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PostPosted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 2:18 pm


I've done this drawing for my sig and I wanted to know what can I do to make it better.
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thanx!! biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:55 pm


Really nobody have nothing to say about it??

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 9:11 pm


well. lets see
here is some things thay you can change.:
I can see how you are trying to make your arms muscular but
liek theyre unporportional. i could explain more if i knew how to red line it or whatever.

and the hair needs to have some what on an outline. also the way the legs are shaped to like on his pants zipper part thing ( i dunno what it is called) isnt in line with the body.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:45 am


-The neck is a bit off, try adjusting the left side to be a bit more even with the right.
-The elbows of each arm are not in the same place, and the muscles of the arms look a bit odd. Try making the back of the arm (tricep area) a bit more convex.
- The sword looks a bit curved (I don't know if it was meant to be that way).

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