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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:47 am


So yeah. . . I've been working on a Pokemon Fan-Fic recently, I post it on my DeviantArt page, but I want to share it here with you guys, so here goes.

Ch 1. Ominous winds


A Journey to end all Journeys, a young boy’s life will transcend the events that may lead into an understanding of the two races or to the destruction of the world. His actions will be based upon the bond of his Pokemon, the understanding of his ways, and how the he deals with events, his way. What will happen to the world, will it usher a new age in the Pokemon world, or be torn to war between Humans and Pokemon? Only the wind knows, as the winds began to whistle through the air, a story is told, the legendary “King of the Skies.”

On a windy morning, the sun began to rise up on the town that is New Bark, soon enough the Pidgeys who claimed the area began to chirp to greet the dawn; feeling grateful that the morning sun began to share it's warmth and light to the Pokemon world, of course that's no difference to a young boy with yellow hair who gazed upon the Sun at the second-story balcony of his house. The boy's name is Inorokashi Kaze; however people are known to call him Czar, because that's what his parents and his Older sister nick-named him, he didn't seem to mind however, in fact he prefers to be called Czar, rather then Inorokashi. Czar's a 10 year old boy with a strong passion to explore the world; it was his dream to start the Journey that every 10 year old goes through, they take the Pokemon League challenge, in hopes of becoming the champion of that Region. Today's the Day, the day that I leave my life at home and become a trainer. I've been waiting this day for so long, I can't wait! When that clock strikes ten I'm going to head towards the lab and get my first Pokemon! Gee I hope Prof. Elm still has that Cyndaquil. He thought.

Czar looked at the sun and began to stretch; he was too excited about today that he didn't get any sleep. Looking at his right, he noticed his yellow sweater hanging, when he touched the left arm it was dry. With the wind blowing and the sun still not high enough, it was a little cold from where he's standing; considering he's only wearing a green shirt and short brown pants. Well Time to head off now; it's almost ten. Upon grabbing the yellow sweater and placed it on his body, Czar quickly exited his room and into the hallway. Looking around he stopped at waited for around to see if anyone is around; Czar remembered that when wasn't aware of his surroundings and he walked around the hallway, he was smashed by an open door, I better watch out this time. Czar slowly walked across the hallway; paying attention of the doors. With his room, her sister's room, his parents' room, and three additional guest rooms he wondered why would he ever need a house this big, it's amazing how we were able to afford this house, I mean I shouldn't complain, but I when I get going, I don't want to spend my family's money; I'm going to win it from trainers and Gym leaders, It's weird really, every time a trainer wins they earn money in winnings from the loser, how is that possible? I mean sure it's for sport and power, but why would a rich boy give around five-thousand Poke to the winner? It's mind-boggling really. I mean is it even legal? and why am I thinking of things like these? I shouldn't worry about these things anyways, they are meant to support me and nothing else so I shouldn't say it to the trainers. Czar wasn't paying attention just like last time and was whacked by a door for the second time Aw. . . Not again,

"Ah, Oh no, Are you alright Little Brother?!" Czar looked at his sister with one eye opened. He saw a girl at the age of thirteen with Red long hair, and Red eyes, her attire consists of a Traditional Japanese Hakama; a white top and a red bottom. Looking at her Czar replied; "I'm fine Rita, but good job on the timing. . ." After hearing what Czar said, Rita couldn't hurt but smile as she stuck out her hand. "Come on little brother, up on your feet, lets go." Czar grabbed Rita's hand as she pulled her straight back up, then nodding together both of them descended down the stairs as they began to engage in conversation. "So . . . where are mother and father?" He asked. "Well, Mother's in Snowpoint City; getting ready to leave while your Father's downstairs in the basement working on a invention as usual." Rita said with a sigh, "Well breakfast is ready, come on, let's go and eat." Rita said with a smile, however Czar shook his head; he had other plans. "Sorry, but I have to go somewhere." Rita was shocked at Czar's words; normally when breakfast is announced, Czar would run down the stairs and gotten a plateful of food. "You know why right? Today's the day I turn ten and I'm not going to miss out on grabbing my first Pokemon. Just pack me a plate and I'll go and meet your at the usual spot." Czar ran towards the door just before facing Rita; He placed two fingers together on the same hand as he placed it on his forehead and moved it away from his forehead; saying goodbye as he stepped out the front door, grabbed his shoes and running towards Prof, Elm's Lab. Looking at Czar running off, Rita couldn't help but sigh as she smiled. Czar. . . I know you're all excited really, but you shouldn't rush things, there are something's more important then your goals, but I kind of wished that I had your spirit. . .

While moving towards Prof Elm's Lab, Czar began to walk out of shortness of breath, he took a good look around as he noticed the small town was quiet; probably because of people either wake up later then ten in the morning, or the fact that the children left their homes to start an adventure, then he looked up the sky and began to dream about where his adventure will take him. Who will he meet, what path will he take, and more importantly, will he meet the beings that will accompany him: Human and Pokemon? After shaking his head he ended up in front of Prof. Elm's Lab, looking through the windows he noticed Prof. Elm looking through notes and talking to his colleagues. When he proceeded through the doors, it was locked as his face smacked the door. Taking a step back, Prof Elm, ran towards the door and opened it; the doors slid open. "Ah. . . Czar, I didn't expect to see you so. . . Soon," Prof. Elm told Czar. "Um. . . Listen there's something I should tell you. . ." Czar walked through the doors and entered the Labs. Then he turned to the Prof and said. "Don't worry Professor, I know the Routine, I'm just here to pick up a Pokemon." Czar found three Pokeballs in a glass chamber upon passing through the scientists talking. When he walked towards it the glass chamber opened up as Czar picked up a Pokeball. "Alight come out Cyndaquil!" Czar opened up the Pokeball; hoping for a white beam to fire off, however nothing appeared. "Okay. . . Never mind, Alright then Tododile I choose you!" Czar dropped the next Pokeball and picked up another one, it opened up but no white beam fired off. "What the, I guess I have no other choice. . . Chikorita you're my new partner!" When Czar picked up the last Pokeball the same thing happened; it opened up but no laser. "What the. . . Hey Professor what gives? Why is there no Pokemon inside these Pokeballs?" Czar was annoyed. Prof. Elm sighed and moved his glasses up using his middle finger. "That's what I was going to tell you, there was a Major break-in; someone stole a Chikorita, a Tododile, and very important research papers, I was going to tell you, but you moved in too quickly." Prof. Elm Explained. "Oh. . . Wait, what happened to the Cyndaquil then?" Czar asked him. "Oh. . . That one is reserved for my Fiend, he was going to give it to someone for his birthday, don't tell anybody about this, but he told me that he spent too much time in the labs that he so forgot about his son's birthday, thank goodness his wife told him the day before and made the arrangement." At first Czar sighed, but once hearing Prof Elm said about the son's father about spending too much time in the labs that he forgot his son's birthday, he did the faintest of smiles; he knew who that is. "Oh I see, well thanks for telling me Prof Elm. I'll be going now, oh and if I see the culprit I and Rita will set him or her straight." With that he did a goodbye wave as he exited the Prof's Laboratory.

