to the enjoyment of the rp, I will request that it be changed.
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 1:11 pm
duckmasta keishi_rin keishi_rin Rpc Name: Panku E. Angelo Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Valkyrie No Enzeru What you know about the clan/bl: First of all, it is the angelic side of a two part bloodline that is separated in two branches, the Enzeru branch (the one I'm applying for) and the Tenma branch, that are rather demonic. It's first found in Orochimaru's labs, and the two branches absolutely hate each each other, and will attack at the moment of meeting each other; let alone they are known to have split personalities. There is no way to have a RPC with both branches' jutsu, as angelic demonic people is just plain wrong as it is. Anyways, more detail to the Enzeru branch. The Enzeru branch are the angelic side, like I said, as they are known to Protect a certain person; making them seem like gauridan angels. Now, they can gain a medical and taijutsu boost, as it's alot easier for them to learn it...Though this is true, they can NEVER learn genjutsu, and can be possessed easily, so making genjutsu, Yamanaka, Nara, etc. their worst nightmares. They have special medical-like jutsus that are capable of refilling other people's chakra, and they have a starter Medical/Taijutsu move that replaces the Body switching, transformation and clone jutsus, as they have to get them the hard way. These fellows start out not in a village, but rather have to make the village their entering trust them; even though they are outsiders...and that can take awhile. They, have a very dangerous ability. They, can sense demonic beings, to sense the tenma branch...but they can pick up Bijuu hosts; making a possible target for the akatsuki. They, are fully dedicated to the person they protect, willing to die in their place by having a suicidal resurrection technique, that will kill them right after they use it. They, can learn to have wings at chunin level, that let them fly (obviously) and used in other technique. This bloodline is under my customs, because I'm unsure if I have to post it in the bloodline section or not. sweatdrop Rp Sample: ((This will be a full throttle type of Sample, meaning I'll be acting like I have all the techniques and I'll be acting as if I was the clan head.)) Panku sighed, as she had her sword in her hand, resting it on her shoulder, as she huffed. She was being very overprotective of the group she was in at the time, as she had a bad premonition for what was to come.... This seemed like a simple enough mission; as they had to pick up litter in fire country.... Though, the rest of the group was snickering at her paranoia, including that jerk of a Tenma member, as she was just itching to attack the boy. Though, she was stuck picking up old soup cans, and random pieces of paper.... She leaned down to pick up another piece, as her eyes widened. "GET DOWN!" She yelled, as she jumped out of the way, as the paper had exploded; an explosion note. She had finally seen the look of panicked members in the group, as the Tenma was looking all over the place. "There's another Enzeru..... A byakugan.... an Anigan..... And I cant figure out the last one; for it's a clan...." the boy panicked, as she looked at the group that had appeared; as she put her sword in-front of her, and stared at the group currently coming at them. "Tenma boy! You keep the anigan and enzeru busy! I'll deal with the other two! And you, the one with the pink hair! Supply him some chakra!" Panku growlled, as a rather darker side had suddenly had came out of her when she talked to the boy. She formed quick handseals, as she had thousands of feathers appeared from her back, from a simple tattoo she gained from gaining a person that was needed of her protection. "Take off: Angel!" She said, as for now, she flew alittle off the ground, as she darted off to the byakugan user, as she tried to closeline the fellow. She failed, as the Byakugan was more agile, as she landed on the ground, as she preformed another set of handseals. "Acid wing!" She said as her wings had dispersed; as few of the feathers had became dart-like they shot over towards the target, like many kunai that burns like acid. As Many missed the target (stupid byakugan) her target as a few skimmed the hyuuga's arms, causing flesh to burn up. She huffed, as check how everyone was at that moment; That.... was a bad decision. As she did, she couldnt move, whatsoever. Well this meant one thing: she was shadow bound by a Nara clan member... the unknown in this situation, as the Tenma had to Buff up, as his strength and defense increased, though he became alot slower. She could move, and she was in a mad panic because the person she was supposed to be protecting was getting pummeled, and Panku had her aggression rising...and then..... That very person was out for the count...... They had ran out of every bit of chakra they had; and she couldnt use sacred mark on them because she couldnt move her arms to make the handsigns..... She was a sitting duck while she saw the person that she was basically designed to protect die in front of her. [about an hour later] Anbu had finally came, and everyone was beaten up pretty badly, as she was released from the Nara's shadow possession technique, as she automatically attempted medical jutsu on the dead body, as she was crying and panicking, and simply couldnt think at all. She closed her eyes and formed a long set of handseals, as she readied herself to to die. "Angel's salvation...." Panku whispered, as she started the resurrection progress. As she done so, she felt weaker and weaker every minute....Every second really; that had past. Finally, as they were resurrected to perfect health, as she dropped to her knees, and face planted the ground, as she closed her eyes. There was truly nothing else that she may help with..... The group had surrounded her (besides the Tenma who was cackling in the background) as they realized there was absolutely no way that they could help either. Panku was dead. There were numerous mistakes within the rp sample.The biggest problem I had was: How did the boy know what bloodlines they were facing? He certainly could not have sensed it and it never states that he saw them clearly enough to describe that. Approved!
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 1:15 pm
Thank you~
Though, there's a reason why the Tenma cant sense demons; because the Enzeru are suppose to be the exact opposite of them; so I got them to sense bloodline instead. They cant sense clans though, which makes it more interesting >.<
But still, thank you.
