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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:24 pm
Chapter 3 The light pitter patter of raindrops gave noise to the otherwise dead silence that hung over the procession. A priest stood over a closed coffin speaking though to most he was unheard and ignored. Several dozen members of the Capulet family gathered on the cement plateau wearing black offset by the pure white floor that made up the private burial ground. Lanterns hung around them, flames flickering and waving in the air like willow-wisps paying their own respects to the dead. Raghnall sat in a wheelchair, eyes empty and devoid of emotion staring at the coffin. He imagined his friend's face, the smile that would bring him laughter in even the grimmest of times. But not this time, his smile only brought sadness. Saiya stood behind Raghnall, holding an umbrella over them both. Her face was torn. Conflict between two emotions within, projected through her expression displayed her pain and her anguish. While so many around her cried, she could not. Her pride within told her to be strong, never to show weakness, never to give in to herself. Yet, at this moment, when no one would think less of her, she couldn’t release herself and let the tears flow. Instead, they welled up only to be pressed back down again and again. It was a funeral, and it was raining. It was always raining at a funeral, at least that’s how it always seemed to be portrayed in fiction. Like a scene straight out of a movie, it would not stop, despite their wishes. This was reality, all the tragedies in the world could not prepare them for this moment, the overwhelming sorrow of losing their friend. Raghnall lifted his gaze and stared at the others standing in a circle around the coffin. He looked from face to face, noting every reaction of each and every person, inscribing it to memory. He would remember their eyes just as he remembered his. His eyes lifted further, noticing the figure in the very back of the group turn and walk away. The white hair and pale skin gave him away as Salvii. He looked on, watching the boy walk off and vanish beyond the flickering light of the lanterns. When Salvii was gone, Raghnall looked back to the coffin, his ears deaf to almost everything around him but the constant impact of raindrops to the cover of umbrellas and Saiya’s close presence. Saiya shifted behind him drawing his mind back to that day, almost a week before… ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ragnall slowly came to, his senses picking up first on the soft touch of bed sheets. He refused to open his eyes, praying for a moment that all the events before were nothing but a vivid dream. As he opened his eyes hoping to find the roof of his bedroom, his heart sunk as the plain white ceiling of a hospital greeted him. “He’s awake!” The excited voice of someone familiar blasted out next to him. Raghnal winced and closed his eyes as the lights cut on accompanied by shuffling of feet. When he opened his eyes the boy stared at several friends gathered around his bed. “Are you ok?” One small voice asked. “How are you feeling?” Another added on. “Do you need anything? Are you thirsty?” More questions flooded in before being silenced by a deeper, more motherly tone. “Everyone… give him some room. I’m sure he’s not even awake yet.” “But his eyes are open, that means he’s awake right? Saiya, is big brother going to be ok?” the tiny voice continued to pester. “I’ll take her outside until he’s ready.” “Thank you, Vereor.” Saiya’s voice replied softly. “Aww, I don’t want to leave! I want to make sure big brother is ok! Why do I have to leave?” The tiny voice Raghnall could now recognize as Isra’s responded, profusely refusing any such thought. “We’re just taking a step outside. We don’t want to crowd him. I’m sure he’ll want to see you soon, just not right now.” Vereor replied. The following shuffles of feet out the door and stifled whimpering was the only other noise till the door shut soundly. There was a long moment of silence before Rage finally spoke, his voice raspy with his throat dry, “Is… Alex alright? Is Alex safe?” Another long pause followed his question as Seiya, the only remaining person in the room struggled to answer his question. When he opened his eyes and looked at her face, Raghnall received his answer, but he refused to accept it, “Saiya… where… where is he?” Saiya bit her lower lip, averting her gaze. Finally, she opened her mouth and spoke, her own voice coming out shaky and strained, “Raghnall… Alex is…” She couldn’t finish her sentence as Ragnall burst out. “No!” Raghnall yelled, his voice cracking as he grabbed Saiya by the collar and pulled her close to his face, “Don’t! Don’t say it! For- Forget… forget I asked.” Raghnall held onto her with his trembling hand and lowly let her slip from his grip, “He can’t be…” With nothing left, no strength remaining in him, tears poured out of his eyes. He coughed to clear his throat, and replaced it with a deep labored breath, “He can’t be dead…” His last statement escaping as a mere squeak, Saiya moved in close and helped him sit up. She held him close as he buried his face into her shoulder to mumble his silent wails. Saiya ran her hand up and down his back as he cried. The louder he cried, the closer she held him, allowing her warmth and kindness to pour out into him and bring him comfort. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ After the heavy stone cap slid into place over the grave, grating on the last of those who still held reserve, a loud boom echoed off into the distance sounding closure for the procession but not for the hearts of those present. Raghnall sat in his wheelchair, staring blankly at the stone cover reading Alex Lafayette Capulet. His expression for a moment was plain, emotionless, but as his face sharpened and his eyes narrowed, his hand clenched the armrest of his wheelchair with trembling anger. The last words of the priest presiding over the funeral didn’t even faze him, his mind could not being itself from the terrible urge to destroy whoever was responsible for his friend’s death. After more than half of those present had filed off into the darkness, another figure stopped next to him and touched his shoulder. He hesitated to lift his face to look at the newcomer. Grace, looked at him with a pitiful expression. She looked at Saiya, giving her leave and taking over as his guardian from the rain. Saiya reluctantly accepted and walked away. “Why are you doing this?” Raghnall asked coldly, “What is it you want? You want to know what we found… right?” “Saiya looked tired. She hasn’t left your side much at all the past few days. She cares allot for you.” Grace replied, her voice warm and soothing, ignoring the cold hearted accusation Raghnall proposed. “She would be like that for anyone.” Raghnall dismissed the sentiment, looking back at the gravestone. Grace took a deep breath and sighed, “This may be true… but it doesn’t change the fact she has put herself through a allot for your sake. Giving her a brake was the least I could do… the least you could do to repay her for her kindness.” “I… don’t deserve her kindness.” “Raghnall… don’t beat yourself up. This wasn’t your fault.” “Wasn’t it?” He asked as he closed his eyes, opening them a second later after image of his friend’s last moment and words invaded his mind, “He was right next to me. I should have been able to do something. I…” “There was nothing you could have done.” Grace move around where she now knelt in front of him, her eyes locked with his, “This is not your fault.” Rage stared for a moment, then looked away, “I… I know.” Grace stood up and moved around behind once more, her steps flowed like air over the ground, her entire being like a goddess in her own right. Slowly pushing the wheelchair, she passed by the grave, heading for the car waiting for them with the driver standing ready for them whenever they desided to leave. Raghnall glanced at the gravestone one last time, he spoke, “Wait… please…” “Alright… but only for a moment. I can’t have you catching a cold.” Grace replied, allowing him to pay his final respects. She was silent as Raghnall continued with another request. “Tell me… in front of Alex’s grave... Did you know we were going to be attacked that night?” The air hung silent, “Did we have information that would have warned us ahead of time?” “That…” Grace began, her voice lingering while Raghnall listened intently, concentrating on every word, “would be something you’d have to ask Salvii.” “Salvii?” Raghnall burst out, her reply catching him completely off guard, “What would he know about this?” “Salvii knows allot of things. If anyone knew this was going to happen, it would be him.” “But… why Salvii?” Raghnall thought out loud. “That… my dear, is something you’ll have to ask him yourself.” Grace replied softly, “Is that all? Ask whatever you like to put your heart at ease.” “I have nothing more to ask.” Raghnall said, his eyes closing on the grave and shutting away the pain. Grace pushed them down the short path towards the street while she added, “If you need anything, don’t hesitate to come to me, Raghnall.” “No…” He stated suddenly, his tone harsh, “not Raghnall.” “Hmm?” Grace slowed her pace as they reached the car and she shifted to his side. “I don’t want to be called that anymore.” “Then what shall I call you?” Grace stood over him with an interested gaze. “Call me-” Raghnall started, his voice dropping off for a moment. Then, through gritted teeth he growled a deep, hateful word in a voice unmistakable as anything else, “Rage.”
