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 Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 2:17 pm
It's good, I just havn't been able to read it all yet. I like how you did the first entry, it made me want to read more.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:41 pm
Silriel It's good, I just havn't been able to read it all yet. I like how you did the first entry, it made me want to read more. tanku, tanku. Your comment is appreciated. Anything you can think of that I need to work on? I'm thinking I need more description...
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 11:15 pm
Description is good, just don't overkill with it. That's what I did in one of my earlier drafts of my story, I had a lot of description, and even I found it a bit boreing when I re read it. I have a great place that helps you figure out the good balance of description and other things. Here's a link, it's called: FARP : The Deception of DescriptionHope that helps a bit. I don't think you need more description, from what I read, though if you've just read any of Robert Jordan's books, you may think so... wink
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 11:21 pm
Oh, and another thing, if you really want people to comment on your stuff, comment on theirs. I don't know about every one else, but if some one comments on my stuff, I am sure to, at one point or another, comment on theirs.
Just a little thing I noticed.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 4:09 pm
Silriel Description is good, just don't overkill with it. That's what I did in one of my earlier drafts of my story, I had a lot of description, and even I found it a bit boreing when I re read it. I have a great place that helps you figure out the good balance of description and other things. Here's a link, it's called: FARP : The Deception of DescriptionHope that helps a bit. I don't think you need more description, from what I read, though if you've just read any of Robert Jordan's books, you may think so... wink YOU GO ON ELFWOOD! mrgreen I find references for pictures there sometimes.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 4:12 pm
Silriel Oh, and another thing, if you really want people to comment on your stuff, comment on theirs. I don't know about every one else, but if some one comments on my stuff, I am sure to, at one point or another, comment on theirs. Just a little thing I noticed. I do try and comment on people's work, there just aren't wnough hours in the day... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 5:03 pm
Ioji Silriel Description is good, just don't overkill with it. That's what I did in one of my earlier drafts of my story, I had a lot of description, and even I found it a bit boreing when I re read it. I have a great place that helps you figure out the good balance of description and other things. Here's a link, it's called: FARP : The Deception of DescriptionHope that helps a bit. I don't think you need more description, from what I read, though if you've just read any of Robert Jordan's books, you may think so... wink YOU GO ON ELFWOOD! mrgreen I find references for pictures there sometimes. Yes mrgreen I have a page there mrgreen But I havn't been able to upload new stuff for the longest time... and people don't go there as much sad
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 5:05 pm
Ioji Silriel Oh, and another thing, if you really want people to comment on your stuff, comment on theirs. I don't know about every one else, but if some one comments on my stuff, I am sure to, at one point or another, comment on theirs. Just a little thing I noticed. I do try and comment on people's work, there just aren't wnough hours in the day... sweatdrop Yeah, I know the feeling...
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 6:00 pm
Silriel Ioji Silriel Description is good, just don't overkill with it. That's what I did in one of my earlier drafts of my story, I had a lot of description, and even I found it a bit boreing when I re read it. I have a great place that helps you figure out the good balance of description and other things. Here's a link, it's called: FARP : The Deception of DescriptionHope that helps a bit. I don't think you need more description, from what I read, though if you've just read any of Robert Jordan's books, you may think so... wink YOU GO ON ELFWOOD! mrgreen I find references for pictures there sometimes. Yes mrgreen I have a page there mrgreen But I havn't been able to upload new stuff for the longest time... and people don't go there as much sad I love the mother and baby picture. You're very talented. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:05 pm
Ioji Silriel Ioji Silriel Description is good, just don't overkill with it. That's what I did in one of my earlier drafts of my story, I had a lot of description, and even I found it a bit boreing when I re read it. I have a great place that helps you figure out the good balance of description and other things. Here's a link, it's called: FARP : The Deception of DescriptionHope that helps a bit. I don't think you need more description, from what I read, though if you've just read any of Robert Jordan's books, you may think so... wink YOU GO ON ELFWOOD! mrgreen I find references for pictures there sometimes. Yes mrgreen I have a page there mrgreen But I havn't been able to upload new stuff for the longest time... and people don't go there as much sad I love the mother and baby picture. You're very talented. 3nodding *blushes* thank you 4laugh
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