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Aicas
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:56 am


Hey everyone smile , I didn't post this in the photography thread or Screenshot thread because I need criticism from you guys. Yesterday I did a quick sketch of my character. I want to improve future sketches of my Runescape Characters since I'm not so good at drawing Runescape characters themselves. (I'm a very skilled artist on paper, but when it comes to Gimp, Photoshop, and digital art I'm not so good.)

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So, what can I improve?
PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:50 pm


Not Print-screen tracing. surprised

I kid.

Hmmm, the hat needs to show more lighting of roundness to it. Looks flat.

The feather... more feathery!

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Glarus

PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:30 pm


The hat needs improvement.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 11:19 am


Some of the edges are too sharp, try smoothing them out.
+ Previous statements.


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:00 pm


Making the hands less... stubby-like? Unless that's what you're going for. The feather definitely needs work though.
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