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Hammalea

PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:52 pm


This is a collection of poems that were inspired by a

manga series. If you know what they are from and/or think you

know please pm your answer to me so you don't spoil the fun for

others ^_^

If you're right you will get free hugs and cookies XD

Comments are always welcome.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:54 pm



me and you
you and me
always together
in death
in life
here and now
there and then
today
tonight
forever
and never
night
and day
always together
and forever apart
so is the curse
that binds
me and you
you and me

Hammalea


Hammalea

PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:55 pm


The rain falls
on my hot skin

my head is light
my heart is broken

i will never love again

the rain is falling
and i was betrayed

the knife is in my hand
cold and sharp

i want to cry, scream
but my mouth is shut

i will never love again
the knife bites my skin

blood wells up and thins
the rain draws it out

i fall to the ground
rain and blood
I will never love again
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:56 pm


my voice is gone
i will never sing again

i live, but i am silent
my voice is gone

what is left?
my heart beats

someone calls out
i look behind me

they say they are sorry
i forgive him

but my voice is gone

the wind plays with my hair
tugs at my clothes

he reaches for me
i lean back

my voice is gone
i will never sing again

Hammalea


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:18 pm


Hmmm...I don't know where they are from, lol. I'm not good at those kind of things. My favorite has to be the second one for sure. You can feel the depression and sadness, it's practically seeping through the poem. I also have a thing for poems that repeat a certain line over and over again. There's a word for that...lol.

Anyways, good job biggrin . Feel free to check out my poem, it's called "Time In A Bottle". It's not anime related, but you may enjoy it all the same!
PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:45 pm


Yay, thank you ^_^

I know what you mean, I don't remember what it's called either. If you are interested in knowing I'll be glad to pm you the answer lol. I did check out your poem. Long as hell if I remember right @_@

But that's ok, some of the best are long like that. Thank you again for commenting! It means a lot to me.

Hammalea

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