Once leaving the area, he looked around and sighed; he began to think about the person who would do such a thing as breaking and entering followed by theft. At first though he began to think of a common burglar or a thief would do the deed, but he scrapped that Idea as he began to think about the events that caused him not to have his Pokemon. Why would someone steal Pokemon at their lowest state and boring research papers? If I was the thief I would of steal the Pokemon healing machine that thing is nice, and not to mention I would steal the laptops they have, could of made some serious cash, why just low level Pokemon and research papers? I'll never understand the thieves in charge of theft. Czar ignored the event that happened and remembered that he should probably meet up with Rita, Czar walked away from the Lab and began to walk back towards his house, however he went behind his house and began to climb up a shadowed walk way covered with leaves that fell from the grand tress up above. After a long but not so step climb he ended up at a Torii, (Japanese Gate) he passed through and saw a small shrine located in the middle of the area; surrounded by a body of water; similar of that to the dragon's den. Once sitting down on a wooden bench close to the gate as he waited for his sister to come up. From there he felt the wind blowing calmly but slow. Hearing the wind whistling in the air, Czar closed his eyes as he began to hear the whistle. When I start my adventure I hope that a strong tail wind will blow for me; signaling that the world wants me to start my adventure. . . I can't wait, once I get my Pokemon, I'll be sure to spread my spirit to others. "You hear me! My name's Czar Inorokashi Kaze and when my start my journey, I'm going to be the greatest trainer out there!" he shouted in the air; causing many Pidgeys to fly away from the area, that's when Czar heard a small Giggle in the area.

"Ah Czar. . . You never stop talking to yourself now do you?" Rita passed by the gate and faced Czar; carrying a broom. "But then again you always wanted someone to hear you and your words, and your voice." Rita laughed a bit; smacking Czar slightly with her broom. "Rita," Czar rubbed the spot where he was smacked. "I didn't expect to see you here alone; lately you always appear here with your boyfriend." Czar said with a smirk on his face as Rita blushed profoundly. "Hey he's not my boyfriend! He's my partner!" Rita blurted out. "Right . . . then how come when we entered your house you kissed me on the cheek?" a voice caught her there as she was silent, causing Czar to laugh at Rita. "Don't worry, I won't tell anyone." A Figure of a Charizard covered the rising sun as the Charizard descended, showing a boy at fourteen with Blue hair and eyes while wearing a blue vest over a white shirt and blue jeans, he saw the two as he gave off a smile at Rita and a nod towards Czar. When he stepped off of the Charizard, Czar looked at him as he said. "Ah, Alex how goes everything?" Czar asked him; wondering about his adventures. Alex nodded to Czar as he said to him, "Great, It was fun traveling the world, but I missed my favorite friends; you two." Alex laughed as he moved close to Czar giving him a High five and a little kiss on Rita's Cheek; causing her to blush slightly. "So Czar, I heard you're turning ten today, is that right?" Alex asked him, as he nodded with excitement, "Yeah I am turning ten, and by the time this day ends, I'm going to start my journey tomorrow and from there, I'm going to the live the adventures just like you Alex." He smiled at him while he smiled back. "Awesome, just make sure you don't get too hot-headed now, okay?" Alex shook Czar's hair, all of a sudden he heard a strange growl coming from the area; behind Alex and Czar, looking behind they saw a big Arcanine jumping from the forest; causing them both to panic and scream, a large thud can be heard as all of the Pidgeys who returned to the trees flew off again. Rita turned around and saw the two boys under an Arcanine, causing Rita to Laugh, "Aw. . . Mr.Tadakichi missed you guys." Rita said; smiling. "Uh. . . That's great . . . Rita can you get him off of us please? He's kind of heavy. . ." Czar asked her,

"Mr. Tadakichi, please get off of my friends." The Arcanine nodded as he got off of them, then facing Czar the Arcanine licked his face, as he did it to Alex next, "Aw. . . I missed you hot, strong, and fluffy." Alex said; hugging the Arcanine, however when he took a whiff of him he threw up a bit in his mouth and swallowed. "Ugh. . . Guys I think Fluffy needs a bath." Alex told Rita and Czar, looking at Mr. Tadakichi they both nodded as they began to direct him towards a pond where He jumped in; wetting Alex & Czar, Rita stood far away, Alex and Czar shook off the moisture as Rita gave them a Bucket, soap and a couple of towels. For the next hour, the trio began to clean Mr. Tadakichi while Alex's Charizard stood in front of the Shrine and began to pray; paying respects for the spirits. While washing Mr. Tadakichi Czar asked Alex about his Charizard, "So. . . I was wondering, did you nick-named your Charizard?" Czar asked him. "What you mean Alex the 2nd?" Alex told Czar; causing him, Rita, and Tadakichi to star at him, "What. . . I was eight when I Received him okay? He sort of found me when I was washed up to shore." Alex told Czar, Rita, and Mr. Tadakichi. "Ah that's right; we found you washed up shore when you were only eight years old. . . My parents took you in and we cared for you like if you were one of us. . ." Alex looked at the opening that faced the ocean as he told them the same story he told to Czar's Parents. "Yeah. . . That's it, apparently I was only eight at the time; I don't remember where I came from, who were my parents, or why was I lying here. The only things I remember were my Name, the Region of Johto, the Whirl Islands, how there are two Lugias in the world, and of course my first Pokemon over there/" He pointed at Alex the 2nd. "Since then the rest of my memories were of you guys and my journeys across the world." Alex finished explaining as Czar spoke up. "Well we're glad that we found you, after all we wouldn't leave a stranded child in the middle of Cianwood City. Just remember one thing, no matter where you go or what will happen to you, you should always remember one thing: Home is what you make it," Hearing what Czar said Rita finished up. ". . . And you made our home, your home, also never forget Alex: I'll be right by your side, always. . ." Rita said to Alex as he smiled and gave her a hug. "Right, I also remembered something. When I started my journey at the age of eleven you were my partner Rita, sure those years went by quickly, but in the end it was all worthwhile." When Czar looked at Rita and Alex hugging, Czar couldn't help but smiled at them both, like they were meant for each other. When Czar finished up cleaning Mr. Tadakichi, he shook around getting the wetness off of him, soon after all that he fluffed up pretty quickly, causing Czar to Laugh. "You know what, when we get home we have got to take care of your mane and Fur." Mr.Tadakichi nodded as he got out of the water and began to walk towards the exit, not before sensing danger in the midst,

