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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:37 am
Name- Mizuki Shuichi
Aliase- Sorrowful Dreamer of Fire
Physical description- She's 5'1. She has a small structure. Her skin is pale like a ghost. Her eyes are as black as coals with sadness, but the red tint that's like fire shows insane madness. She is petite and weighs about 85 Ibs. Her hair is cut at different lengths. The bangs reach down to her chin, there's a bunch of hair put in the style of the bun that if you face her, it curves clockwise above her head. She also has extra long hair going from the back of the bun to the back of her knees.
Clothes- She has a strapless, form fitting, and black shirt on with a mini skirt. If you face her, on her left side is a silver long bow on her hip connected to the skirt. She wears a sterling silver chained necklace that holds a black amulet.
Abilities- Fire
Zanpakuto- The zanpakuto is very thin, with a black hilt and silver blade. It is 5 ft. long. The sheath is black as well.
Shikai- The blade only widens to about five inches, and nothing else. Its ability is fire and wind as well as her's. The way it attacks is when she swings it, flames come from the blade itself. She can also aim the tip of her zanpakuto to her enemy and shoot fire. Mostly she misses and surprises the enemy by controlling the fire she shot towards them.
Bankai- appearance, ability, attacks, and only captains can have bankai.
Skills- Doing backflips and frontflips perfectly!
Personality- She's always depressed, but she never tries to kill herself, but she certainly does wait for that day to come. She doesn't accept friends at all, because of her own selfish reason. She doesn't care about anything, and she certainly won't. She doesn't give or take offers from anything or anyone.
Weakness- Happiness and water.
Biography- Mizuki was only fourteen years old. She had an amazing life, went to school every week, hung out with her friends any chance she got, and had everything she wanted. Though, things started getting rough during school. A boy, named Nakatsu, was a big part of her best friend's life, and her name was Naoki. The story about them was that they dated the year before and broke up a month later. When they broke up, she was heart broken, but he didn't care. So everyday she was crying and begging for him back, but he kept saying "No." As next year rolled around, Naoki and Nakatsu decided to text each other, and have her sneak to his house one night. So she does, but when she gets back, she didn't know how to put the window back together. Her parents thought a burgalur came upon them, but eventually they found out the truth. She was strongly hurt that she had to be grounded for a month, but even worst happened when he told her that he hated her. She started cutting herself, nearly killing herself, and wouldn't stop crying during school hours. I tried to help her out, but she wouldn't let me, so I moved on, but was still her best friend. Months later, I get a text message during school, and it was from Nakatsu (he was standing in the same room as I was at the time) but the message said "Hey, will you please text Naoki, I think I made her mad." I texted back "Yeah, do you mind telling me what happened?" So as I waited for his reply I texted Naoki asking her if she was mad at him. He texted me back saying, "Well, I heard you liked me, but hated me because of what I said to Naoki, and I was wondering if you liked me." I was shocked. I texted back "If you want to know the truth, yeah I do like you, but do you like me?" It took him awhile to answer back, probably because of a teacher was standing there and would've taken his phone. So I waited patiently for both of them to reply. Finally after probably ten minutes, he replied saying that he did like me, so we made an agreement to talk to Naoki the next day and make sure if she is okay, and that our decision wouldn't bother her if we went out (even though we wouldn't care and we still would've done it). She said that we were the two most loved people in her life and that if we were happy, she would be too. So we started going out. It was a week that we dated and broke up because of her. The whole time she was whining and crying, and whenever Nakatsu and I were in the same room, she would make a scene of leaving us alone. So one day, during lunch I decided to ask her if it was really that bad, and she said "It can't get worse than this." So I was raging and Nakatsu and I texted each other when we got home from school. I told him that I was confused and didn't know what to do, because I didn't know how to split my time with him and her, and that she whines and cries all the time. He tells me that it's okay if I hung out with her the most. That made me feel like he didn't even care if we went out or not. Then, he calls her some terrible things, and I got extremely mad at him. So he says, "Well, if it makes things better, we need to break up." And I say "Fine." The next day was when we got into a fight, and it started with him saying "Did you tell anybody about our discussion last night?" I said "Yeah, I told Naoki what you said about her!" So he picked up his phone and started texting me in the same room again, and even my other friend mentioned that was stupid. This is the way I ended it, I stormed out of the room saying that I was done with this crap. Ever since then, we never spoke to each other ever again. A week later, Naoki decides to go spend the night at a friend's house that was out of town for a night. She told me her friend's older brother wasn't a good person, but I didn't care because it was her choice. She went that night and had to go to the hospital, because of something he did to her. I found out two days later on Monday. I bawled my eyes out for her the whole entire week. I felt strongly bad and thought that it was my fault that I let her go because I did have a bad feeling about it. When she got back, she explained a little about it, and got better by a week later. I'm now thinking, if it was that bad of a problem to her, why does she have a boyfriend? Why does she keep touching him the way she does? Even her clothing style is getting worse by the moment! It's disgusting! Honestly I think she lied about everything so she wouldn't get in trouble. She lied to me, her family, her friends, and the boy that supposedly "hurt" her. Now regretting the break-up between Nakatsu and I, I always remember of what he said about her was right. He told me the truth. So in the month of July, my birthday came along. I'm excited and ready to turn fifteen. I have a birthday party inviting all my close friends and Nakatsu, but not Naoki. She was clueless about it, or so I thought. Well the party was at my house, and we were all playing games, swimming, and pretty much anything we wanted, and everyone was having fun. Eventually, hours later, the time for everyone to leave, Naoki came walking up to me, and started yelling at me. "I hate you! I hate you! Why would you do this to me!?! As well as inviting him! You did this on purpose!" And she kept going on and on about how I ruined her life. So I busted off yelling "You liar! You know that boy didn't "hurt" you! You just wanted it all to yourself and not get in trouble! You promise everyone that you would wait! I hate you and your little lies and depression! And you made me look like an idiot the week you were gone, because I was crying for you! I hate you!" Finally she pulled a gun and shot me, Nakatsu, my closest friend that was like a sister to me, and everyone around, and we all died that night. That's how I died and why.
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:49 am
I like the biography. As for the fire wind ability, change it. Make it only fire, because you don't do anything with wind. just say when the fire leaves the sword, she can control where it goes.
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:53 am
Ok, I went and changed it, hpefully it's better biggrin
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:54 am
Super approved da da da duh
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:57 am
You can be the vice captain of that squad if you like.
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:06 am
Yeah, okay I'll take Vice Capain. xd
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:09 am
as a added bonus you can have shunpo or flash step..... whatever you want to call it. hahaha.
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:11 am
SWEET! That's awesome! Thank you! biggrin
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