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Devout Grabber

PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:48 pm


A shiver runs down my spine
As I look back at the empty space
I hear voices and this is the case
Am I going insane?
I really don't know.
I pretend that I heard nothing
And continue to walk the dark halls

Again the voice comes
Telling me to play hide and seek
When I am so very meek
It taunts me so,
refusing to let me go on my way
Something tugs on my hand, pulling me forward
A shiver runs down my spine

I shout and try to get away
The thing refuses to let go
The voice laughs at me,
Saying that I will be its friend forever
I can not escape
My skin goes cold as
A shiver runs down my spine

Finally the thing reveals itself
It is but a harmless Duskull
For so long it has been without a friend
I smile gently and hug it
I will forever be its friend


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I'm such a nerd!!! And sappy at that!!! I wanted to make a Ballade... So it ended up being about the pokemon, Duskull. I wanted to make it into a mini story as well... Which I failed horribly at... Sorry for the horrible poem and bad rhyming!!! gonk

Ps. I love Duskull.... sweatdrop
PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:06 am


lol pokemon is amazing least the old version back in 2000 was this new stuff kills me. Anyways in the second stanza 'forward' is what you were goin for i believe. Along with spin I'm guessing you meant 'spine'. I would do grammar but I suck with that.... as for the rhyming it wasn't that bad and at least to me also like the imagery you put in it.

Kiba Neko


Tseko the Living Shadow

PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 6:35 am


teh wootz sauce j0, up untill the end it reminded me of the ghost pokemon episode trying to beat sabrina
PostPosted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:48 am


Kiba Neko
lol pokemon is amazing least the old version back in 2000 was this new stuff kills me. Anyways in the second stanza 'forward' is what you were goin for i believe. Along with spin I'm guessing you meant 'spine'. I would do grammar but I suck with that.... as for the rhyming it wasn't that bad and at least to me also like the imagery you put in it.


Thanks! I fixed all of the grammar errors in it. I was too tired to notice I guess. sweatdrop

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Devout Grabber


Kiba Neko

PostPosted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 11:41 am


All is good glad I was able to help some
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