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:41 pm
Rhiko, amazing piece. Yet again. The emotions you put into each sentence really stood and and made this particular piece flourish. Even though there were technically no action scenes, it really didn't matter to me at all because the piece worked so well without them. Each section seemed to flow into the next without skimping on detail and without spending too long that it becomes sentimental. So, great pacing on your part!
I love the music choice, good gracious it's so beautiful that I still have it on loop as I type. I think it punctuated the piece perfectly. Ever since you showed me this song on Skype a little before, I've been having it on loop. XDD The melody really works amazingly with the tone of this chapter. Especially the beginning where it starts off a little slow much like rain. It was awesome. And the buildup of the piano meshed so well with the way the piece flowed it seemed like one or the other was made for each other.
Anyways, I'm really interested where you'll take the story next. Whether you continue to focus on the Capulet err, "defensive" or move onto the Montagues, I'm sure I'll have no qualms. XD
Okay, I don't know if there's anything else I can cover... Oh the ending to this chapter was awesome. I think it sets up a perfect tone for future pieces. The change in Rage's thought and feelings really made the piece beautiful. I felt like you could see the gears turn in his head and everything change. It was so bitter and so beautiful.
I definitely look forward to your next addition! :3 You always make my day with your writing.
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Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:04 am
I am on the brink of crying, Rhiko... It was so sad! You just had to pick that song. T_________________T
I loved it! Awesome job! The images you created with your words were so vivid! I had no problem imaging the entire thing play in my head! My favorite part was the flashback, when Rage just woke up, hoping Alex had made it.
Might I also add, and I'm ashamed I didn't notice it at first, that your writing is very cinematically. For example, the transaction between present, to past, and back to present is all movie editing magic. I could see this becoming a great movie idea or even a television series in the future, especially since dramatic superhuman stories have become very popular lately (i.e. Heroes, No Ordinary Family, and so forth).
This new chapter was a surprise. I wasn't expecting another chapter for at least a month, but when I noticed you had added another chapters, I was like, "ZOMGOSH!" I can't wait to read more! They're amazing! Keep it up! biggrin
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 9:57 pm
Chapter 4 It was the day after the funeral, a normal day as ever for the rest of the school populace. Saiya was acting as her usual self, following her schedule to the letter. It was half past twelve and the bell was about to ring to let everyone out for lunch and she could feel the tension rising. It started as a subtle shuffle, the slight shift in peoples seats followed by the premature closing of books despite the teachers obvious denial for the existence of time and wish to keep the lesson going overtime. Then, like the gunshot in the horse races they had seen in old videos, the bell rang letting lose the floodgates. Saiya moved calmly as she gathered her things and collected them into her bag. Even as those next to her filed out, she had yet to even stand. Finally when the way cleared she stood and made her way out into the hallway. A younger girl, a sophomore named Tanya Renald met her by the door. “Um, Saiya?” The girl spoke hesitantly, looking out the window quickly to avoid Saiya’s quizzical look. Saiya shifted her bag, heavy with books to a more comfortable position on her shoulder, waiting for some form of conversational development. Concluding this wasn’t happening, she prompted the underclassman into speaking, “Yes? Do you need something?” “Y-yes. Um, have you spoken to Salvii lately?” the girl blushed upon asking the question, “You guys have been friends ever since I can remember. I thought you might know where he’s been. Salvii again? Saiya paused, thinking back, she remembered catching a glimpse of him at the funeral but she wasn’t sure, “No, I haven’t seen him either.” “Oh… ok. I was just… thanks!” Tanya smiled meekly then turned to run off quickly, yelling back just before vanishing around the corner, “Tell him I said hi if you see him!” Saiya waved and turned away. She moved slowly, her mind clouded with thoughts of Salvii, Where has he been? She thought, putting emphasis on ‘has’, He’s never missed school before. Not once. Now he’s missed several weeks. I’m surprised the teachers haven’t started asking questions. But why me? Why does everyone think I’d know where he is? Do I look like his keeper?Saiya slammed her locker shut, interrupting her own thoughts with the noise for but a moment, It’s so strange. We’ve known each other since infancy, he, Vereor, and I, we’ve never kept secrets from each other, and now this. It’s so unlike him. What’s going o- “Ah?!” While climbing down the stairs, Saiya bumped into someone heading in the opposite direction, dislodging her footing and sending her on a one way trip from the top of the staircase to the bottom floor. That would have been the case anyway if it wasn’t for a steady hand that gripped her arm just before it was too late. She stared at the bottom floor in front of her and watched as it moved away as she placed her foot back on a step letting out a breath held several second longer than anticipated. She turned and looked at her savior, greeting him with a stutter, “Th-Thank you.” “You’re welcome. Try to be more careful. It does you no good to zone out and fall down a flight of stairs... unless you’re into that sort of thing.” A boy with his face half hidden behind medium length, dirty blonde curls said with a chuckle. “I most certainly am not.” Saiya said with a laugh of her own, “I’m glad you were here, that certainly would have been a doozey.” “Yes, I’m sure it would have. Um…” The young man paused, looking past her to the bottom floor, “Your lunch?” “Huh?” Saiya turned and looked to the bottom of the stairs again, this time noticing her lunch box open with her food scattered across the floor, “Ah! Oh no!” Saiya scrambled to the first floor hallway, quickly grabbing up her carefully prepared lunch into her bag. The young man joined her a second later, picking up her things and handing them to her one by one, “Good thing you bag your lunches, huh?” He said handing her the sandwich bagged in a separate plastic wrap. “Yeah, sure am. I had to get up an hour early to make it.” “Wow, really? You’re pretty dedicated to your lunches. I usually just grab a snack out of a machine and call it a day.” “Well, that’s no good. You need to eat three full meals a day. It’s the only way to stay healthy.” Saiya waved a finger at him as he handed her the last item. The girl sighed, running a hand through her hair and tucking it behind her ear, “Thanks again… um… I don’t think I got a name, I’m Saiya.” The curly haired boy reached out and took her hand, helping Saiya to her feet, “Caelum, pleasure to meet you.” He laughed, his voice carrying over the other students clearly. “Well Caelum, I promise you, the pleasure is all mine.” Saiya dusted off her uniform and only then did she notice he wasn’t wearing one, “I don’t think I’ve seen you around before. It’s a big school but I usually remember faces. Do you go here?” “No, I was just here visiting a friend.” Caelum ruffled his bangs, finally showing his face to the girl. He was handsome with slender features, not at all feminine, but nowhere near average. “Will you be staying long? Want to join me for lunch? I’m sure my friends wouldn’t mind if we had another person to sit under our tree.” “Unfortunately I was just leaving. I have an appointment on the other side of the city and I’m pretty sure I’m going to be late as it is.” “Oh,” Saiya bit the inside of her lip as she realized the inconvenience she brought upon him, “Didn’t mean to keep you. I’m sorry.” “It’s no problem." the boy laughed, "It’s nothing that serious anyway. But I really should get going.” Caelum left with a wave, leaving Saiya standing in place waving back. She looked at her watch and realized the time. Hoisting her lunch box she ran out the main door and looked around the courtyard. She spotted her friends sitting under the tree, but also something else. A good distance away, outside the main gate, she noticed a boy with pure white hair turning