"Mr. Tadakichi?" Czar was worried as something's going to happen as the Arcanine's fangs began to spark with fire. "Rita, Alex?" he called them both as they stopped hugging and moved close to Czar's Location, "What's wrong Czar?" Alex and Rita asked Czar. "I don't know but-"That's when the trio saw a huge Venusaur and a Tropius blocking their path, Czar hid behind the pair as the two nodded to each other "Alexthe2nd Stand by me!" Alex called his Charizard as he stood in front of Alex. "Mr. Tadakichi let's go!" the Arcanine nodded and stood in front of Rita, the pair nodded as Rita told Czar. "Stay back, little Brother; we'll handle the two." Alex added in saying, "You get somewhere safe now okay?" Czar nodded as he hid behind the shrine. He looked at the two Pokemon that stood their way and the two people that began to order the two Pokemon. From there he heard a voice in his head. Don't fear; your sister and your friend will protect you, if both of them should fall in combat, I will take over while you three get out of here. Then Alex and Rita heard the same voice that of which Czar heard in his head. Never Judge the personality of Czar. . . Even though he's defenseless and weak, not to mention impatient and rash, his true colors will come in time. . . Until then protect him with all of your might; that boy might determine the outcome of the results between both Humans and Pokemon. The Tropius and Venusaur opened the battle using Razor leaf and Air slash while Mr. Tadakichi used Extreme speed and Alexthe2nd used Heat wave. While the battle began to unravel, Czar could hear sounds of a struggle as he hid from sight. "Alex. . . Rita. . . Good luck."


The battle raged on. . . Who will be the Victors and just who is that mysterious voice? The winds stopped blowing, but will resume to reveal more, in time. . .
PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:03 am


I LOVE IT!!!!!

Spikel Wolf


XGamerRichy

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:33 am


Well, it certainly is an impressive story and it is incredibly well written. However, there are a few improvements that I would like to point out:
1. There are some spelling/word mix ups. In the title I assume it is supposed to say 'yearns' but it says 'years'.
2. There are also some capitilizations where they are not needed, like 'Older sister' and some commas and other small grammatical errors are make.
3. At the start there is a lot of switching between the present and the past tense which although it can be worked into something that makes sense, the two do not work well together and towards the beginning you slip in and out of present tense which makes things confusing.
4. Please try and split up the speaking bits. In normal writing you're supposed to go to a new line each time a new character speaks just to make things easier to understand. In this, you block all of the speech together and I cannot physically tell who is supposed to be speaking.

Apart from these issues, the story is excellent. I feel intrigued in all of the characters, the pacing is fantastic and it is clear that you care about these characters.

Just, try and fix those problems, because they do take away from the enjoyment.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:55 am


XGamerRichy
Well, it certainly is an impressive story and it is incredibly well written. However, there are a few improvements that I would like to point out:
1. There are some spelling/word mix ups. In the title I assume it is supposed to say 'yearns' but it says 'years'.
2. There are also some capitilizations where they are not needed, like 'Older sister' and some commas and other small grammatical errors are make.
3. At the start there is a lot of switching between the present and the past tense which although it can be worked into something that makes sense, the two do not work well together and towards the beginning you slip in and out of present tense which makes things confusing.
4. Please try and split up the speaking bits. In normal writing you're supposed to go to a new line each time a new character speaks just to make things easier to understand. In this, you block all of the speech together and I cannot physically tell who is supposed to be speaking.

Apart from these issues, the story is excellent. I feel intrigued in all of the characters, the pacing is fantastic and it is clear that you care about these characters.

Just, try and fix those problems, because they do take away from the enjoyment.


Yeah I'll remember that, Ch.2 is done and I'm going to take a look through it before posting. Anyways thanks for the review: I Appreciate it.

blue-alien


Spikel Wolf

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:03 am


put it up!!!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:10 am


Hold up, let me fix it a bit, till then you can check it out at my deviant page:

Search for Czar-Ino-Kaze

blue-alien


Spikel Wolf

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:25 am


put the URL
PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:51 am



blue-alien


blue-alien

PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 3:08 am


Right, Here's Chapter two: the Gaia-Friendly Version Hopefully, I'm going to take a short break before starting chapter three, till then, enjoy reading the battle leading to one of Czar's main traits as a human. Also I learned a lesson: Never write a story at 12 in the morning:

I'll Be highlighting the Conversations in different Colors so it's better to read.

Czar Inorokashi Kaze
Rita Kaze
Alex
Mysterious Voice
Rocket Grunts
Thoughts/Mind connects

Ch.2 The Tailwind begins to blow.


Two mysterious trainers suddenly appeared from the shadows; holding a Tropius and a Venusaur. Alex and Rita entered the Battle with an Arcanine and a Charizard as they were challenged by the two when the two Pokemon launched attacks against the trio. Czar hid from sight as he watched the battle from behind the Shrine, as the battle raged on, Czar can feel a sense of worry as he wanted to help. But with no Pokemon in hand how can Czar help his friend and sister? The burning spirit Czar had begins to diminish Will his adventurous spirit be distinguished even before his adventures begin, or will it burn even brighter then before. . .

"Alexthe2nd use Protect, defend Tadakichi!" Alex yelled out to his Charizard, "Mr. Tadakichi, get behind Alexthe2nd and use Agility, let's go!" Rita yelled out as well, the two looked at their trainers and nodded. Once seeing a Barrage of Razor leaves heading their way, Alexthe2nd stood in front of the Arcanine, seeing the attacks coming in Alexthe2nd's claws began to glow green. Then when he placed them on the ground, a green protective barrier began to form where the Charizard placed his claws. As the razor leaves hit the shield and the leaves were sent in multiple directions Tadakichi closed his eyes and began to relax his body, once the attacks ended Alex told his Pokemon.

