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Fallen Lucien Hoshigaki /Genin/Hidden Mist village (Approved

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Im_Bull3t_Proof

PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:15 pm




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Full Name: Fallen Lucien Hoshigaki


Nickname:Lucien


Famous Shinobi Name:
[Chuunin or higher]

Birth date: April 27th


Age: 17


Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Straight


Race: Japenese/Korean


Rank:Genin


Shinobi Profession:Weapons,Ninjutsu.


Nindo:You mock me, now shall we cut you to guts?


Major Shinobi Information:

Bloodline:
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color: Extremely dark blue
Chakra Element: Water,Wind.

Battle Strength:Ninjutsu,Kenjutsu
Battle Weakness:Taijutsu,hand to hand combat.

Summoning Information:N/A

Summoning Type: [Chunin and Higher]
Boss Summoning: [Chunin and Higher]

Shinobi Equipment Information

Headband Location: Located on his head
Headband Style: Slanted covering half of his eye
Headband Color: Silver with the mist village sign and blue straps.
Flak Jacket Style: [Optional for Jouin]
Flak Jacket Color: [Optional for Jouin]
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Weapon Class: Katana
Name of Weapon: Slice n Dice
Weapon Range: Medium
Special Abilities:Its abilitys is that its sharper then other katana it can cut through 5 shirts piled up together in a single slash.
Weapon Location: Onto the right side of his waist.

Other Weapons:N/A


Kunai Holster Location: On his left side of his waist
Kunai Holster Color: Black.
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: On the same location of his Kunai but a little bit more to the left
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Bright yellow
Backpack Color: Neon green,Black.
Backpack Style:Circular with a bunch of pockets along with the hidden mist willage sign in the middle of the backpack.


Squad Number/Squad Name: [Only if teacher]
Squad Members: [N/A]


Technique List:

Non-Elemental
((General Skills))
Kai - Dispell
Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Jutsu
Escape Jutsu
Art of Tree Climbing
Substitution Jutsu (1 Per Battle)

(E)
One thousand years of death

(D)


(C)


(B)


(A)



Element - ELEMENT ONE
(E)


(D)
Hidden mist technique

(C)


(B)


(A)


(S)



Element - ELEMENT TWO
(E)


(D)


(C)


(B)


(A)


(S)




Genjutsu





Taijutsu/Kenjutsu






Shinobi Stat System

Basic Chart

Strength Rank: B-rank
Speed Rank: C-rank
Stamina Rank: D-rank
Defense Rank: C-rank
Chakra Level: D-rank
Chakra Control Level: E-rank

Chart (With Additional Points)

Strength Rank: B-rank
Speed Rank: c-rank
Stamina Rank: D-rank
Defense Rank: C-rank
Chakra Level: D-rank
Chakra Control Level: E-rank


Personal Shinobi Information:

Height: 6'7

Weight: 120 lb

Personality:Hot headed,Wise,Kind at times.

Personal Skill: Sports playing.

Favorite Food: Chicken.

Favorite Drink:Soda.

Least Favorite Food: Beans.

Likes: The guts of his opponet,Weapons,explosions.

Dislikes:Weak people,Begging,Giving up.

Hates:Immature people,Wannabes,Easy stuff,Perverts.

Village:Hidden mist.

Family biggrin eceased brother,Mom and Father. The only one remaining now is Fallen.


Background History:Fallen was borned into the Mist village regular as always, his mother and father forced him to work out everyday just to see the impression. He had watched them drink alchohol everyday with great disappointment. When he was a academy student he had worked very hard in every class but he mocks Taijutsu and has not get the point of doing martial arts when you can just slice with kenjutsu. His friends were masters in taijutsu and tryed to persuade him into working harder but he still had not get the point of Taijutsu.


After he was promoted into Genin his parents had gotten drunk as ever, they never even came to his party or even cared about a single thing he had done. Once his parents had told him not to light up the matches in the house but he had never listened. One day both of his parents stopped drinking, they both realized they had been both alchohol addicts! They swore they would never drink again but sadly soon after they had stopped both of Fallens parents memory has been erased and had not remembered anything.


Meanwhile when Fallens parents had been confused for days his mom had been pregnant, after his brother came out they only claimed Fallen was not their son but only the new born brother was. In the middle of Fallens training session he got very frustarated in the thought of remembering his mom was ignoring himself, after he had finished he walked over to his own house and lit up every match he had find in his house and ran out right away. As he watched the house burn away he accused his brother who was watching with Fallen the house burn away his brother was killed by a elder who was friends with Fallens parents. Fallen now lives a lonely life looking for destruction of the other villages,


Theme Song biggrin iary of Jane by breaking Benjamin.


Extra Comments on Character:

PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:29 pm


Your stat chart is all wrong. You can find the right one here.

http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=19433713

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Im_Bull3t_Proof

PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:51 pm


I really dont get it......
PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:05 pm


you start with the basic chart which has 1E-rank 2D-ranks
2C-Ranks and 1B-rank stat. then as you get promoted within your village you earn more stat points.

xZechsx
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Im_Bull3t_Proof

PostPosted: Sun Jul 18, 2010 9:11 am


Edited it
PostPosted: Sun Jul 18, 2010 9:12 am


What about your sword ability. Its kinda vague. Can you elaborate

xZechsx
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Im_Bull3t_Proof

PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 1:49 pm


Edited again.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:36 pm


That sword ability is too much for a genin. That weapon ability is too much. my ability I mean like can it channel chakra well or a cuatom weapon for your rpc that they use that has a hideen feature or something like that but to send water into the slash I dont get it really.

And your chart is wrong again unless you just want all D ranks

xZechsx
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Im_Bull3t_Proof

PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:38 pm


ok ill put in e-rank
PostPosted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:04 am


you just don't get it do you?

ok let me explain it to you as nicely and as simply as i can. and i will use examples:

1st: Your Basic Chat should have the following :

1 B-ranked skill
2 C-ranked skills
2 D-ranked skills
1 E-Ranked Skill

So it should look something like this:

Strength Rank: D-rank
Speed Rank: C-rank
Stamina Rank: C-rank
Defense Rank: E-rank
Chakra Level: B-rank
Chakra Control Level: D-rank

Now your a Genin so you will only have the basic chart for now, which means your current chart should look the same as your basic one. as you rank up you will earn more stat points to add in your chart, but thats a lesson for another time ^ ^.

now please use this guide line to finish your chart correctly.  

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xZechsx
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:39 am


Thank you Lloyd

And your sword cannot make you faster. There is no way a swords ability can make you faster.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:52 pm


Oh I get it ill change it now, Ill make my sword have no ability any way sweatdrop

Im_Bull3t_Proof


xZechsx
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:05 pm


ok. pm me when you want me to approve it.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:05 pm


Approved

xZechsx
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Im_Bull3t_Proof

PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:53 pm


Alright thanks.
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