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11linda

PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:16 pm


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User ImageAppearance: She has dark, coal like black hair, the ends lay on her shoulders. She has large dark eyes, that almost look demonic.
Cloths: Dark dresses and shoes.
Name: Baib Tacaha
age: Six
height: three feet six inches
weight: 50 pounds
Personality:Baib is a very kind and gentle soul, though she may not seem it by her looks at the stories floating about her. She tries to be nice to everyone, though they don't usually return her kindness.
Book/Bio: Baib was the child of an evil witch, after she was born she was taken to an orphanage. When she was born her mother was said to have been trying to use her baby as a vessel for the devil, so everyone believed Baib was the devil.concrete angel
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User ImageClothing: He likes loose clothing. long coats and lose jeans, his favorite color is blue.
Name: Scot
Age: Eight-teen
Height: Five feet ten inches
Weight: 144-154 pounds
tektek: X.
True occupation: leader of the castle guards
Personality: Scot cares about his guards. He works heard and always is ready to take charge, he doesn't allow his feeling to hold him back, but he never hids how he feels unless it is really needed.
Book/Bio: Memories: Lost
He became the guard when he was seventeen. His father used to be the guard and he was happy to try to take his father's place.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:18 pm


User ImageName: Linda
Age 16
Height: five feet
Weight: ninety pounds
Birth Date: Unknown
Hair: Dark brown, to the middle of her back, lightly curls, she usually wears her head down, but in a formal event she has her hair done in many different styles.
Eyes: Hazel eyes that appear usually dark, usually brown.
Tekteks: X.X.X.X.X.X.X.
Birthplace: castle
Other facial features/other appearance details: Her lips are almost the same color as her skin, just a little redder.
DRESS (Style, colors): She likes battle wear, not armor, just tight pants, short skirts, long jackets, lost or tight fitting tops, doesn't matter to her. Along with boots, flat or high heeled, she always has a sword sheath like this and usually has a gun.
She also could be wearing jewelry, crowns, fancy hair styles, make up, gloves, and dress and high heels.
Description of home: A large beautiful castle
Dominant character trait: No matter what shape she is in she always acts tought.
Secondary character trait; She doesn’t allow her position in the castle to stop her from also taking charge and being a guard, she doesn’t feel she needs anyone to protect her.
Personality: Linda has had many personalities over the years, now after saving herself from clan X her knows exactly who she is. Linda is protective of herself and her friends; she is not afraid to speak out and does not give into anyone. She is very sensitive about her past and all the things that she had done. She is now spending her time making up for all the wrong she had caused.
Best friend: Jon
Other friends: Scot, Kevin, Dan, the rest of the guards
Enemies and why: Ben, leader of X. His father kidnapped Linda when she was young and had made her kill and steal for years.
Family: Thinks of everyone in the castle as her family
What kind of person is character with others: Wants to protect them and just have fun. She thinks of the guards as her family
Sees self as: A killer who is trying to make amends for what she did
Is seen by others as: as a strong, hard headed person who never gives in
Sense of humor: likes to make fun of heavy situation and can make people laugh without knowing how
Temper: she doesn’t get mad at people easily, but usually hates herself for a lot of thing
Basic nature: fighting, is like breathing to her.
Ambitions: Killing Ben and figuring out who she was
Educational background: lived in the clan X hid out, a group of people who have been brain washed to fight for the leader of Clan x
Work experience: None
Philosophy of life: Never give up, never give in.
Habits: tapping her feet, rolling her eyes and glaring.
Talents: Swords and knife throwing.
Hobbies/pasttimes: Day dreaming.
Choice of entertainments: Training
What trait will make character come alive?: Her attitude and her past
Why is character likeable: She is a strong woman who never backs down
Why is character loveable: She care about people
Book: Memories: Lost
PERSONAL INTERVIEW WITH CHARACTER
Occupation: I would have to say I am a Guard, nothing more.
Current home: Castle
Marital status: Single
Children: of course not
Favorite pig out food: You know, I never thought about it….
Nobody knows I am: Well, most people don’t think someone like me could fight
I wish I could stop: I have no clue
I'm a sucker for: A sad person
The worst part of my life is: everything after being taken from the castle and four and now.
I want to teach my children that: You can do anything you want and to never give in.
A good time for me is: when I am just hanging out with the guards
The worst advice that my father gave me was: My father died when I was three… I don’t remember him well
I though I was grown up when: I was forced to kill cops at the age of four.
When I feel sorry for myself I: Look at the sky or a ceiling and cry.
Nobody would believe my if they saw me: Well not saw me, more like my alter personality.
My friends like me because: I am not really sure why… I guess I am fun to be around.
My per peeve is: Hearing someone talk about things that will never understand
My major accomplishment: Finding out who I was
I can die happy when: When I know my kingdom is going to be ruled right
I'd really rather: fight a mad man then learn how to be a lady from the queen.
My most humbling experience was: I have no clue… so many memories.