"Alright then, Alexthe2nd, charge at the Venusaur," the Charizard looked ahead and nodded, first he began to walk, then the walk soon turned to a run, finally with his wings opened he began to charge at the Venusaur, The Venusaur and his trainer laughed as he commanded the Pokemon to charge up and use Solar beam as the plant of the Venusaur's back began to collect sunlight, once fully charged the Venusaur lowered his front legs and lifted his back legs; the plant was aiming directly towards the Charizard charging right towards him, once at close distance Alex then responded: "Air Brake and fly up!" The Charizard stopped to a halt at close range and flew upwards. "Good, now use Air slash!" The Charizard did a flip in the air and slashed at it; sending multiple crescent air waves at the Venusaur; causing him to move in pain, because of movement the Venusaur fired a beam towards the shrine,

"Oh no, Czar, Tadakichi, please save my brother!" The Arcanine watched as the beam was heading towards the shrine. With a nod the Arcanine took off as he began to hop on the stepping stones around the waters surrounding the shrine. Once close to the shrine he picked up Czar using his mouth as Czar's yellow sweater was caught between his fangs. "Thanks Mr. Tadakichi, you saved me," With a polite nod, the Arcanine lifted his hand and caught Czar on his back. Looking back, Czar saw the Damage done by the solar beam; the shrine was beyond repair as it was completely demolished. Oh . . . the spirits are going to be angry . . . then moving close to Rita, Czar disembarked Tadakichi as Rita told Czar,

"Listen Czar, get out of here. Call father and tell him that we're in danger and we need some help fighting these people," Czar shook his head as he said, "No, I want to stay here. . . I know I can help some how." Rita sighed; admiring his spirit, however he needs to know that his determination means nothing if he doesn't have anything to back up that. "No you have to go. How can you help us in this situation; you have no Pokemon, from this case you'll be a complication rather then an asset." Czar looked down as he heard Rita telling him that he was a complication at this point. "Don't worry about us; we'll be fine, just get Father here now!" Czar looked at Rita for a second and nodded, "Okay. . . Stay safe, big sis. . ." and with that, Czar nodded as he left the scene to get his Father.

Then facing the battle scene, Rita saw Alex and his Charizard took out the Venusaur after a few Air Slashes and Flamethrowers, Rita looked at the Tropius flying about, Rita looked at the environment they're standing on as Rita formed a plan. "Tadakichi, Use extreme speed; see if you can catch the Tropius," Rita told Tadakichi. The Arcanine began to run at standard speed, then using extreme speed, Tadakichi began to leave a white trail and an afterimage as he jumped in the air, once in close distance Rita yelled out. "Use Fire fang and Latch on to Tropius's wing!" Tadakichi's Fangs began to spark and fire was enveloped around his teeth, then seeing the wings of Tropius, he bit on them; causing Tropius to shriek in pain, "Alright! Finally, use Take down!" the fangs were still sparking as Tadakichi moved his head upwards and used his Body weight to take the Tropius back to the earth; causing a small crater to be formed and dust to fly off in all directions.

After a few seconds of Silence, Tadakichi appeared from the smoke and returned to Rita's side. Rita took a deep breath as she was relieved that her Pokemon friend is okay. After a few seconds of silence they waited as the smoke cleared up. Looking down at the Crater, Alex and Rita saw a Tropius with dazed eyes, then looking over at the Venusaur and the Tropius; defeated, Rita and Alex looked at each other as they shared a smile while Alexthe2nd began to flex while Tadakichi wagged his tail in delight. "Just like old times," Alex told Rita; holding her hand closely. "Yeah. . ."

After dusting themselves off and looking at the sky, they began to wonder: just who are those people, where did they come from, and more importantly just what are the people who fought Alex and Rita after. Then coming from a distance, a thunderbolt struck from the shadows, Alex shoved Rita aside and took the thunderbolt. Once seeing what's going on, Rita looked up and saw her partner being electrocuted. Gasping in horror Rita didn't know what to do. "No. . . Alex!" After the thunderbolt ended, Alex collapsed on the floor as small electric bolts began to dance around his body causing him to twitch a little, "Hang on Alex I'm going to get some help!" Then in the air Rita began to notice an orange substance in the air, ". . . Stun spore . . ." Rita covered her mouth and nose as he saw Tadakichi and Alexthe2nd breathing in the spore as they fell on the floor; paralyzed. . . At one last moment before losing total consciousness Rita blurted out. . . "Czar. . ."

When Czar returned back to his house he used the spare key under the welcome mat and opened the door. There he looked around his house for his father. He looked in his room, his lab, even the kitchen, he wasn't around. "Father, Are you home?!" Czar yelled out. He waited patiently for a reply, but no one answered. "Come on father; don't leave me like this. . . " Czar needed to find him fast as he began to fear for his Sister and his Friend. That's when he saw a note from his father; he read it and sighed as he palmed his face. "I'm out to get groceries be back soon Love Dad, PS. don't call me; my Pokenav's on the fritz, geez father sure knows how to pick the wrong times to disappear. . ." Czar said out loud as he locked the door and hid the key under the welcome mat. Then he looked at the area where the battle's being fought as he began to worry that something bad is happening. Czar wanted to help, but in the current state he's in, all he would do is interfere. . . "Rita. . . Alex. . ." He closed his eyes as tears began to fall. "I. . . Don't want to lose you. . ." That's when he heard that same voice in his head; the one he heard before.

Czar. . . Czar opened his eyes and looked around as he began to shake in fear, "W-Who's there?! Come on out and show yourselves!" He commanded as silence fell on deaf ears. You idiot, just because people said that in your current state you would be the problem rather then the help, doesn't mean you should turn your back on them. Then appearing behind Czar's house, a mysterious figure wearing a brown robe confronted Czar. I'm not your enemy, rather. . . I am your guiding light, the Figure lifted his right arm; not showing any parts of his body. Listen, I have been watching you a while back, and I'm surprised; even though you're an impatient fellow, you don't lack spirit. In fact, when I watched that little scene of you and your friends, your spirit shined the most out of them. I can see potential out of your young and fragile body. Once hearing the words of the figure Czar asked him. "Who are you, and how do you know me?" he asked the Figure as he continued speaking inside his head. My name is of no importance, nor is my physical body, now then, why are you not standing up for your friends and family: because you don't have a Pokemon, are you afraid of the bad men, or are you just afraid that you won't be of any help no matter what you do? Czar looked down and recalled the scene, sure he wanted to help, but he was called at the wrong time, he can't return just by himself; what can he do at a time like this. He wanted to return, but what can he offer as aid in the battle.