towards the student parking lot. Saiya immediately took off into a run, even with the cheerful calls to her from those sitting under the tree, she kept running. When she reached the gate she didn’t even slow down for the turn. She grabbed onto the corner, skidding around then rushing towards the parking lot. And there he was, Salvii stood next to a pure black motorcycle, getting ready to slip on his helmet. “Salvii!” She called out to him, hoping he’d hear her before turning the ignition. Salvi stopped, lifting his gaze to the girl running towards him. He pulled the helmet back off and looked at her with cold eyes, “Miss Saiya… what are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be eating lunch?” “And shouldn’t you be going to classes? Where have you been?” Saiya retorted, beaming him a glare in return for his coldness, then broke down into breathing heavily with her hands propped up on her knees. “Are you alright?” Salvii asked, tilting his head to the side, his face showing no emotional concern what-so-ever.” “Ye- yes! And don’t… don’t change the subject. I just need to… catch my breath.” “Alright…” After a few more seconds of breathing, she stood up straight again and pointed her finger into his face, “You’ve been missing classes!” “Yes… what about it?” “What about it?! Since when have you ever missed classes? I don’t remember a single day where unless you were deathly ill did you miss classes. Now you’ve been absent for weeks.” “I’ve turned in my homework, and completed all my tests… so there’s no problem.” Salvii continued staring at her with the same cold, apathetic expression, “Is that all?” “Well… I guess…” Saiya faltered. She should have known Salvii wouldn’t be foolish enough to let his grades suffer. Regardless, her resolve returned again seconds later with a passion, “Still, people have been wondering where you’ve been! And no, that is not all! Peter said you were looking for me the other day, what did you want?” “I was never looking for you." Salvii looked at her, appearing gunuinely confused, "Besides, I’ve known where you lived since elementary school, why would I go to Peter? Sorry… I have to go. Bye.” “Hey! Wait a second!” Saiya yelled but had her voice drowned out by the motorcycle engine. Saiya made her displeasure known clearly by writing it all over her face with a heavy glare. Salvii shook his head at her and kicked the motorcycle into gear, screeching out of the parking lot. Saiya stared after his vanishing tail lights, “...And since when do you ride a motorcycle?” The girl ran her hand over her forehead, brushing the misplaced black locks from her eyes then turned back and made her way through the main gate. She spotted her friends that didn’t wait on her to start eating, not that she expected any different. “Hey, what was that about? You ran by without even a hello.” Neha asked, putting emphasis on her displeasure of being ignored. Her displeasure didn't last long a boy walked by whistling at her, her attention suddenly elsewhere. “Sorry about that,” Siaya replied, placing her lunch down on the ground before taking a seat next to it, “I saw Salvii. I wanted to catch him before he vanished again.” “Vani-“ began Thera, before she was interupted. “You saw Salvii?!” exploded Ragnall, “Where?” “In the parking lot…” Saiya replied hesitantly, taken aback by his sudden outburst, “He left though.” “Oh… um…” Ragnall relaxed, dropping his shoulders back into a relaxed position, “Did he say where he was going?” “No, he didn’t say..." She let on the last part slowly, concern laced into her words, "He seemed rather rushed… but talk about rude.” Saiya let out a frustrated breath and began digging through her bag of goodies, “I don’t think I’ve ever seen him treat anyone with as short a temper as he treated me just now. First he starts missing school, then goes around asking my friends if they’ve seen me. Now, if that’s not strange enough, I finally find him and he tells me, ‘I don’t know what you’re talking about, I haven’t been looking for you.’ Also, did anyone know Salvii drove a motorcycle? I thought he rode the bus.” Watching as Saiya quickly drove herself deeper into frustration, Vereor cut in smiling at Saiya, “I’m sure he’ll come around soon. He’s probably just going through some sort of phase.” “Yeah, he’s right.” Therra said, placing a hand of Saiya’s shoulder and shaking her lightly, “Salvii is probably just being moody.” “Salvii… moody? Heh.” Saiya shook her head and took a big bite of her sandwich. The others continued in their own conversations, but she wasn’t able to shake the bothersome thought looming in the back of her mind, They don’t know Salvii like I do. He doesn’t… no… can’t act like this. It’s just…The school bell rang out over the courtyard, resonating from the clock tower and echoing loudly into the distance. With the familiar tune signaling the beginning of classes, it escorted the youth back into the building to finish what was left of their day. Saiya reluctantly placed her uneaten food back in her bag and stood up. She glanced over the group, catching a glimpse of Ragnall’s gaze. The coldness in his stare out towards the parking lot was enough to send a shiver up her spine. Saiya hoisted her bag onto her shoulder and turned away from the group. A sudden pressure on the opposite shoulder caused her to jump slightly. She turned to find Vereor’s smile as he spoke, “What’s up?” “Well, I was wondering if you could do me a favor,” Vereor lifted his hand and stuffed it into his pocket, “I have some stuff to take care of in Central and I need someone to take Sergio home after school. I don’t trust him to head straight there. He’s pretty easily distracted.” “Oh, no problem,” Saiya replied, waving him off whimsically, “We’ve been friends since we were babies. Taking your little brother home shouldn’t even be considered a favor by now.” Vereor chuckled to himself, “Yeah, I guess you’re right. You remember where my house is right?” “Sure do. Third one on the right.” “Yep, you got it,” Vereor took a few quick steps and got in front of her, walking backwards for a moment to look her in the eyes speaking in hushed tones, “Hey… don’t let Salvii’s attitude get to you alright? I’m sure he’ll be back to his usual self in no time and he’ll be apologizing for everything like he usually does.” Vereor lifted his voice again and offered her another cheerful smile, “Alright, I’m off. Make sure to tell Sergio where I went. He’ll never give my parents a rest otherwise.” Saiya waved after him, mentally sighing at his last words, I sure hope he’s right…
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 10:42 pm
Chapter 5 Vereor waved goodbye to his friends as they boarded the bus to head home. Vereor turned the moment the doors closed and started on his way down the sidewalk toward another bus stop that would bring him into the center of the city. While he waited, a few others gathered around the bench keeping their distance from the apathetic boy sitting in the center. Vereor kept to himself, didn’t initiate conversation, just sat quietly until the bus arrived. When he boarded, he took the seat closest to the center, inconspicuous and the least likely to be joined by anyone else. As the door made a silent squeal to close, a frantic voice yelled out from just outside, catching it before it sealed his fate. The boy clamored onboard and threw his bag into the seat across from Vereor. With a loud, over exaggerated sigh of relief, he sat down, right next to Vereor. “Oh man, that would have been horrible. Talk about bad luck. I just HAD to leave my math notebook in the music room. I had to go all the way to the top floor again after I’d already walked half way across the courtyard.” Vereor didn’t respond, he’d been looking out the window the whole time as the bus had started moving. The boy went silent for a moment, “Hey, are listening? Hello? Grey Haired Boy.” Vereor finally turned and glanced at the newcomer, “Oh? Are you talking to me?” “Yeah, very funny. Do you see any other high school guys with grey hair?” The boy shoved Vereor’s shoulder, resulting a rather irritated look shot back in his direction. “I have grey hair? Wow, you know… I never noticed.” Vereor replied, fiddling with his bangs, “Thanks for the update.” “Not the most social individual are you?” “I can be.” Veror replied simply, “And you are?” “Normally, I’d ask for yours first, but since you asked so nicely, the name’s Calix.” Calix extended a hand forward, “Nice to meet ya!” “Vereor,” the silver haired teen took his hand in return and gave it a good shake, “Calix… you wouldn’t happen to be Gwyn’s younger brother, Calix Corvus?” “Oh? You know my