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 3:46 pm
er, i'm currently debating whether my character will be in the uchiha or nara, so i would like to have both on file in case i change my mind at the last second. also, i know that my current character right now is an uchiha, but with the freezing of the guild and my appointment as the kazekage, i figured it appropriate to change my rpc. please let me know if this is a problem
Rpc Name: The Nerdbot
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Kage
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara
What you know about the clan/bl:everything.....
-Users use shadows to fight
-Shikamaru is epicness
-their main jutsu, shadow imitation, binds the opponent through the shadow
-if opponent has strong chakra while binded in shadow imitation jutsu, it can be countered
-also known for tending of deer
-jutsu can get repetitive if used many times in succession
Rp Sample: "Where the hell is Ryuji?!?" The village elder, barely escaping a large fireball, scowled. He was one of the many people who were against Ryuji's appointment as Kazekage, and even pushed towards impeachment of the young ninja. However, Ryuji was well loved within the Sand, so all attempts proved to be unsuccessful. The elder jumped back as yet another katon jutsu was thrown at him. The Leaf Village, bitter rivals of the Sand, were closing in on the suna forces, driving the brigade farther and farther back. Many sand troops were either dead or injured, with only a dozen left standing. Still, even those ninjas looked like they would collapse. All the while, the leaf ninja, numbering in the thirties, continued to push the Suna Nin to their limits, not showing any signs of weariness, exhaustion, or surrender. The Suna morale was low. Very low. Its their damn katon jutsu! Its too strong for our fuuton! We need reinforcements. And our Kage! Where the hell is that little runt? What kind of kage leaves the- The elder was cut off, for before he could finish his thoughts, a large and burly ninja appeared. His devilish grin made it all too apparent that he had every intention of killing the village adviser. The elder began pulling up his hands in hopes of countering his opponent, but the younger ninja was too quick. Pulling back his fist, the burly man took one last smirk before driving it into his opponent's skull.
However, instead of the blood and guts that were expected to appear, nothing happened. The elder, who's eyes were closed due to the fear of dying, took a second to breathe before finally opening his eyes. The man before him held a stunned face, his fist still pulled back in the air. But he made no move. Without thinking, the elder turned around, frantically searching for his savior. But he merely scowled when he found out who it was. "Where the hell have you been?!? Our troops have been dying and the Leaf's reinforcements have blah blah blah blah blah blah blah." Ryuji Nara, the Kazekage, observed the burly man silently. A ninja of chuunin rank, maybe special jounin. Nobody famous or important. Won't be missed. "Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu - Shadow Neck Bind Technique." The ninja fell down in seconds, his atrophic corpse absent of any life or emotion. Ryuji didn't hesitate. He couldn't afford to be in a state of abeyance, especially now.
Twitching his fingers, Ryuji pulled back in the trees, three puppets soon taking his place on the battlefield. The Leaf ninja hadn't noticed his presence yet, which was good. Swiftly, he performed a few handseals, leaving the puppets stationary for a moment. "Kageton - Kage Senbon Rendan! (Shadow Release - Shadow Needle Barrage)" Within seconds, the field was flooded with needles, all of which seemed to come out of nowhere. Many Leaf ninja had stopped their battles, looking on with mild wonder as to who performed this new jutsu. The Sand troops, however, cheered with zealous excitement. "Ryuji is here!" "Finally!" "I thought i was dead meat!" "Ryuji will finish these Sand Ninja off." "Burn in hell, leafies!" By now, the three puppets were no longer incognito, numerous leaf ninja spotting them despite the chaos of the battlefield. They were surprised, and a little worried, for the use of puppets were notorious throughout the world. One ninja, a young one eager to kill, decided to charge at one of them, not wanting to wait around to see what they would do. However, when he tried to move, he couldn't. "What the...." Ryuji, still hidden behind the trees, smirked. "Kageton - Kage Oriito Soutei! (Shadow Release - Shadow Strand Binding)" The shadow needles, launched on the battlefield before, stretched out to the ground, digging their tips deep into the forest floor. They were immovable, causing for immobilization of the leaf ninjas caught within the needles. The three puppets who remained stationary suddenly jolted back with life. They careened from side to side, silently mocking their targets before their death. Then, screams.
A few minutes passed. Ryuji, fiddling with his three puppets, was being congratulated repeatedly by various ninja soldiers. Medics were on the field, caring for their Suna brethren who had become injured during the battle. Total number of Sand Casualties: 27. Total number of Leaf Causalities: 46. Blood colored the forest floor, tainting the pure green hue with a sinister, scarlet red. Corpses lined the ground. Unused ninja tools were being collected. Bodies were being stabbed to ensure no survivors. Hate to have the grisly task of cleaning those up. Ryuji, stifling a yawn, got up and prepared to leave. He had taken care of things here and it was time for his nap. It was then that a young boy, no older than 14, ran up to him. "Lord Kazekage! Lord Kazekage! Leaf reinforcements are coming from the north. They are being led by the 'God of War' Chouki Akimichi!" Ryuji listened carefully to the young boy's words. Chouki Akimichi was a strong foe, one of the biggest deciding factors in this war. If he was leading a troop of reinforcements, it probably meant defeat, especially after the large battle the Sand Nin had just participated in. Taking a moment to think, Ryuji finally nodded his head, signaling the boy to leave. This stronghold would be captured another time, but for now, it would have to be forgotten. The soldiers were of more importance. "OK, everyone! We're moving out! Head due west, towards the Sand Village. No slackers! Leave the bodies.....I want the Leaf to know the dreadful wrath of the Sand!"
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