"I just want to protect my friends and family; however I can't fight, or order my Pokemon to battle since I don't have one. . ." Silence fell on deaf ears once more before the Figure replied: Even though you don't have a Pokemon. When they say you can't help; that your worthless in that situation, you should still get involved, who knows. . . Maybe you're the guiding light they need to escape the darkness. Czar heard the shadow figure's words as he looked down, then after a brief pause he told the figure. ". . . It's true, I shouldn't turn my back on them; even though they said that they can handle it, I shouldn't let my guard down," Czar faced the Figure as he placed his Right arm down. So, can you prove them wrong; can you help them even though in your current state is worthless as they said. Czar was silent, and after a long pause he told him,

"I can't prove them wrong," The figure moved his head down, he though that he would get through the boy, then Czar said In continuation: "I must prove them wrong, I'm going to save them; no matter how the odds are stacked against me, I will protect them." then looking at Czar the Figure nodded: Your spirit is strong and I can feel it's warmth, Fierce yet gentle, very well I shall help you, when you take your ascent up the hill my friend's guardians will help you trek the path of the dark so you can become the guiding light for your friends, now go; your friends need you. . . With that the figure disappeared into the night; leaving a white oddly shaped colored rock that resembled Arceus; the god of all Pokemon. Czar stared at the area where he stood and faced the setting sun.

"My spirit. . . Can it really help my friends? At any rate I shouldn't think about it. Alex and Rita, I'm coming." Then running towards the hill he looked up and saw the two mysterious figures tying up Alex and Rita while Alexthe2nd and Tadakichi were in cages. "Hey, you two, release my friends!" Czar ran up as he confronted the two mysterious people. "Oy, just who in the world is this kid?" one of the guys asked. "I don't know, boss told me about capturing a boy with Blue hair and a Girl with red hair while proclaiming some documents, Head Quarters never explained about some brat who thinks he can save his friends." The other person replied. "Well anyways, beat it Kid, we're on official Team Rocket Business and unless you back away and return to your other brats. . ." The Rocket Grunt called upon two Pokemon; a Togekiss and a Breloom "We're going to have to hurt ya." The Rocket Grunt said with a Smirk.

"Is that so. . ." Czar gave off a smirk as well. "Oh how the mighty Team Rocket has fallen; they would resort to hurting poor ten year-olds with no Pokemon just to complete your missions, well I guess they're right: Team Rocket's nothing more then bullies; only there's a network of them searching the globe." Czar said; laughing a bit; causing the Rocket Grunt to become enraged. "What did you say you little brat?" The Rocket Grunt was being taunted. "Never mind the kid; we have to complete the mission." The other Rocket Grunt told him. "No, he's making fun of Team Rocket, now listen here, Team Rocket is not some petty thief or a bully; we're going to create a world revolution and make this world for the better!" Czar looked at him with a exaggerated sighed. "Oh yeah; for the better you say, then where did you get the Togekiss; probably from some five-year old you took from." From there the Rocket Grunt was silent as Czar began to laugh. "What's this, the might Team Rocket, being burned by a ten year old? I thought you guys were stronger then that." The Rocket grunt was red in the face as he exploded: "Alright that's it! You ticked me off for the last time; I want you to fully paralyze the kid so much that he will never move again!" he ordered the Togekiss.

The Togekiss began to charge up a thunderbolt as he fired Directly at Czar, only to be blocked by a Garchomp wearing strange clothing. "What the. . ." The Rocket Grunt Saw the Garchomp's face as he began to tremble in fear, "Don't just stand there, help me out!" The Rocket Grunt nudged the other Rocket Grunt. "Err, right, Breloom get ready! Go and-" but before the Breloom could Act, the Garchomp stepped on the ground as the Breloom was sent in the air. "What the," Then in a flash, a white line appeared and slashed through the Breloom as well, when the Breloom landed back on the ground he had a hard time standing back up. "Who the," both Rocket Grunts were speechless, Czar looked at his right and saw a Black Charizard wearing a Hakama as he landed by the Garchomp's side, from the looks of it, those two Pokemon were that of which the Figure was talking about, wondering if he can, he asked the pair.

"Um . . . can you lend me your ears guys?" The two Pokemon looked at Czar with a smile on their faces, the Charizard began to move claw towards the battle; wanting to be controlled. "You mean it?! Can I?!" Czar was eager to battle. The Garchomp nodded as he looked at the Charizard, and back to Czar. "Thank you, I won't let you down guys!" The pair moved forward as Czar did as well, when they moved forward to the ruined shrine, Czar stood one of the Large Circles as the Garchomp did as well. The Charizard was flying in the air. Then sticking out his Right hand, a sword appeared as he firmly grasped it on his right hand. "Wow, cool sword, where did you get it, no, how did you get it?" Czar asked the Charizard. The Charizard pointed at the two Rocket Grunts; signaling Czar to focus on the battle first then ask questions later. "Right I should stay focus." Czar told the Charizard as he nodded. Right I can do this; I have seen many battles, watched my Friend Alex and my Sister Rita battled each other, and even made some of my own combination attacks using the attack dex I made, I should get through this battle no problem, "Do you hear me Rocket Scum! My name's Inorokashi, and I am here to protect my friends, and send you guys crying, now get ready; I'm challenging you two to a double battle!" Even though no one realizes it, Czar's Spirit begins to burn brightly through the darkness.

"J-J-J-Just who do you think you are; some Legendary Trainer?! Well we're not faltered by your Pokemon. We'll take you on, `Get ready to feel the true power of Team Rocket!" The two Grunts pointed at Czar as their two Pokemon ran towards the center of the ruined Shine. The first Grunt stepped on the Large Stone Circle opposite Side of Czar while the Second Grunt follow suit and stepped on the one beside him. "Oh I can feel it from right here, unfortunately it kind of reeks of Mediocrity and pain, followed by suffering and tears, gee I hope the rocket life wasn't that bad." Czar said with a laugh.