sister? Are you one of her friends?” The boy seemed to recoil for a moment, shifting away from Vereor slightly. “No, I assure you, our acquaintance is not nearly as friendly. I take it you don’t like your sisters friends?” “No, I just don’t like my sister,” Calix replied bluntly, “Some of her friends are ok, but most of them are just like her; stuck up, self centered, and completely obsessed with how they look.” “You sure you two are related?” Vereor asked, raising an eyebrow. “Yep, believe me. I’ve asked my parents a hundred times. Still waiting on the blood test.” Calix chuckled and slammed against the back of the seat roughly, “Gah, bus rides are so boring. Can’t they move a little faster?” “We’ll get there soon enough.” “Oh, by the way, where are you heading to in central?” Calix asked, suddenly interested in conversation again after a minute of sitting silently as another bus stop full of people filed into the seats around them. Calix never bothered to move his bag. “I’m heading over to café avenue, I’m meeting a friend there for coffee.” Vereor said, looking back out the window, “Yourself?” “I’m heading out to an awesome music place out on the other side of central, so you’ll be getting off way before me. We’ll you be staying long? Maybe I can catch you on the way back if you’re still around.” “No idea. We might be there awhile, or we might only be there a few minutes. Depends how talkative he is today.” “Ah, well then, I guess I’ll just have to catch you another time. I’ll look for you around school, that alright?” “Sure.” Vereor replied, finding the conversation both wearing and refreshing at the same time. “Sweet! Shouldn’t be too hard to find you. Just look for the guy with grey hair and I’ll be sure to spot you.” “Heh, yeah.” Vereor didn’t bother turning around to continue the conversation, he just stared out the window until his stop arrived. At which point he slid past his fellow classmate and headed for the door. Right before he stepped out, he waved back to Calix, who lethargically waved back. Vereor took in a deep breath of the city air as he placed his feet down on the cobblestone sidewalk. The smells of fresh bread laid out for display, sweet aromas of specially baked sweets, and tantalizing tastes hanging in the air that escaped the doors to each building left cleverly ajar had many salivating outside each building debating which store to enter first. Vereor however was unaffected, he strolled past the many colorful and well decorated buildings adorned with golds and reds all built to match the equally tasteful building next to it. He continued all the way to a small store with several small tables and chairs set up outside on its own special fenced in corner of sidewalk. We strolled inside and waved to the store owner who greeted him in the same joyful demander he did all of his customers, “Vereor, it’s been awhile. How have you been?” “The same. It’s life.” Vereor responded getting in line and waiting for the man to finish with the customer before him to speak again, “How about yourself? How has business been?” “Good enough,” the store owner began and then lowered his voice, “but just between you and me, fewer people have been venturing out here to central lately with all the murders and such.” the man lifted his voice again afterwards, “But, luckily business has been picking up now that things seemed to have calmed down. So, how about we get down to business, what’ll it be today?” “Jeez… Frank,” Vereor laughed to himself, “the way you act sometimes I can’t help but take you as a bartender instead of a simple shop owner. But… I’ll have my usual.” “Fantasy Margarita coming right up!” the man yelled out, spinning around, heading straight for the coffee machine. All the while as he worked on Vereor’s order, he never seemed to stop chuckling. When he placed the cup on the counter he looked Veroer in the eye, giving him a sharp look, “Will that be all?” “I dunno, I was thinking I could get the house special? Any idea what that is today?” Vereor said as he took a sip of the coffee, cooled to the perfect temperature as to not burn his lips. “Not sure, I’ll have to check. Follow me and I’ll what it says on the board.” The man turned away from Vereor and walked to the back of the shop where a door led into the back room of the building. The shop owner held open the door as Vereor went through, hesitating only a moment to glance over his shoulder to the street. He closed the door behind him and yelled up the staircase to his right, “Gloria! Watch the shop for a minute, I’m going on break.” After a second the reply came and he nodded to Vereor to continue. The two shuffled to the very last room in the back where the man opened it up to a space shameful to even consider a closet with a lone computer hooked up to power outlet and a chair across from the one ment to the user of the computer console, “Have a seat.” Vereor took another sip of his coffee as he sat down across from the computer, “Well?” “Hold your horses. I’m getting there.” The man said with a disgruntled growl as he plopped into the seat which gave out a loud squeal in protest of the man’s large frame. He reached down and flicked a switch to kick the older computer into motion. A few seconds later a desktop flashed on the screen just before the man turned the monitor away from Vereor’s prying eyes. “Well?” Vereor asked again with decreasing patience, “Have you heard anything or not?” The man sighed and slouched back in his chair resulting in an even louder screech, “Well, let’s see… a wealthy business woman found out her husband was cheating on her the other day. She’s trying to keep it under wraps but it’s only a matter of time before the press gets their hands on it, then it’s free reign. You know, those boys down at the news station don’t know a damn thing about good business. Everyone deserves to know the truth… can you believe it?” The man took one look at Vereor’s glare and let out a loud cough, “Alright, alright, I’ll be serious.” “Still charging by the minute?” “Naturally.” “Then get on with it.” Vereor prodded, his eyebrow twitching, “What can you tell me about the Montegues.” [[Cue: Prologue]] “Shhh!” The man suddenly burst out even louder than Vereor’s original tone, “Keep it down when it comes to that stuff.” Vereor’s facial expression didn’t change, “Alright, Alright, I haven’t heard too much. But it seems whatever’s going on, your friends over on that side of the city have been busy, and rather messy too.” “What do you mean?” “What do I mean? You seriously trying to tell me you haven’t noticed?” The man began typing on his computer furiously, “In the past few weeks alone, there have been several reported murders, each one taking place right here in central. As you know, central is the one place in the city that has been the highlight of the feud’s underlying conflicts. But, not in all the years I’ve been running this business have they ever made a move that made it all the way top side.” Vereor leaned in, interest gleaming in his eyes, “Go on.” “Both your west side and east side friends have been going at it a long time. But not once have they ever made a move this drastic. They’ve always aimed to keep their struggles under the table. The populace has never been let in on the conflict. Assassinations, hostile business takeovers, even petty squabbles have all been taken care of without a trace to be found by the mainstream news men, especially not the police. Take the assassination of those two business guys a couple weeks ago. Usually, they would have died in be of a heart attack, or gotten into a car wreck. Nothing that could be seen as anything but a coincidence.” The man paused, looking at Vereor’s eyes which narrowed at him when he stopped. He coughed and continued, “The problem is, everything they’ve been doing lately has all been out in the open. No one can mistake anything going on as mere coincidence. Men getting gunned down by mysterious bullet-less assassins in the middle of populated streets, bodies showing up in the waterways. The people are scared. Those up top are shaking in their boots. Those on the underground are trembling for a different reason.” He stopped again, leaning in, “They say they’re trying to start a war.” “War?” Vereor thought out loud. “Yeah, war. Those at the top of the smaller organizations are acting like hyenas just before a lion takes out a big game. They’re lying in wait for something, anything to happen. They think that this is it and your friends are going to a winner take all brawl. They’re hoping to snatch up the spoils left behind after the carnage.” “Who’s to say this isn’t just some overblown exaggeration? There have