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User ImageName: Mayela Mia Greenling
Age four to six
Height: two feet eleven inches
Weight: 33 pounds
Birth Date: May, sixth
Hair: Short to her shoulders, straight, brown, likes to use hair clips, bows and ribbons in her hair. She also loves baseball caps.
Eyes Hazel, blue.
Tekteks: Hare to make a tektek over a little girl...
Birthplace: a hospital
Other facial features/other appearance details: She has pink lips and her cheeks are always pink.
DRESS (Style, colors): She is a little girl, her favorite color happened to be blue. She doesn't mind dresses, but loves shirts with bows and if it is cold she is always wearing her blue jean jacket.
Description of home: She lives in a pretty good size home.
Dominant character trait: She is very smart for her age.
Secondary character trait; She doesn't get a long with many people
Personality: Mayela is the shy type; it is hard for her to open up to anyone, mostly because no one seems to understand her. She is a very smart girl for her age and was even bumped up to second grade, well still in fourth grade. She is usually very calm and understanding. The kind who would rather read than play.
Best friend: none (for now)
Other friends: none
Enemies and why:Kids, they don't understand her... differences.
Family: Mark and Mia Greenling
Sees self as: A freak
Is seen by others as: Overly smart, but a freak as well
Sense of humor: Mayela is pretty straight forward, she doesn't usually do jokes
Temper:She is hard to make mad, but easy to upset. A lot gets to her, as much as she tried to ignore it all.
Basic nature: Not allowing anyone knew her
Ambitions: Swinging her legs
Educational background: No one knows what she has, and her family doesn't understand how to treat her for it.
Work experience: None
Philosophy of life: We all can't be the same.
Habits: Reading to fast. Walking into a room at the wrong time.
Talents: She is reading large novels at 4 and doing math, she can see people dying and feel their pain anytime someone touches her.
Hobbies/pasttimes: reading upside down.
Choice of entertainments: reading
What trait will make character come alive?: Her innocence and her high spirts
Why is character likeable: She is an adorable child
Why is character loveable: That she is trying to understand something no one else understands.
Book: Untouchable Mayela
PERSONAL INTERVIEW WITH CHARACTER
Occupation: I have none
Current home: My parents home... but that maybe changing
Marital status: Single
Children: of course not
Favorite pig out food: Cookies and cheese sticks
Nobody knows I am: Afraid of my own gift and being unable to live in the real world
I wish I could stop: have my visions
I'm a sucker for: person who will actually listen to me
The worst part of my life is: When I was attacked by the kids at school.
I want to teach my children that: Someone who was different, can still be the same if you give them the change
A good time for me is: when I am lost in a book.
The worst advice that my father gave me was: Everything works out for the better.
I though I was grown up when: I don't know when I grew up...
When I feel sorry for myself I: hear my parents tell how they really feel about me.
Nobody would believe my if they saw me: reading, to them I am to young.
My friends like me because: I have no friends...
My per peeve is: People who judge me before they knew me
My major accomplishment: Getting my father to somewhat understand me
I can die happy when: They find out why I have these visions
I'd really rather: sit alone and read
My most humbling experience was:Talking to my dad like I was a person for the first time.

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User ImageName: Valada(va-lay-day)
Age 15
Height: five feet one inch
Weight: Eighty pounds
Birth Date: Unknown
Hair: Curly brown hair. Her bangs parted on the left side and the same length as her hair
Eyes: very wide pale blueish gray
Tekteks: X.X.X.
Birthplace: ohio
Other facial features/other appearance details: She has a small scar on her right cheek right below her ear.
DRESS (Style, colors): When she was on the streets she rarely wear shoes, her cloths were dirty as was she and her dress was always torn, she usually wore a long cloat, that was far to long and big for her
If she wasn’t on the street she wears almost anything. She likes simple things and hardly does anything to her hair other than brush it.
Description of home: No home
Dominant character trait: Not trusting anyone,
Secondary character trait; judging people by first impression
Personality: Valada doesn't listen to anyone, in the harsh world around her she isn't about to allow anyone to help her. She has strong pride. She will do anything for her family.
Best friend: none
Other friends: none
Enemies and why: anyone
Family: her mother and father little sister and little brother.
What kind of person is character with others: She can be stubby, and rude, she always is questioning everything anyone does for her.
Sees self as: I am a leader, not a follower, I step to my own beat.
Is seen by others as: as hard headed, stubborn person
Sense of humor: Always says the wrong thing at the wrong time.
Temper: she gets mad easily, her usually ignores people, but if bothered enough she will go off.
Basic nature: To protect self and people she cares about at all cost
Ambitions: To stop this fighting and get the world back to what it should have been
Educational background: She had to drop out of school in eight grade because her family couldn’t afford it
Work experience: None
Philosophy of life: do onto others as others done to you
Habits: Humming to self, yelling at people who don’t deserve it.
Talents: I don’t believe I have any talents.
Hobbies/pasttimes: Day dreaming, taking my family for granted.
Choice of entertainments: writing
What trait will make character come alive?: Her attitude and her past
Why is character likeable: She is going through a hard struggle that many couldn’t imagine
Why is character loveable: the way she cares about people even after all the crap
Book: Welcome to my fight
PERSONAL INTERVIEW WITH CHARACTER
Occupation: None
Current home: where haven’t I lived?
Marital status: Single
Children: of course not
Favorite pig out food: Really in my state I would eat about anything.
Nobody knows I am: actually afraid to die
I wish I could stop: regretting the past
I'm a sucker for: cakes
The worst part of my life is: well what hasn’t been bad… I guess anything after being in eight grade
I want to teach my children that: That the world is what you make it, not what it makes you
A good time for me is: Just being safe around people who love me
The worst advice that my father gave me was: It may not happen in our time, but the world will turn around
I though I was grown up when: I was attacked by a dog
When I feel sorry for myself I: I take it out on others
Nobody would believe my if they saw me: trying to fight… so bad
My friends like me because: I am not exactly sure
My per peeve is: when people try to make me feel better, I push them awya
My major accomplishment: I have nonw
I can die happy when: When the world is back to what my father knew when he was a child
I'd really rather: have a quiet thanks giving dinner with my whole family so I can say what I am thankful for
My most humbling experience was: I have no clue… so many memories.