"Don't get cocky you little brat, besides, talk is for the weak, the strong survives by battling!" The Grunt told Czar, "Right. . . Ready when you are, Rocket Scum." Czar did a bow as he crossed his right leg to his. "Oh we're ready. Let's go!" the two Rocket scum sent their Pokemon to Czar as Czar's "Team" charged at the Rocket Grunt's Pokemon. My first battle, Gee it feel exhilarating; pitting against another person in a battle of wits, strength, and will power, "Alright, Charizard Use Air slash at the Breloom, Garchomp use Stone Edge, offensive positions let's go!" Czar ordered his team as his allies began to charge at the two Pokemon.

The Spirit of Czar begins to burn brightly as it slowly conquers the darkness. . .
PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:48 am


Righteo, that is definitely better than the first one as I can now tell who's speaking. It's still a little bit dodgy but it is better.

You do need to try and sort out adding in capitals where they aren't needed ( few seconds of Silence, used his Body weight etc). Attacks, names and so on can have capitals, but words like 'use' do not need to be capitalised unless it is preceded by a full stop (Which in most cases it wouldn't be, but meh.).

You also need to try and stop mixing up certain words like 'took' when you me 'take'.

Apart from that everything is brilliant. The story is engaging and the description is good, you just need to sort out those few discrepancies.

I look forward to seeing Chapter 3. biggrin

XGamerRichy


blue-alien

PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:57 pm


XGamerRichy
Righteo, that is definitely better than the first one as I can now tell who's speaking. It's still a little bit dodgy but it is better.

You do need to try and sort out adding in capitals where they aren't needed ( few seconds of Silence, used his Body weight etc). Attacks, names and so on can have capitals, but words like 'use' do not need to be capitalised unless it is preceded by a full stop (Which in most cases it wouldn't be, but meh.).

You also need to try and stop mixing up certain words like 'took' when you me 'take'.

Apart from that everything is brilliant. The story is engaging and the description is good, you just need to sort out those few discrepancies.

I look forward to seeing Chapter 3. biggrin


Yeah, it's a habit that I have to break.

anyways Thanks for reading:

I'll get Ch.3 Done, Edited, and post it later on.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:54 am


blue-alien
XGamerRichy
Righteo, that is definitely better than the first one as I can now tell who's speaking. It's still a little bit dodgy but it is better.

You do need to try and sort out adding in capitals where they aren't needed ( few seconds of Silence, used his Body weight etc). Attacks, names and so on can have capitals, but words like 'use' do not need to be capitalised unless it is preceded by a full stop (Which in most cases it wouldn't be, but meh.).

You also need to try and stop mixing up certain words like 'took' when you me 'take'.

Apart from that everything is brilliant. The story is engaging and the description is good, you just need to sort out those few discrepancies.

I look forward to seeing Chapter 3. biggrin


Yeah, it's a habit that I have to break.

anyways Thanks for reading:

I'll get Ch.3 Done, Edited, and post it later on.

My pleasure. I can't wait. biggrin

XGamerRichy


blue-alien

PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 3:27 am


Alright here it is: Ch.3

I'll edit this tomorrow right now I'm tired.

Ch. 3: The Legend Begins:


(Thanks to the words of a mysterious person who knew Czar’s name, the spirit of the boy was sparked again as it burned brightly once more. With his spirit lighting the darkness once more, Czar pursued the mysterious assailants that dared to mess with his sister and his friend. Upon reaching the site, Czar found out who were the mysterious people who attacked them: They were agents of Team Rocket, whose orders were to capture Alex and Rita, for what reasons Czar doesn’t know but in his heart, he would protect them, no matter how high the odds are stacked against him. After a lengthy conversation, the Rocket Grunt ordered a Pokemon to paralyze him, however a Garchomp wearing strange clothing appeared and took the thunder attack and shrugged it off like it was nothing, Shocked the Second Grunt tried to order his Pokemon to attack, but couldn’t thanks to a combination attacked initiated by the Garchomp using earth power: He sent the Pokemon up in the air and a Shiny Charizard; using aerial ace, sliced him through. Once the two Pokemon met, they turned to Czar as they were awaiting orders from the young boy. Eager to utilize his wits in battle, Czar stepped into a double battle against the two Rocket Grunts, Will Czar’s Burning spirit be enough to win? The legend of the king of the skies begins right here. . .)

“Charizard watch out for the Togekiss’s thunder attacks, Garchomp if any thunder attacks began to head towards your buddy be there to absorb the attacks.” Czar waved his right hand; commanding the two dragons, Charizard took the skies while Garchomp took the ground, Czar observed what’s going on in the field, nothing’s happening as of yet as the two began to order attacks, looking at the Togekiss and the Breloom, The Togekiss flew high in the air as the Breloom began to jump around the stones; heading towards the Garchomp. “Togekiss, Take that Charizard down using Thunder shock,” The First Rocket Grunt told his Togekiss as he looked at his other partner, “Breloom use Sky uppercut; show that Garchomp your Fierce strength!” The Second Rocket told his Breloom; doing an uppercut in the air, Czar looked at the Garchomp and the Charizard; wondering what he should do first, “Charizard, throw your sword down here, Garchomp jump and see if you can wet the sword,” The Garchomp doused his tail using the waters surrounding the shrine, and the Charizard threw his sword down to the ground. When the Garchomp saw the sword flung into the ground, he jumped up and moved his tail towards the sword; slightly coating it with water as the sword hits the ground. The Togekiss charged up fully and yelled out as a thunderbolt shot out from his body; the thunder attack shot right up and began to head towards the Charizard, however at the last second, the bolt bended as it nearly shocked the Charizard. The thunderbolt was re-directed towards the sword as it took the thunder attack. After the attack, Czar smirked as he asked the Garchomp. “Can you Dance?” The Garchomp nodded as he gave him a make-shift thumbs up. “Good grab the sword and use your dances.” The Garchomp moved forward and grabbed the sword, and then glowing Purple and White the Garchomp began to leave afterimages of him. Once gearing himself to go, Czar ordered the Garchomp. “Go and Charge!” Nodding he saw the Breloom and dodged the hit, “Fury Cutter!” Czar told the Garchomp. First in the air he sliced The Breloom with the sword as he left an afterimage of his slicing, “Again!” In succession he sliced him again, “Keep on going now!” the slices began to rapidly increase in power; leaving the Breloom hopeless to fight.