been close calls before, they’ve always been resolved quietly.” “When was the last time you saw a Capulet name in the news if not to collect some award? And it isn’t just the Montagues. Your boy has been on the move too.” “My boy?” “You know… Celeron. He’s been all over the internet. Some super genius with computers managed to catch a glimpse of him sneaking around in someone’s archives. He’s searching for something. And I have a hunch… every time he’s been seen making this much activity… someone went down. Hard.” Vereor went silent, his eyes sliding to the side slightly in thought as the man continued. “There’s been talk… they say that there’s been some serious movement here in central since about 2 days ago. By my estimates… something’s going to happen. If not tonight, tomorrow night. And when crap hits the fan, if I were you, I’d get far away from central.” “Thanks for the advice. Anything else?” “Yeah, probably the strangest thing of it all.” Vereor perked up at the statement, “Even stranger than all this?” “Maybe… I’m not sure. There’s been talk lately of some big shot moving into Hotel Verona.” The man pressed enter on his keyboard then spun around the monitor for Vereor to see. “So what? People come and go in Hotel Verona, no one ever really stays there for long. It’s just too damn expensive.” “True, the problem it, this guy moved in to one of the pent houses, not a big deal right? Of course there are only four of them sure… but here’s the kicker, the guy’s only 20 years old.” “A 20 year old moving into a pent house, for how long?” Vereor’s interested expression was fading quickly. “3 months.” “Are you kidding?! That’s a fortune. Who is he?” Vereor sprang up, looking at the monitor with renewed interest. “That’s just it… we don’t know.” The man slouched back, “No one does. He goes only by Falco.” “Falco? And no one questioned this?” Vereor asked, raising an eyebrow. “Of course they did. But when they checked his bank account and he had the money, all questions went out the window and those at Hotel Verona welcomed him in with open arms. Filthy bastards.” “You’re one to talk.” “Hey, at least I have the decency to find the truth when the truth is there to be found. No amount of money in the world will stop me from claiming what can be mine. Imagine the price tag that would go with a piece of information like that?” “Alright… I get it… let’s not get too far off topic. I’m on the clock.” “Ah, yes, well… that’s all I’ve got. But if you ask me… there are only 2 groups in this world capable of that kind of purchase power.” Vereor leaned back, already knowing the answer. “You got it. If you ask me… I think it’s calling someone out.” “Who?” “Who else? Your entire family. If you didn’t know about this guy until I mentioned him, I imagine he’s working for the other team. And making a move like this could only be taken as the ballsiest move made in this entire war.” “I thought it wasn’t a war yet?” “Might as well be. If your friends take the bait, I can only imagine this is only the trigger for something much bigger.” Vereor didn’t say anything, instead he raised his hand to his chin and stroked it ever so slightly as he contemplated what the man was saying, If what he’s saying is true, then if we take the bait this could expose the family to serious danger and scrutiny. But no one among the higher ups are about to take this sort of blatant challenge sitting down. Well played. Very well played.“Well, that’s all I’ve got. That’ll be-“ The man paused, glancing at his computer screen, “What was that?” [[Cue: In Justice]] “What was what?” “My screen just flickered.” The man jumped, “There it was again!” Suddenly, the man’s computer started screeching like a dying animal, screen flashing several colors till finally it went to a deep blue screen with hundreds of jumbled numbers and letters splashed across the screen. Sparks of electricity jumped from the monitor and tower throughout the rest of the instruments. Vereor stood to his feet in a rush, “I have to go.” “Hey wait a sec,” the man stumbled over his words, wincing as an arc of light shot over the top of his head into the wall behind him leaving a black scorch mark, “What about my pay?!” “Put it on my tab.” “You know I don’t run that kind of business! All money is paid at the time of services rendered. Hey! Get back here!” The man scrambled to his feet, hesitating long enough for Vereor to escape out the door when another bolt of electricity ripped its way over the desk and then over to the door handle. By the time the man got to the front of his shop, greeted by the nervous smile of his wife, Vereor was gone, all that was left behind being payment for the coffee on the counter.
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 8:18 pm
But.. wha... huh?! D: What is this build up?! Narg! What's going on with Salvii?! What's Vereor up to?! So many questions with no answers! It's like a mini-sode of Lost! QQ
Great job as always, Rhiko! It's so weird to see our characters like this. In CoV they were like... mutant soldiers, but here they're everyday people going to school or strangers on a bus, except there's something deeper going on underneath. I really like the way the characters interact with one another. For example, Vereor and Saiya. You could totally tell they've been friends since they were babies just how they talk to one another.
My favorite part is Vereor's interaction with the shop owner (Frank?). T'was really funny, haha! Especially the end when Vereor leaves, only leaving behind the money for the coffee. XD That entire scene was great! I liked the build up a lot and then all of a sudden the computer explodes and Vereor's like "PEACE!" Haha! T'was great! biggrin
The plot is beginning to thicken even more and I'm at the edge of my seating impatiently waiting for the next chapter! I demand you tell me everything right now, Rhiko! D<
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Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 4:29 pm
I second Volt. I want to know what's going on already! The suspense! It's killing me D:~!! *shakes RhikoRhi*
Sorry I haven't left a comment until now, but the new addition is amazing. Even though there wasn't any physical action per se, I felt like the dialogue kept the piece moving along nicely. Great work on the scenes for that, the pacing was nice. I have to agree with Anthony, I loved Vereor's scene. It was very well done. The pacing, dialogue, characteristics... I think it was by far my favorite scene in the two chapters. I don't know, it's a tough choice. XD
If anything, I'd like to see more character interaction! You do a great job of portraying characters and personality, I just want to see a little more of that. >w< I see Salvii, Vereor and Saiya, it's so well done~!! :]] kudos and white chocolate macadamia cookies!
Great work on music selection again, I feel like I don't even have to mention this anymore. It's just a given. XD
I look forward to your next piece! (And look! You made Anthony read! haha :] that in itself seems like quite a feat!)
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Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 7:48 pm
LavenderSakura (And look! You made Anthony read! haha :] that in itself seems like quite a feat!) Quite the feat indeed... You should give yourself a pat on the back, good sir. o.o
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 9:37 pm
Once again you have me spell bound Rhiko! I couldn;t WAIt to read these once I knew they were up- and you didn't disapoint. You conveyed them just how I imaged. I giggled at the stair scene, and the barmen info slouthing scene was just CLASSIC! You've fleshed them out so well and make them real in the sense they're like the people you'd see on the street.
Some intereactions make it seem all the more tragic from the readers point of view, knowing who is who and who will do what!
Then it ended with a bang! A small bang- of course its not over. But it leaves you with enough you want more and darnit I do!
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 5:49 pm
Chapter 6
[[Cue: Twilight Town]]Neha walked around the street-side table, brushing off the seat with her free hand making it perfectly clean for her to sit on in her school uniform. Nothing was ever allowed to mess up her clothing; even a uniform that no matter how many times she petitioned the school counsel to change, was no exception. Therra joined her a second later in the seat across from her, taking off a nice chunk of her ice cream cone as she took cleaned off her seat.
Neha licked at her own scoop, savoring the taste before sighing with satisfaction, “God I love this place.”
