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Lovely Morningstar

PostPosted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:33 pm


"Look in the closet!" I asked my father who sighed. "I have told you there are no monsters in there..." He replied. "See it's you jumper... Relax kiddo... No monsters are in your closet tonight"

"Well what about under my bed?"
"No."
"Out the window?"
"No."
"Downstairs?"
"No."
"Outside?"

"...." My father grew silent. "Yes... You could say that... But most aren't that big or scary.. Most aren't really hairy with sharp teeth. Think on it kid.. You'll know when you grow up..."

That one thing my father said to me had me puzzled for years... Until I met this man.

I did not know him too well... But I knew him long enough to know his attidute, personality, etc.

Suddenly it hit me.. I walked up to him and said...


"You remind me of a monster in my closet..."  
PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:37 pm


Don't mean any disrespect by posting a reply to your poem, but...

No truer words have been said than yours....

Hammalea


Lovely Morningstar

PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:39 pm


Hammalea
Don't mean any disrespect by posting a reply to your poem, but...

No truer words have been said than yours....


disrespect? why would that be? I WANT people to tell me how they feel about my literature.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:02 pm


That is good. I didn't want to make you mad or step on toes or anything lol. You're a good writer.

Hammalea

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