“Argh, will you do something? My Breloom’s taking hits like crazy!” The Second Rocket Grunt told the First. “Fine, Togekiss go and-“the Charizard stepped in and grabbed the Togekiss; leaving the First Rocket Grunt surprised, “Huh?!” Czar looked up in the air and so did the Garchomp; he stopped to take a breather. “Charizard cam you utilize Seismic toss?!” Czar asked, the Charizard began to fly in a circle at a slow pace, and then little by little, he picked up the pace as he began to fly faster then before, once at the optimum speed, Czar yelled out. “Do it!” The Charizard; once finished with a circle began to fly down at high speed, “Oy, what good will that do anyways? It won’t hurt that much,” The First Rocket Grunt told Czar; Togekiss was a flying type and the move was a fighting type, Czar knew the man he was right, but was that really the move? The Charizard grabbed the Togekiss by the left wing as he did a flip and tossed the Pokemon towards the ground, “Wait, what?!” The Garchomp was in place as he placed the sword on his back and crouched down, once at the right moment he did a black flip and slammed his tail at the Togekiss as he sent the Pokemon back in the air, the Charizard saw the Togekiss coming as he began to charge his punches, with an electrical current flowing through his arms, when the Togekiss was in close distance, the Charizard slammed the Togekiss hard as it began to fall down once more. The Breloom; getting back up slowly, wasn’t prepared for the Togekiss falling down as his body collided with his. A light explosion of dust and water flew off in the air as the Garchomp and the Charizard stood beside Czar. After the dust cleared off, a stone circle was in pieces. After a few seconds the Togekiss and the Breloom resurfaced with dazed eyes. “

No. . . It can’t be; that’s Impossible!” The Rocket Grunt was shocked at his loss. “But how, we got bested by a kid at ten, sure he had a Garchomp and a Charizard by his side, but the two just helped the kid; not knowing who the guy is as they completely obliterated our Pokemon!” Czar took a deep breath and sighed as he shook his head, “Well that was fun, now if you “Chumps excuse me. . .” Czar began to head towards the cages with Alexthe2nd, Mr. Tadakichi, Alex, and Rita. “Argh. . . I won’t get bested by a ten year old!” The First Rocket Grunt took out a Raichu and ordered a thunder attack at Czar, the attack flew, but the Garchomp absorbed the Attack, Czar looked behind him and saw the attack happening. This caused him to be enraged; if there’s one thing he hates about people is the fact that some of them can be sore winners or sore losers. “You dare attack me behind my back?!” Czar ordered the Garchomp to use Earth power to send the two Pokemon back to them in a hurtful way. “I was going to let you go nicely, but things changed, we’re going to let you go. . . In a bang!” From there, the two Pokemon began to charge up their strongest beam attacks as the two Rocket Grunts begin to tremble in fear. Once at their peak Czar unuttered these words. “And that my friend, is called a checkmate!” The Charizard and the Garchomp fired their attacks as they began to circle each other; soon the attacks became one as the Beam was magnified. Then after a couple of seconds, an explosion can be heard as the right-side of the hill they were on was engulfed in a white light, in the air the Two Rocket Grunts were flying in the air; holding their injured Pokemon as the First Rocket Grunt uttered out. “This isn’t over, you haven’t seen the last of me!” then a bright twinkle shot out as the pair disappeared from sight.

Czar looked up in the air and laughed as he shouted out to them. “Well good luck, because by then I’m going to be stronger then ever!” He pointed up in the air and laughed. After a few minutes, Czar faced the two Pokemon who helped him and shook their hands/claws; grateful for their assistance, as told them “Thank you very much, I thought that they’re going to take my Sister and My friend along with their Pokemon away. He smiled at them both as he looked over at the open area of the hill; from there the light from the moon can be seen reflecting off of the surface of the sea; lighting up the cliff edge of the area, “Well. . . I should be going now; my parents will be wondering where I’m at, you guys get back to your trainer, but before you do, can you cut the cages and release my friends and their Pokemon?” He asked the two as they nodded. For a few seconds the two Pokemon sliced the cages in half; releasing Tadakichi and Alexthe2nd. They focused on Alex and Rita as they cut the locks, after all that, Czar took one last look at the two Pokemon that helped him as he asked them. “Will I see you again?” Czar asked them, Musashi moved forward and hugged Czar as he placed his two claws on his shoulders “Yes, you will.” The Charizard said; Causing Czar to double back in disbelief, Whoa. . . You can talk! Who taught you or how did you make it possible?” Czar was asking questions, however with no time left, the Two Pokemon were vanishing into thin air, “Wait!” Czar yelled out; reaching out to the two Pokemon. “Don’t worry Czar, all of your answers will be answered in due time, till then, start your journey with high spirits and never give up!”

With that, Czar nodded as he waved goodbye as so did the Charizard and the Garchomp as they disappeared from sight; leaving white sparkles in the air, Looking at around, he noticed Alexthe2nd carrying Alex using his arms and Tadakichi carrying Rita using his back. Confused of what happened back there, Czar told them “Don’t worry about it guys, they were friends of my dad. You see, my father had to choose the wrong time to disappear so I had to go and find my father’s Pokemon to aid me, get it?” Czar asked the two Pokemon as they nodded. (Phew. . . Better not tell them what actually happened just yet; they might think I’m Crazy.”) Czar nodded at both of them as he began to walk back towards the house while Alexthe2nd and Tadakichi began to follow Czar. While walking, Czar looked up the dark sky as he wondered about the events of today. (Man . . . today has been nothing but a rollercoaster of events; My Cyndaquil, Alex coming here, Team Rocket hunting my friends, and to top it all off, that strange being who guided me into saving my friends.) Czar gazed at the moon; remembering key terms in their conversation, How Czar’s spirit has unlimited potential. (That figure said that my burning spirit has great potential, like how great exactly? I’m only a ten year old boy who just got lucky in a battle; I have nothing to show towards my skills,) Czar stopped and Sighed as he looked towards the top of the hill where Czar was currently. (But I’m going to start my journey tomorrow so I can prove my worth there. One day, I will see to it that being’s assistance will not be wasted, until then I can only offer my burning spirit to guide me among my journeys.) Looking at Alexthe2nd and Tadakichi at the base of the hill, Czar caught up to them as they exited the hill.

