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 Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:01 pm
11th squad captain
Name:Shicca Grave
Aliases/Nickname: Grave
Physical Description
Height 4ft 10in
Weight 110
Age 19
Shicca Grave is a small very small captain that resembles a ghost like child. His hair is silvery white with long spikes through it and he has Dark blue eyes and pale skin. He wears he captains suit and holds a large sword that is twice his length but very thin.
The most dangerous part about him is his fast movements and large amount of power.
Clothes: He mostly wears the Captains suit with long sleaves and the rest changed to match his height.
Zanpakuto: A 8ft long sword with a 2ft long handle and a 6 ft long katana blade. It has a blend of colors mixed into the silver color of the blade.
Sword's Name: Aivro
shikai: explosive metal powder falls from the surface of the blade and is controlled by the user. The powder can also be activated by the swords trail of powder causing a trail of explosive and sharp shards and lit by taking both swords and ramming them together or high impact from another object causing the explosion. The blades shape changes to crescent moon shaped blades bending back into a circle form.
Banki: 2 Blades that are circle use wind mixed with explosive dust. When the dust is inhaled or enters through cuts will cause poisoning. It can also be used on self to boost speed and change directions at high speeds.
Special attack: 1.Blinding light- uses powerful explosive power to blind the enemy 2.shadow step-uses his high speed and small size to change motion causing the opponents eyes to lose sight of you
Personality: easy going but gets annoyed easily, also likes to set traps/pranks. Also likes
sparring with teammates. His weakness is he only fights if he wants to without listing others.
Biography: unknown origin but was told his parent were killed by a raid of hollows when they were on a mission. He lived by himself in this new world for many years in a old part of the shinigami world and learned how to fight because of his hate for hollows. One day while fighting a large group of Hollows he becomes cornered by A powerful group of Menos Grades. He was about to give up when a Soul Societies 11th Captain showed up and beat them.
After Shicca followed him back and asked him to teach him to fight. He was taken in by the soul society because of his strengths. Shicca worked under the captain and after he died became the new Captain of Squad 11. Since then he still has a great amount of hate for Hollows.
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:12 pm
Your abilities don't match with your powers. Also, your shikai needs to make more sense. How does this sound.
Your shikai weapon fades disenegrates in to little dust particles that are really tiny grains of a gun powder substance. This gun powder is poisonous if it gets on an open wound. To make explosions your character needs to make some type of spark. (You decide that) The grains of powder are sharp, so on command, when touching the enemy, it can cut them.
Something like that. Make it seem more realistic, but I do understand Bleach is fiction yet I want realistic stuff.
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:22 pm
yeah i found it confusing myself lolz i think it would fit better if it activated by concentrating large amounts of whatchamacallit energy into the dust
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:26 pm
There has to be something specific that trigger the explosion. Any type of friction would help make sense.
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:34 pm
i went with it using yours or the enemies aura or sword clash to activate it. Good enough?
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:38 pm
The sword clashing is great, but aura not so much. Most reistu isn't a source that could help you. Mine could because of it being lightning reistu. Try just clapping, then the friction from the clap flows through the grains of powder making a designated group of powder blow up. But you have to limit the extent of your powder.
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:52 pm
any ideas on how to activate it besides sword clash
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:55 pm
Lighter, clapping, two rocks being hit together, a toaster, stuff like that. Now I am hungry for waffles. blaugh
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:03 pm
oh waffles, im eating toast and ice cream as dinner right now
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:05 pm
In an hour I am going to make my famous Wacos. Hehehe the wait is unbarable, but some of the stuff is cooking. Did you pick what to use as the trigger yet.
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:19 pm
using a line of powder from the swords to the enemy and then slashing both of my swords together causing the surfaces to explode, bang!! chain reaction
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:33 pm
What about the shikai powder?
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:48 pm
well i think that solved it
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Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 7:06 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:22 pm
i will make a few small changes if needed but nothing big and add missing pictures
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