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 Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:42 pm
This smile on my face is very deceiving,
'Cause guess what buddy? I'm not leaving.
I am here for good.
I guess you have misunderstood.
You can't hide under your blanket or under your bed.
Because guess what I'm in your head.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:15 pm
I was pleasantly surprised by the cleverness of this poem. The first line had me expecting much less of the premise, and I commend you for what you have created here and apologize for doubting your goal. Keep up the good work smile
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Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 8:56 pm
Kudos, i too didn't expect the ending. Makes for a great twist. Keep up the good work!
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