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 Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:15 pm
The souls from last night fall from the sky,
And all I wanted was to spread my wings and fly.
Though I can't, I must sit and wait,
Since the souls were falling far too late.
Closing my eyes with a visual of you,
I want to visit the memories we've went through.
Full with hope, my heart overwhelmed, my fingers crossed,
I feel as if you were the greatest mistake ever caused.
The oceans in my heart becomes higher,
With every fallen soul from earlier.
Your eyes look through my soul without hesitation,
And you look in the right destination,
To find every fallen and broken soul in my ocean,
And with your eyes, every single one of them will mend.
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:46 pm
"The souls from last night..." I wasn't to sure how that fit into the poem but other wise this poem was understandable and very mysterious in a good and clear way. ^_^
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 3:19 pm
LunarHybrid "The souls from last night..." I wasn't to sure how that fit into the poem but other wise this poem was understandable and very mysterious in a good and clear way. ^_^ Well I wanted people to think I was talking about souls, but I am talking about memories. Every soul contains a memory of some kind and I decided that would be a great idea. It's basically an ocean full of memories, but souls contain more than just one memory. ^.^ I hope that helped to tell you what I was aiming at.
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:15 pm
ToushirouLover_8701 LunarHybrid "The souls from last night..." I wasn't to sure how that fit into the poem but other wise this poem was understandable and very mysterious in a good and clear way. ^_^ Well I wanted people to think I was talking about souls, but I am talking about memories. Every soul contains a memory of some kind and I decided that would be a great idea. It's basically an ocean full of memories, but souls contain more than just one memory. ^.^ I hope that helped to tell you what I was aiming at. Thats definatly a unique way of going about that. I like it.
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