“Mmm hmm!” Therra replied as best she could with a full mouth before swallowing, “I’m glad your parents have a car. We’d never have made it here in time for the special if we’d taken the bus.”
“Yeah, it’s nice to have your own source of transportation. Besides, the school buses are so dirty, having to share space with the younger students too, I don’t see how you manage to stand it,” Neha once more savored her treat and leaned back in her chair, staring at the clear sky. Her face darkened somewhat, her mood suddenly sullied. When she looked back at Therra, her smile returned, “So, what are you doing Saturday?”
“Nothing as far as I know, you?”
“I never have anything to do on Saturdays,” Neha mused as she twirled a finger through her hair and nibbled some more on her icecream.
“Never? What about dates? I know you’ve had plenty of boys ask you out.”
“I always schedule my dates on Friday night. Saturdays are my relaxation day. But I was thinking maybe you want to see if we can get everyone to go to the movies or something?”
“What was this about relaxation and now you mention trying to get our crazy group together to do something outside of our lunch break… together? You’re going to need at least 5 days of recuperation after organizing something of that magnitude.”
Neha chuckled, “Yeah, you’re right. I remember the last time we tried to get everyone together, it was like pulling teeth.”
“I’m sure we’ll get lucky and one of these days it’ll all just fall together,” Therra said with a big smile before popping the last of her ice cream cone into her mouth.
“Keep dreaming… and you eat to fast…” Neha observed as she was still working on wearing down the one scoop of ice cream on her cone, “I’m surprised you don’t get brain freeze.”
Therra looked as though she wanted to answer but was too busy trying to chew the remains of her snack to answer. Finally, with some effort, she gulped down the cone, “Oh please, a lady would never get brai- oh hey, Vereor!”
Neha turned around and looked across the street and noticed the silver haired boy running like a he had the hounds of hell at his heels, “You’re right, I wonder what’s got him working so hard. I don’t think I’ve seen Vereor run before, not even during the physical exams, he just walks and reads a book or something.” Neha took as much air as she could into her lungs before yelling out over the city noise, “Hey! Vereor, over here!”
Vereor ran as fast as his feet could carry him. The calls from across the street ddid nothing to slow his pace as he rounded the corner heading for the only place that made any sense for him to run to at this moment.
Neha looked dumbstruck. Therra watched Neha and waited for the inevitable reaction, “He… he ignored me! That little block headed jerk ignored me!”
“I’m sure he was just preoccupied,” Therra laughed.
“But, he’s a guy, I sorta understand Seiya earlier, but Vereor too? Twice in one day. Twice!”
Therra did her best to console her friend’s injured ego but in the back of her mind, she too couldn’t help but wonder what would get Vereor so worked up. She made a note to ask him about it later.
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[[Cue: Checkmate]]
As Vereor charged forward, he spotted a flood of people suddenly heading his way as the crossing light changed and allowed them to begin their trek across what Vereor knew was the widest road in Verona. He’d need to find another way around.
The silver haired genius turned a sudden corner and headed down a back alley, leaping over a trashcan as he ran down the backside of the high rise building lit up by a few conveniently placed lights to keep the area safe for the most part. As he grabbed hold of a gutter pipe to make the next turn as fast as he could, Vereor’s thoughts raced, “Please let me make it in time. I have to stop him! If he goes through with this he could-“
When he emerged from the alley way, Vereor nearly fell over himself as he nearly collided with an innocent woman who justifiably was quite displeased by the boys abrupt exit in front of her. Vereor apologized offhandedly as he ran down the sidewalk, now finding himself on Verona Boulevard, the main artery for Verona’s marketing and merchandise lifeline. At the far end of the huge road decorated with and colorful signs and chaotic music created by countless overlapping advertisements, was his destination. Towering higher than any of the surrounding buildings was a skyscraper that stood out in many more ways that its height. Hotel Verona… if Central signified the heart of the city as a whole, then Hotel Verona was its pride, the soul, the ego, the ultimate aspiration of anyone who lived in this god forsaken city and shared in its corrupted lifestyle.
Vereor stopped as the crossing light changed to a bright red hand, blocking his way and further slowing his approach. He stood restless at the edge of the curb as people gathered around him, completely oblivious to his nervous state. His eyes were locked on the light, each car that passed by was like the torturous process of pulling barbed needles out of one’s skin as he marked the seconds in his head. Finally like the gun shot at a race, the light changed, allowing Vereor to shoot off into the oncoming traffic of pedestrians.
Vereor slipped through just in time to avoid colliding with another person walking out of the front door of the building on the corner. He ran, slowly but surely closing the gap between him and the hotel. Suddenly his gut sank as a wave seemed to cut its way through the street, all the streetlights, electronics, speakers, signs, lamps in windows, even phones shut off, the latter made apparent by the simultaneous beeps and jingles that moved along with the wave down the road. The entire area was pitch black, cars sat idle on the road, unable to start despite the ranting from their drivers, all the traffic lights soon went onto backup generators and flashed red, placing a disturbing light on all those there. Then, a loud, but unmistakable ring echoed through the streets, starting from inside hotel Verona then spreading to every building adjacent till every fire alarm for a block in every direction went off.
At first, the masses looked around in confusion. Some people started moving down the street, calm at first. Murmurs came next, people talking to one another trying to make sense of it all as more people soon walked out into the street from inside their respective buildings. Hotel Verona’s sole population was enough to cloud the street around it. It all seemed calm enough until an explosion ruptured its way from a nearby building. The people panicked.
Vereor jumped out of the way as a fleeing man nearly trampled him in a desperate attempt to escape. The screaming was deafening as the silver haired boy hid in a crevice of a building, his eyes locked on Hotel Verona, “Damn it! I’ll never make it over there now. I hope you know what you’re doing.”
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[[Cue: Occupied Thinking]]
“Hotel Verona, the pinnacle of high society, it’s the center point of anyone of importance to gather. Many, if not most of any city shaping business deals have taken place in that Hotel. The hotel management prides itself in supplying the largest workforce for a hotel in history. Over a thousand workers cycle in and out keeping every aspect of the hotel active at all times. The kitchen alone is staffed by over 200 cooks and assistants who serve custom orders to a restaurant that takes up two full floors of the hotel and runs 24 hours a day, every day of the week. Room service is provided by a completely separate department with kitchens located on several floors splitting the work load. Private elevators reserved for room service staff were set up to provide the quickest delivery possible. The cleaning force, which is very much like an army in itself, is also separated into squads. Different groups of janitors are designated to every floor who are almost always working non-stop from the beginning to the end of their shifts as guests check in and out at an alarming rate.
The hotel itself is also split into sections, the closer to the ground floor a room is, the less it costs and consequently, the less attention it gets and shorter staffed the floor becomes. Even so, the price for the lower floors still cost unseemly amounts and the service, despite paling in comparison to that of a higher floor is still sublime. The top 4 floors are the pent houses. The pent houses are fully functional homes, which are more like small mansions. The cost to stay in one of these single story homes for one night costs in itself a small fortune. Two of these pent houses are currently vacant, the top and lowest of the 4 are inhabited. A man that goes simply by the name Falco has rented the highest of these pent houses for a whole month. This anomaly is suspect and must be investigated. Celeron, proceeding with mission.”