Once going through the trees, Czar ended up at his house, where he noticed a few movements in the house, “What the. . .” Czar saw that the lights closed; leaving Czar worried. “Oh no. . . Maybe I should take the back door, no; what if they got the house surrounded? I should take my chances; I have an Arcanine and a Charizard with me.” Czar moved up towards the door and slightly turned the knob as it opened. “Okay, so fat so good. . .” When Czar opened the Lights, Party poppers flew all over the area as did the balloons and confetti. “Surprise! Happy Birthday Czar!” Czar’s Friends, Family, and their parent’s Colleagues were there. “Ah! Alexthe2nd use-“Czar took a deep breath; realizing that their parents planned a surprise birthday party, “Oh, wait. . . Today’s my birthday?” Czar asked himself; Causing everyone in the room to fall flat on their faces “How could you forget your own birthday?! “ One of Czar’s Friends said to him. “Well. . .” Czar pondered for a second as his friend moved up right next to him. “You do know that’s a Rhetorical question right?” Czar looked at his friend and laughed, “Yeah I know,” “You’re a real case you know that?” his friend told him as he looked behind him and saw Alex and Rita; on their respective Pokemon. “Long day?” he asked him. “For them anyways, don’t worry, they’ll take them to their rooms so we won’t have to miss the party.” Alexthe2nd took Alex into one of the guest rooms while Rita was placed in her room. “So yeah. . . I can’t believe that I’m already ten,” Czar told his friends. “Yeah, that’s the time when you should take on the Pokemon league.” Prof. Elm was walking up to Czar, “Now then; you’re a big boy now Czar, so it’s about time that you should explore the world and discover all the Pokemon in the world, but do it for research okay?” Prof. Elm bestowed Czar the Pokedex as the Professor moved on. “This is the Pokedex; it’s used to store information about the world out there, so you should put it to good use okay?” Elm asked Czar as he nodded. “Great, I hope you can explore the world and discover the many types of Pokemon, “ While talking to Czar, Prof. Elm looked at a man and a woman as he said to both of them, “Well Rydia, Kain, looks like your son’s just about ready.” Kain and Rydia nodded as they called everyone in the living room. “Alright guys get ready because we’re going to sing happy birthday!” the last words of the night before singing and the party.

Next morning:

Czar was up out of bed bright and early as he dressed in his usual attire and hurried down the stairs as he saw Alex and Rita eating breakfast. “Good morning guys, hope you slept well.” Czar said with a cheery look on his face, “Hey Czar, good buddy. Sorry we had to miss your party.” Alex slapped Czar at his back as he felt an electric shock going through his body, “Whoa, Czar what’s going on?!” Alex was worried. “N-N-Nothing Alex, you just have to, Discharge.” Czar said; shivering. “Huh? Discharge, what do you mean?” Alex placed his hand on Rita’s Shoulder as Alex sent electricity towards Rita; causing her hair to frizzle and to stick up. “It means that you should probably go touch a rock, or a pole, or a lightning rod. Rita walked towards the bathroom; looking for a brush, “I see. . . But I’m fine really.” Alexthe2nd went close to Alex and did a high-five, however the electricity stored in Alex was discharged towards the Charizard as he fainted. “Oh. . . Well I should get that fixed then.”

With that Alex dragged his Charizard up the stairs as Czar chuckled a little bit. (Alex and Rita, I’m glad that you didn’t change when you guys left on your adventure, however. . . I have to change, for the better.) With that Czar left the area and towards outside as he looked around and saw his Parents outside, “Mother, Father? What are you doing here?” Czar asked them both; wondering what’s up. “Czar, we just want to see you off before you go and start your adventure, I can’t believe it; my little man’s growing up.” Rydia hugged Czar tightly as he couldn’t breathe. “Urk, Mom . . . can’t breathe suffocating. . .” Rydia removed herself from Czar as she said. “I and your father decided that you should take these.” Rydia handed Czar a Pokegear and a Pokeball. “The Pokegear’s custom-made; designed to be upgradeable and omni-proof, let it shine through out your journey.” Czar grabbed the stuff his mom gave as he opened the Pokeball; revealing a Charmander with black skin; scarred eye and a white flame.

“I saved this Charmander before you were born. He was 8 at the time so I took care of him like he was my child, a month later you were born. From there I saw a bond between human and Pokemon being formed. Let it guide you throughout your journey. Czar looked at the Charmander as he smiled at it, The Charmander looked at him and smiled as well. “I guess it’s my turn now.” Kain handed him an earpiece and a Pokeball. “That earpiece is my latest invention created for you, it’s a Pokemon transceiver. Basically with this on you can understand the language of Pokemon, make sure you lead your Pokemon on to the right path.” Czar placed the earpiece on his ear and released the Pokeball; revealing a Cyndaquil. “You like it? I reserved it just for you.” Kain smiled as Czar did. “Thanks Dad. . .”

Looking at his Pokemon he told them. “Hi, my name’s Czar, and I’m your friend, so don’t fear me alright?” The Charmander told Czar. “You haven’t changed a bit. . . I still remember the time we used to play together, now we’re going to explore the world side by side, you still remember the Nick-name you gave me?” the Charmander asked him. “I sure do, Musashi” He said as they both laughed. “Hey. . . How come I don’t have a Nick-name?” The Cyndaquil asked Czar. “Well, it’s because I haven’t came up with one, let’s see. . . How about Tasumaru?” he asked him. “Tasumaru. I like it,” Tasumaru replied. “Great.”

As they finished talking to each other, a Strong wind began to blow behind Czar as the windmills began to blow like crazy, “Hey what’s going on? The wind’s crazy today.” Prof. Elm Looked at Czar, Kain, and Rydia. “What’s going on? Well this is my Tailwind and I’m going to ride it!” Czar ran towards Route 29 as he looked behind him; saying. ”Bye Mother, Bye Father! I’m going to start my adventure now! I’ll call you once I take care of things!” Czar waved goodbye while running as Rydia and Kain waved as well. Kain looked at Rydia with tears falling from her eyes. “Something the matter dear?” Kain asked her. “Nothing’s wrong, I’m just feeling proud that we raised a good son, and to see him go off in his adventure well. . . I’m glad that he’s going to explore the world and spread his wonderful compassion towards others.” Rydia held close to Kain as he replied. “Yeah, he does have that burning spirit. . .” (Czar, for some reason. . . I know that you’re going to change the world. Till then I. . . We will be helping you every step of the way.) Czar’s image soon became a blur to a shadow, finally nothing as the wind continues to blow for Czar.

(A Journey to change it all, Czar’s spirit and his bond between him and his Pokemon along with is attitude, he has the potential to change the world, The legend begins: “The King of the Skies. . . The wind is impatient; for as it will only reveal important facts, his Pokemon league journey will be a side-story as the events that will change everything, will be the focus point.

The wind stopped blowing for a moment. . .)
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