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PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:50 pm


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Name: Gokatsu Hiyozaki
Aliases/ Nicknames: Go
Age: 144 years (Physically 14)
Division/Seat: 13th Division Lieutenant
Height: 5'1
Weight: 104 lbs
Personality: A cheerful, happy-go-lucky individual, Go is very laid-back and relaxed. Nothing really bothers him, and he is usually seen eating a lollipop.
Theme Song(s): Haruka Kanata - The Gothic Dolls
Physical Description: (See above picture) Go wears a pair of gloves when fighting.
Scratch this. Sora's outfit, from Kingdom Hearts 2. That kid's got a serious sense of style.
Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description: Sentokashu - A long, broad sword. It is essentially a very broad katana, having a width of 1 1/2 feet and a length of 5 feet. The hilt is blue, and the guard is in the shape of an intricate leaf. It is temperamental, like Yumichika's. She likes singing better then dancing, so when Go asks her to dance, she is less enthusiastic, and her power lessens. When Go asks her to sing, she happily obliges, and her true power emerges.
Zanpaku-to Sword Type: Kido/Melee
Zanpaku-to Element: Water

Shikai Name and Abilities: Nii Haorakka no Dansu (Dance of Two Falling Leaves) - The first of Sentokashu's two forms. Sentokashu splits in two. The blades look like two machetes, and are blue in color. The release command is: "Dance Like A Falling Leaf, Sentokashu!" Special Abilities: Dance 1: Frontal Circle - A defensive move. Go takes the two blades and, starting from the top, brings the blades in an arc until they meet at the bottom, making a circle. A circular disc of water appears, and absorbs most attacks. Dance 2: Dancing River - Go slashes with the blades, and two blades of water emerges from it. Go can continue slashing, and as he progressively gets faster and faster, the dance becomes wilder and less restrained. Dance 3: Divine Redemption - Go stabs at the enemy. Even if only one of the blades manages to impale the target, a violent eruption of water comes from it and tears the target apart.

Roko Torinohane no Uta (Song of a Bird's Six Feathers) - Sentokashu's true form. The blade splits into six, with Go holding one blade in between two fingers, 3 in his left hand, three in his right. The blades can become long or short at will, and can bend. The maximum range of the blades is 90 feet, but if one is kept short, the others will split the extra distance between them. If all others are kept short, one blade can reach up to 540 yards. When stabbed into the ground, they can produce spears of water, and turn the ground into water.

Bankai: Hyaku Katana wa, Ochiba Noyoni (100 Swords, like Falling Leaves) - Sentokashu splits herself into 100 swords. Go holds two, and the others are controlled by the mind. They can swarm an enemy, deflect attacks, and obliterate armies of Hollows. A truly frightening Bankai. Go rarely has to use it, as his Shikai is usually powerful enough.



Kidou: By far, this is Go's specialty. He has mastered both Hado and Bakudo #1-60, and uses them often in combat. This makes up for his average abilities in hand-to-hand, although he is adept at Swordsmanship.
Bakudo:
○1○
Sai
Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
Incantation:
unknown.

○4○
Hainawa
An energy rope entangles the target's arms.
Incantation:
unknown.

○8○
Seki
Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.
Incantation:
unknown.

○9○
Geki
Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them.
Incantation:
"Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
○?○
Hōrin
Causes an orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns to erupt from the users hand and attempt to trap a target. the end of it remains in the hands of the user allowing them to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. The Kidō is able to connect with another one of itself if both have captured a target and bind them together.
Incantation:
"Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!"

○21○
Sekienton
Creates a blast upon activation and is used like a ninja's smoke bomb.
Incantation:
unknown.

○26○
Kyokko
Hides the target from sight, by bending light. The spell has the ability to totally hide the presence and reiatsu of the user or specified object.
Incantation:
unknown.

○30○
Shitotsu Sansen
Forming a golden triangle with one's finger, it shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in a shape of an equilateral triangle
Incantation:
unknown.

○37○
Tsuriboshi
Creates a star-shaped cushion of Spiritual Energy, which anchors it to nearby objects with "ropes" of spirit particles. It can stop falling objects, acting like a safety net.
Incantation:
unknown.

○39○
Enkosen
Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks.
Incantation:
unknown.

○58○
Kakushitsuijaku
Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on. To activate it, the user must draw a circle on the ground, cut into four parts with a specific character in each. The incantation animates the circle, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude.
Incantation:
"Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain."

○61○
Rikujōkōrō
Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams
Incantation:
"Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!"

○62○
Hyapporankan
A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile.
Incantation:
unknown.

○63○
Sajo Sabaku
Similar to Bakudō No. 4, but stronger, this spell binds the arms of a target.
Incantation:
unknown.


Hado:


○1○
Shō
Pushes the target away from the caster.
Incantation:
unknown.