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User ImageName: Violet Devero
Age Over 500 years old.
Height: five feet three inches
Weight: one hundred five pounds
Birth Date: July twenty
Hair: Slat black curly hair. Very long hair
Eyes: Wide red eyes.
Tekteks: X.X.X.X.
Birthplace: Other
Other facial features/other appearance details: pale completion.
DRESS (Style, colors): She lights tight elegant old styles clothing. She loves silk and the colors blue, red, purple and black.
Description of home: Used to live in a lush farm land, but now travels.
Dominant character trait: Childish
Secondary character trait; Seems evil
Personality: Violet is a seductive being, she acts like a child most of the time, but enjoys watching others in pain. She loves to trick people, mostly men and lives just to see blood.
Best friend: Doesn’t have one
Other friends: Tries to say away from them
Enemies and why: Vince, her used to be vampire husband. He abused her and kept her hidden away for years.
Family: All of her family is dead.
What kind of person is character with others: She is very hateful and cold to people she doesn’t like or knw
Sees self as: A blood sucking monster, but loves it.
Is seen by others as:A very childish devil
Sense of humor: She finds others pain funny
Temper: she doesn’t get made easily, because she takes everything as a joke.
Basic nature: Kill or be killed.
Ambitions: To get away from Vince and start a new life.
Educational background: She lived in a time when woman were not allowed to work.
Work experience: farmer
Philosophy of life: Nothing matters when you live fore
Habits: Day dreaming, getting off topic, forgetting names.
Talents: Tricking men
Hobbies/pasttimes: Sex and torture.
Choice of entertainments: Parties and clubs.
What trait will make character come alive?: her background and how she sees life.
Why is character likeable: She is evil, yet also is trying to act human.
Why is character loveable: She is completely opposite of what most people would think of a main character.
Book: Violet Devero
PERSONAL INTERVIEW WITH CHARACTER
Occupation: none
Current home: anywhere
Marital status: Single
Children: of course not
Favorite pig out food: Blood
Nobody knows I am:[/b Terrified of death and my own blood.
I wish I could stop: killing
I'm a sucker for: good smelling blood.
The worst part of my life is: When I was locked in the dungeon and tortured all hours.
I want to teach my children that: You should get to know someone before you marry them.
A good time for me is: when I am drinking the blood of a man I just seduced.
The worst advice that my father gave me was: Most marriages do not work, arranged ones usually last a lot longer.
I though I was grown up when: I met Vince
When I feel sorry for myself I: Kill someone and got to parties.
Nobody would believe me if they saw me: Smiling or crying
My friends like me because: I have no friends.
My per peeve is: Hearing people say well anything.
My major accomplishment: leaving Vince
I can die happy when: Vince is dead.
I'd really rather: have died then become a vampire.
My most humbling experience was: Before I was married.

11linda


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:01 am


I love seeing how you have mapped them out. Personally I can't start a story if I haven't planned out a character in detail.

Are they all from the same story?
PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:02 am


DesertRoseFallen
I love seeing how you have mapped them out. Personally I can't start a story if I haven't planned out a character in detail.

Are they all from the same story?

No, there is a link to what story they are from, I am still working on them, I mean the story and the characters. I don't map anything out I allow all my plans to sit in my head, it may not be the best way to do things, but it works for me. I am slowly adding more.

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