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 Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:35 pm
✿Welcome,table of contents & updates✿
Welcome in my quest thread~
Thread status: Open
I'll need help with/critiques on:
Essence
Names for the essences
Souls
✿Table of contents
*01 - Welcome, table of contents & updates
*02 - Essence ideas
*03 - Soul ideas
*04 - Raevan
*05 - Guardian
*06 - RP's
*07 - Reserved
✿Updates
07/12,Thread created & Joined Luka's rehoming event.
07/19, My guardian passed R1 from the rehoming event, I guess she's fine for now.
07/16,Updated Evershining Metal and added abilities for possible Raevan
08/07, Added glowing scale
08/09, Chrysta's Ref sheet is finished and up in the guardian post !
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:38 pm
✿Essence concepts✿
Quote: Evershining Metal (idea from July 12th, updated July 16th) A little piece a metal that you've had lying around for years and which never seems to rust. It looks kind of like a knife blade but despite the ultra sharp edges it has, it doesn't seem to be able to cut anything. It does seem to be able to repair stuff. This little piece was once part of a big rock, but possibly got separated from it during the storm, which gave it the weird features it has now.
Quote: Floating stone (july 12th) A gemstone that seems to float on top of some water, unable to sink. When you hold it, it feels as light as a feather, deluding your senses
Quote: Glowing Scale (August 7th)
A pretty colored fishscale that glows
possible abilties : able to breath under water with this scale?
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:39 pm
✿Souls✿
Agathodaemon
a daemon or presiding spirit of the vineyards and grainfields and a personal companion spirit, similar to the Roman genius, ensuring good luck, health and wisdom.
Meerkat
The meerkat or suricate Suricata suricatta, a small mammal, is a member of the mongoose family. Meerkats live in all parts of the Kalahari Desert in Botswana and in South Africa. A meerkat clan often contains about 20 meerkats, but some superfamilies have 50 or more members. Meerkats have an average life span of 12-14 years.
According to African popular belief (mainly in the Zambian/Zimbabwean region), the meerkat is also known as the sun angel, as it protects villages from the moon devil or the werewolf which is believed to attack stray cattle or lone tribesmen.
They are partially immune to certain venoms; they are immune to the very strong venom of the scorpions of the Kalahari Desert.
Lucanus cervus
Lucanus cervus is the best-known species of stag beetle (family Lucanidae), and is sometimes referred to simply as the stag beetle. It lives in holes in old trees and dead trunks, in the forest as well as in groves. Forest management, in eliminating old trees and deadwood, eliminates at the same time the habitat and food of this species. Once quite common, the population of the Lucanus cervus, along with that of other species of beetles which feed on wood, is in steep decline, and is now listed as a globally threatened/declining species.
Bearded dragon
Pogona vitticeps, the Central (or Inland) Bearded Dragon, is a species of agamid lizard occurring in a wide range of arid to semi-arid regions of Australia. This species is very popularly kept as a pet and exhibited in zoos.
Bearded dragons come in a wide variety of colors, including brown, grey, reddish-brown, red, yellow, white and orange.They are capable of undergoing very slight changes in the shade of their color to help regulate temperature. The specialized scales along both sides of the throat, neck, and head form many narrow spines which run down the side of the body to the tail. When feeling threatened a Bearded dragon will flatten its body against the ground, puff out its spiny throat, and open its jaws to make itself appear larger.
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:40 pm
✿Raevan ideas✿
Quote: *Name*Gender*Fel EssenceEvershining metal*Soul*Personality*Hobbies*Possible PowersInstead of cutting things like metal usually does, the Reavan is able to repair stuff, however you'll always see something has been repaired, as the Raevan grows older it might be able to repair things without leaving traces of it being repaired. However, the Raevan is not able to repair life threatening wounds or able to bring back the dead (repair life LOL) *Feeding
Quote: *Name*Gender*Fel Essence*Soul Meerkat*Personality*Hobbies*Possible Powers Immune to venom, Able to make cures?
His/her blood is an antidote for poison, however, when the Raevan is still a Frei, the antidote in his/her blood is still very weak, meaning that more blood is needed to cure someone from poisoning. Of course the Raevan will be in serious trouble when he/she gives out too many of his/her blood.
When the Raevan gets older, the antidote in his/her blood will become stronger, and his/her blood may even be able to cure illnesses next to the poisoning.
*Feeding
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:42 pm
✿Guardian✿
NAME :
Chrysta Embark
GENDER :
Female
AGE :
22
OCCUPATION:
paid vet intern
RACE :
human
LIKES :
books,animals,computers,sleeping in,quiet surroundings,dessert
DISLIKES :
being wrong,heat(summer),being snarled at,dramallamas
LOOKS :
Chrysta has auburn brown hair mostly tied up with a hair clip at the back of her head or in a ponytail, her bright blue eyes peeking trough rimless glasses.
She's a small person of only 5' 6" .
PERSONALITY :
Chrysta is a cheerful person whom is prone to pranks and jokes, but has a tendency to hide anything that bothers her.
she's way too talkative for her own good.
Her temper is one that takes a while to simmer, but if someone or something causes her to lose her temper, you better run or you'll be the object her
rage will be aimed at.
She's somewhat of a procrastinator when it involves doing something she doesn't really like (Paperwork,Cleaning etc) but she can diligently work on it once she puts her mind to it.
Chrysta totally loves animals and she loves to pet them/look at them and take care of them.
She can't stand to see animals hurt so she always tries to help them, She also gets to know a lot of people through her job thus killing two birds with one stone.
She currently has 4 cats who follow her around in the area surrounding her house. They often walk into the clinic to be treated/petted by waiting people.
HISTORY :
Left home at an early age to escape from the busy environment where she's been in, with 5 younger siblings around it's hard to find a piece of quiet in the house.
Her parents were always busy with her younger siblings so they paid almost no attention to her.
After moving out to live with her only older sibling, her sister, she was finally able to get the quiet surrounding she wanted so badly.
She stayed with her oldest sister for a couple of years till she finished high school and was able to move in at a dorm near the university where she's able to study veterinary medicine.
she's now living in an apartment right above the clinic where she works
[Chrysta's Ref sheet!]
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:53 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:54 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:18 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:20 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:12 pm
✿July 16th, Updated Evershining Metal and added abilities for possible Raevans✿
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:06 am
✿08/07 Added glowing scale and scrapped it.
Added more to evershining metal ✿
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:50 pm
UUUGGGNNN.
Going to try my best to help you. LOL. I'm still a bit out of it for some reason.
Your Evershining Metal, the description seems to break off into something about tolls. And... yea. oTL
If you're going for a metallic fel essence, I'd suggest something more out of the ordinary. Right now, imo, it's not very exciting.
Like a metal with a colloid properties or something.
As for your Glowing Scale, it sounds a lot like the pre-existing fel essence Independant Bioluminescence.
As for soul choices, I really like the idea of a stag beetle and Bearded Dragon. Though the meerkat isn't bad either. As for your Raevan ideas, I won't comment since it seems like you're still thinking on those. And I'm assuming your guardian is fine since you had no problems in R1 for Luka's rehoming.
I hope that this helped some. OTL
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:15 pm
Thank you for your crit koco! <3333
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:14 am
✿08/09, Chrysta's Ref sheet is finished and up in the guardian post !✿
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