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A young man with curly blonde hair, thin, swimmer build, wearing a clean cut, button-up black jacket and a deep green undershirt strolled into the main lobby and walked up to the receptionist desk. The boy, by comparison with the rest of the hotel’s inhabitants was far younger and stood out sorely in the crowd. He coughed once to clear his throat before speaking to the receptionist, “Excuse me-“
“Please hold.” The receptionist said suddenly, turning to face him completely as she tapped on the earpiece set comfortably for her to multitask with customers in both person and on the phone. The young girl brushed the hair in her face to the side and tucked it back, revealing a row of unexpected piercings lining the entire rim of her right ear, “Yes? Oh! C- Mr. Falco, how can I help you?”
The boy rolled his shoulder as he switched the weight of his bag to the other arm, “Yeah, I was wondering if I’d gotten any calls while I was out.”
“Hold on one moment, I find out.” The girl turned to her computer and typed away on the keyboard for a second before looked back at him shaking her head, “Nope, no calls for you today. Are you expecting someone?”
“No, just curious, thank you. Please make sure to forward any messages to my room if they arrive.”
“No problem. I’ll be sure to do that. Have a nice day, dude- I mean sir.” The girl looked away quickly and tapped the button on her ear to return to her previous charge. Falcon shook his head and headed towards the elevator which opened just as he arrived and stayed open for quite awhile to allow several others to join him.
Falco soon made his way up to the top floor, having to stop a frustrating number of times before making it to the pent house. Opening the special lock to the floor with his personal key card, Falcon let out a sigh of relief as the door closed behind him. Past the elevator gate down a short hallway was another door with a second key pad that he quickly punched in the code to allowing the door to let out loud thump as the lock came undone on the other side. The man stepped inside and suddenly tensed. Something was off.
The lights were off and the metal shutters over the windows were closed. The living room was pitch black aside from the subtle blinking of a small green light next to the TV. Falco knelt down and slid the bottom drawer of a desk set up by the entrance. The young man pulled out a small flashlight. Without turning on the lights or the flashlight, Falcon moved across the room silently, crouched over so none of the oddly placed electronics in the room didn’t give him away with their standby lights.
A light shuffle from the master bedroom caught his attention. He moved swiftly and put his back to the wall. He looked around the corner and down the hall, he couldn’t see anything, but he was sure it was there. Falco took a deep breath and closed his eyes. Then, without any apparent trigger he spun around and turned on the flashlight, pointing it at the culprit. Falco hesitated a moment after recognizing the man as a police officer, “Who are you? What are you doing in here?”
“I’m Investigator Alvin Kirkwit, I have a warrant to search the premises.” The man said, his sharp features staring him down, Damn it, I didn’t have enough time… the place was clean.
“A warrant? What do you have a warrant for? Why am I being investigated,” Falco moved a bit more into the open and reached over to grab a remote on the table.
“You are suspect of being related to the recent drug market boom in South Verona. The unexpected fortune you have amassed to be living here for the past week has gotten allot of attention. They think you have something to do with the drug trade.”
“The hotel already did a background check on me. They know the money comes through legitimate channels, any information should have been provided to the police for any investigation.” Falco grabbed onto the remote only to have the officer suddenly draw his eye as he shifted.
“What are you reaching for? Don’t move!” Investigator Kirkwit warned as he drew a gun and aimed it at Falco, “Put it down.”
“Don’t worry, I was just going to turn on the lights,” Falco said slowly, as he pressed the large button in the center.
“No!” The lights turned on suddenly, flooding the room with illumination. The investigator’s form flickered, like the static on a TV only across the entire surface of his body, Crap!
“What the- I knew it,” Flaco jumped back pressing another button on the remote causing the shades to open and slide into the roof. The pressure in the room suddenly changed as Investigator Kirkwit was tossed into the air and flipped backwards into the wall behind him. He landed with his feet against the wall, the air around him throwing all the doors open and ripping at the carpet sending small shreds into the air. The man’s form flickered again, this time, his true form taking shape. He was dressed in an all white, near-skin tight suit with padding and plating covering the forearms, shoulders, chest, groin, thighs, and shins. The boots and gloves were strangely cumbersome made entirely of a heavy material with thicker plating. Across the entire body were small golden rings small enough for a headphone jack concentrated down the spine, gauntlets, and back of the head. The helmet covered the face much like a motorcycle helmet, only closer to the face with less padding. The mask was made of a solid black material with 8 green lights starting above the forehead and running down the face in two parallel lines.
Falco quickly ran across the room and grabbed a mask on the desk reminiscent of those famous for a symbol of drama before spinning around throwing his arm through the air and kicking up a windstorm in the living room, tossing an array of small objects about like shrapnel.
[[Cue: A Song of Storm and Fire]]
“Kotic confirmed, proceeding with mission.” A voice echoed down the hallway, accompanied by the sudden shutdown of all the lights and electronics. The air conditioning systems shut off as well giving the room a disturbing sense of isolation. A second later, the fire alarms went off, removing the silence and making it almost impossible to hear. The strange man, if it could be called that, blasted forward suddenly as two powerful pile drivers built into the boots crashed into the wall where he planted his feet.
Falco turned back after pulling a small black cylinder from the back of his pants, forced to duck a moment later as the other kotic moved in with incredible speed and swept over him with a powerful kick. The man in white came after Falco with everything he had, moving with mechanical precision, each strike barely missing Falco enough to leave the boy feeling a rush of air every time a fist or kick grazed by. The boy thrust his arms out and launched the white cloaked man into the living room table, crushing it in the process, “Who are you?!” He yelled out over the noise, “Tell me your name and maybe I won’t kill you.”
“My name…” his voice echoed out of every speaker in the room, “is unimportant… but you can call me Celeron!” An explosion outside shook the building causing Falco to lose his focus for just a moment, but enough for Celeron to close in and strike him under the jaw, lifting him off the floor. Falco flipped around through the air and came to float for a second before his kick spun him around, sending a blast of air forward at Celeron. Though unable to see the attack, Celeron instinctively dodged underneath the blow allowing the arc of wind to further crush and scatter the pieces of the table sending the shrapnel into the surrounding appliances.
Before Falco could do anything further to defend himself, Celeron threw his arm around, a wire lashing out and wrapping around Falco’s leg, sending a sharp jolt through his body, making him scream out and fall to the floor. As he stood, Celeron came at him with a blade that crackled with electricity which revealed itself from the wrist of his gauntlet, “What are you? A Swiss army knife with legs?!”
Celeron replied by jerking the wire still attached to the boy’s leg, lifting him off balance and going into for the kill, raising the blade level then jabbing forward. Falco rolled his body back and lifted his trapped leg up and around, brushing the bladed arm aside while practically completely upside-down. The wire trailed behind and as wind kicked up around Falco and he spun, deterred Celeron’s bladed strikes.
Falco landed in a crouched position with his tied leg extended far out to one side. The aero-kinetic spun with his leg away and around, pulling the wire taught and forcing Celeron to stumble forward. As he finished the spin, he took his fist clenched tightly around the black cylinder and thrust it forward. With a hissing sound similar to hydraulics, the cylinder extended 3 feet in both directions then split into a three-pronged spear at each tip.
Celeron barely had time to react, his one arm occupied by the wire, and his other out to the side, there wasn’t nearly enough time to block or parry. Another wire with a hooked spear launched itself from his offset arm with the blade, quickly retracting once it made contact with any surface. Celeron’s body escaped the point blank surprise attack with a small gash in the side, a small price to pay for his carelessness. Following this, with fluidity similar to break dancing, Celeron rolled his body into a strange cartwheel resulting in a flip off the wall, effectively dodging the blasts of wind that tore small craters in the floor.