○4○
Byakurai
The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
Incantation:
unknown.

○11○
Tsuzuri Raiden
Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.
Incantation:
unknown.

○31○
Shakkahō
Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
Incantation:
"Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"

○33○
Sōkatsui
Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.
Incantation:
"Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."

○54○
Haien
Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.
Incantation:
unknown.

○58○
Tenran
A widening tornado-like blast is fired towards the target.
Incantation:
unknown.




Skills: Expert Kido Practitioneer, Skilled Swordsman, Adept at Shunpo, Surprisingly Perceptive.
Bio:

Before Death: Born into a poor family, Go did his best to help his mother and father make the ends meet. Every day, he did hard work, more then most adults do, and gave all of his money to his parents, for helping the house. As poor as they were, he saw poorer people then he and his family, and his heart went out to them, as he could only imagine what their life was like. One day, as he was walking home from one of his 4 jobs, he was mugged for his money. In the struggle that ensued, one of them accidentally broke his neck. Horrified, they took the money and fled.

As a Plus: Go wandered around the town he once lived in, watching over his parents. He was often set upon by Hollows, but managed to escape every time. His Chain of Fate continued to pull a hole in his chest. One night, he was set upon by many Hollows, because of his high spiritual density. Just as he was about to be devoured, he got a strange feeling in his body, and he released a massive wave of reiatsu, obliterating the Hollows. A Shinigami discovered him while looking for the source of this release of power, and used Soul Burial on Go.

In The Soul Society: Go had a happy life in the Soul Society, but it didn't last for more then a few months, as that's the amount of time it took for him to become a Shinigami. He became one in order to help Pluses leave their suffering behind, as he could sympathize.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:55 pm


Division 13 already has a Fukutaichou. Go for third seat, or choose a different division.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:48 pm


How about 11th? Go will be the lone voice of reason, and the one who delivers a**-kicking upon those who get too worked up.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:25 pm


A few things~

Physical description is not clothes, which by the way, all Shinigami wear the same black Kosode. Here is an example of a great physical description:


Kiyen Kurata

Nasune has a very stunning physical description but wasn’t it to be expected? Foxes were not at all near being ugly creatures. They are capable of being creatures of the day or the night though in this arrancar, he prefers the night sky. The silvery, protracted tresses are almost ground length in its appearance and hold the physical appearance of thin fur from an arctic fox. These shiny white strands with illuminating platinum with in them are so thin that they appear to make his hair appear thicker then what it actually is but of course, fingers can be ran threw them easily like an acidic knife to already hot butter. Though most of the time his hair is covered on the right side of his face, when moved aside then what are revealed are ocean colored eyes under the calm moon light. They are moderate in size but due to his fox nature they are slanted which give off a very seductive look about his gaze onto another individual. The remnants of his hollow mask happen to be in the shape of his own fox ears. They can still move and act as regular fox ears there just in the form of his hollow mask. His arrancar garments are very different from others but of course it still is the traditional white. There is a very tight fitted under armor (underkimono) shirt that is thinner then an actual T-shirt. It seems to be silver in color but his abs can be seen almost clearly due to the tight fit of the actual shirt. His hakama is the standard white garment in color but with silver designs upon it that have no real meaning but on it, those designs make up the shape of the actual fox. His Kosode is open all the time and fitted loosely around his body. This is also a snow white in color with the same silver traces that make up the fox on the back. His obi which is basically used for decoration use is the only thing that happens to be the same color as his eyes, a dark water blue while his hakama himo is still the normal white color and slightly thinner around the wait then others to only put a emphasis on his lean build. His tabi socks are the natural white in color whiles his waraji, (straw sandals) are unique and they too are white in color. To top off Nasune’s looks are the fingerless white gloves that have small traces of silver on them as well. Nasune’s zanpaktou is worn on left side.


Here's an example of an okay one:



da_final_ninja

Alex is kind of short for his age, with slick black hair. He wears the normal captain's uniform, but wears a sort of good-luck silver bracelet on his left wrist. He is skinny but can eat like a horse and his muscles aren't as big as most, but he is very strong.


That's a physical description. (:

Second; you basically gave your blade three releases. I understand you're trying to be like Yumichika, but yours is not the same was as his. The true form of your blade is totally different then the first form, unlike Yumichika. His blade was still the same in second form, and the way I see it, his true blade was just like a major attack.

So either take out the first shikai, the second shikai or the bankai. Doesn't matter to me.

As for the attacks, the third attack is too much for a shikai, its basically an auto kill if hit.

And there is already someone trying out for Division 11 Fukutaichou, which the Captain of the Squad has approved. You can challenge him, if you wish, or you can change squads, but the Captain does not want an elemental Zanpakuto on her squad, so it might be best for you to just switch squads.

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