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marieaskelinton

 
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:00 pm


Live You

be happy with your life
it's not that bad
it's the only one you have
do what you want
life's to short not to
express yourself
not others
be you
shine
let people see you
don't change
for anything
be proud of who you are
or things will leave a scar
show your face
put others out of mind
leave them behind
 
PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:31 am


There were quite a few errors(Like this one:be happy with your life
not sad
should really look like this:
Be happy with your life,
Not sad.) and parts of it didn't flow easily but other than that it was a good poem! good job!(o:

DKMiller

 
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marieaskelinton

 
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:59 pm


DKMiller
There were quite a few errors(Like this one:be happy with your life
not sad
should really look like this:
Be happy with your life,
Not sad.) and parts of it didn't flow easily but other than that it was a good poem! good job!(o:

thanks for telling me and your right it sounded alittle weird. so i fixed it and added someting different tell me what your think.
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