At last, Celeron gained the upper hand as he disconnected the wire stuck in the floor and fired one more at Falco, attaching to his other leg with a small 4 pronged head that latched itself deep into his leg on impact and released another disabling jolt. Celeron lifted his arms and pulled back, dropping Falco’s legs right out from under him, to which Falco recovered by using a powerful gust to correct his fall into a backwards roll and effectively, albeit painfully tear the wires off his legs.
Celeron ran forward completely unfazed, retracting the wires before landing a clean kick on Falco in the chest with the full force of his boot, which to Falco felt like being hit by a brick followed by a small truck when the hidden pile driver behind the heel struck out sending him flying into the front door.
As the air and dust settled, Celeron walked up to him now, standing confidently over Falco, allowing the young man to sit up, “You’ve lost now tell me what I want to know and your life will be spared.”
“Hah…” Falco winced as he felt his bruised chest, several bones most likely sprained if not worse, “As if.” Falco stood suddenly with his arms wrapped around his chest before throwing them out. Celeron braced himself as all the air in the room sucked away becoming a pseudo vacuum then all at once returned like a cannon, blasting him back into the window, plastering him there as if glued to the clear barrier.
“All neutral subjects have evacuated,” cracks formed across the surface as more and more pressure added on against Celeron’s body and a clearly mechanical and synthesized voice echoed from within Celeron’s helmet, “Clear to proceed. Lifting firewall.” He was flattened there, unable to lift even a finger but with his open palm against the glass, he released what appeared to be a light blue glimmer that traveled through the window and into the floor. Then the floor shook and after a second, in one big blast, the room erupted into fire engulfing both in the explosion.
Celeron was thrown through the window, the entire floor of the hotel suddenly blowing out in a mix of glass fire. He flew like a rock along with an entertainment center and half a couch, all the way across Verona Boulevard, mid flight correcting himself and shattering through the glass of the adjacent building and vanishing inside.
Out of the roof of the hotel, a pillar of flame rocketed up then dispersed revealing Falco to be mostly unharmed if not for a few frayed edges to his nice jacket. He glided down to the roof of the hotel and touched down, falling immediately to one knee. “There’s no way he survived that,” Falco gasped as he tried to catch his breath, the injury to his chest proving more difficult than initially expected. The boy gritted his teeth as across the now completely empty street he could see subtle flashes sparking across the entire floor where his opponent had retreated, “Is too much to ask for one stroke of good luck?”
Celeron returned to the window, this time with a monstrosity attached to his arm that looked like a senseless mesh of metal and wiring. The man in white lifted the massive appendage over his head and slammed it down on his other arm that acted as a support as it lit up from the inside. Falco was quick to move upon seeing his opponent still moving, getting away just in time, as the mechanical mutation on Celeron activated. There was a pair of flashes, much like those of a camera, only brighter and more encompassing, then from the barrel of the monstrosity a massive bolt of electricity erupted forth, arcing straight across the gap into the roof of Hotel Verona. The impact sent chunks of the roof flying out in every direction. Even out of the way of the initial blast, Falco struggled to bat away incoming debris and could still feel the static in the air drawing the hair on his skin to a fine point.
Falco took the chance to concentrate then snap his finger in Celeron’s direction. The action that strangely seemed to take allot out of the aero-kinetic resulted a moment later a bullet sized hole burrowed its way through the metal of his contraption and rendered it useless.
Celeron growled as the lights on his helmet changed from a deep green to a mix between the previous color and a bright yellow, then threw down the gun which broke apart into countless useless pieces upon separation from his arm. He took off into the air with a powerful leap aided by the pile drivers in his boots, flying clear back across the boulevard. Celeron collided with the wall of the Hotel and stuck to it before he stood and ran up the side of the wall just as through it was level ground.
Falco looked over the edge then ran to the hole still smoldering from the explosion. The fire below slowing dying as the extinguishers did their job. The boy lifted his arms overhead then thrust them down, a constant stream of air flowing into the hole causing the fire to flare up and become a raging inferno out of every other exit it could find, specifically the entire side of the building Celeron was attempting to climb.
Shielding himself from the flames, Celeron stopped and took a step back, but before the flames even died down, Falco returned, cutting a path through the wall of fire to collide with Celleron. The technopath was dislodged from the wall and flew back towards the ground before he reached out and shot two wires with arrow heads attached to the ends into the wall. They grabbed hold and stopped his decent, altering his path and slamming him against the surface with a painful crack let out from either the window or the Celeron himself.
Regardless of his physical condition, the boy composed himself again and ran up the wall at Falco, who immediately continued the barrage with gusts of concentrated air. Celeron flung his arms around in front of him, cutting through the attacks with each swing with the aid of a heavier quality wire released each time. From his feet, blue light sparked again, this time traveling all the way up the wall, following one of the support pillars on the outside of the building. A second after the light passed over a section, a long 3 inch thick coil of wires underneath the surface ripped its way up until it reached the aerokinetic, at which point it tore itself away and swatted the boy off the wall and out into the open air.
Celeron soon followed, reaching a little above Falco on the wall before launching himself out after him. He flew overhead, upsidedown and shot out two wires from each arm as he passed over. They wrapped around his opponent and jerked him to the side as each wire became taught and reeled him in.
Falco fought back with all his kotic strength, using his wind to correct his fall only to have Celeron use the wires to pull himself in and collide with him head on. The two fell through the sky at the earth with alarming speed. Just as two were about to impact the ground, Celeron pushed off and pulled back on the wires, swinging Falco around like a flail into the closest car but Falco covered himself in a sphere of wind that both acted as a cushion and a powerful enough outward blast to send Celeron flying backwards into another car, roll over the roof, and collapse on the road on the other side.
With the cab beneath him completely crushed, Falco stood and took a few steps forward. He stopped when he could hear the distant sounds of sirens heading their way. With a quick look back to see if the other man was going to strike while he retreated, he confirmed Celeron was not moving anytime soon and took off into the air with a giant gust in his wake, first making his way to the lowest roof and leaping further from there.
“Celeron! Do you hear me?! Get out of there now! You’re in danger of being compromised! Understand if you’re apprehended you will receive no support from the family. Celeron? Come in. Celeron!” a muffled voice screamed into Celerons ear from a built in microphone in his helmet.
“Understood. Retreating now.” Celeron stood up slowly, stumbling once as he regained his balance and lifted the weight from his left leg. His cracked helmet sparked a few times as he limped away, a moment later, vanishing completely from sight.
Meanwhile, Vereor stood in a nearby alley watching from the shadows as the streetlights one by one turned back on, flickering to life as the battle finally came to a close. The boy looked around for anyone else that may have stayed and watched but spotted no one. With that, Vereor made a hasty retreat himself and submerged himself in the shadows of Central Verona.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 10:25 pm
Once again, great work Rhiko! I'm sorry I didn't see this update sooner or I would've been all over this chapter. Especially since the last update was in December! Gah, I've missed your writing and your stories so much! It's a pleasure to be reading your writing again. biggrin DD
Great action scene between Falco and Celeron. I always thought it was a shame to not see more of Celeron in the CoV roleplay so it was nice to get more so-called screen time with him in this chapter. I'm also curious as to what Vereor is up to~ sly sly Vereor.
Also, the song Occupied Thinking and the first two words "Hotel Verona"... I giggle snorted. :3 Keep it up Rhiko!
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