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 Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 12:22 am
I'm writing a fantasy/sci-fi story that I've been working on for the last... let's see... 5 years, now. I have finally completed the outline and am now beginning the process of actually writing it.
I'm looking for someone(s) to read my outline and give me advice and stuff on what's good, what's not, what does/doesn't fit... that sort of stuff.
If anyone's willing to be an editor, let me know. I'm going to warn you now that the outline is 17 pages long sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 11:24 am
I don't have time to read that much, but if you could sum it up, I can tell you what I think... Is that a reasonable question? smile
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 3:56 pm
I'm always willing to beta stuff - just realize that i may not crit it at once - and more than likely I'll be editing in word and just tracking the changes for you.
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 4:22 pm
I'd be happy to look over the outline. E-mail it to me at dispatchNA@yahoo.com. However, I probably won't be able to get at it this weekend (very limited computer time for the next three days). But I'll get to it as soon as possible.
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 4:44 pm
OK. I'm wanting to post my outline, but I don't want to take up 7 whole pages of posts or anything. How should I post up my outline so people can read it??? gonk
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 8:46 pm
Try posting the outine at Fictionpress.com or something, and then posting the link here.
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2004 10:58 pm
Ok. I've posted my outline and what I have written so far for my story on www.fictionpress.com
Look for my name: Victoria C. Efram
The story "Rift to the Devion Universe" is my outline. I'm going to appologize now for the reading difficulty of the outline. when I uploaded it onto the site, it shifted eveything over from outline form to a story format, so you realy need to pay attention and see when the next chapter begins. If anyone's having trouble reading it, send my your email address and I'll just send it to you so you get the real thing. I tried highlighting the beginning of each chapter, but the wab site changed it back to black font.
Anyway, the actual work-in-progess story that I've barely begun is entitled "Rift to Devion Universe" I would have just used the same title, but the site wouldn't let me.
All in all, my story is now up for anyone and eveyone to see. Have fun reading it and let me know what you think! heart 3nodding heart
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