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The battle of shinigami vs hollow is starting once again. Which path will you take:good, evil, or neither. 

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Lucian Ayeris~

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Lucifers Banana

PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 4:14 pm


Name- Lucian Ayeris
Aliases/nickname- The Torturer
Physical description- Medium length gray hair. Orange eyes.His Hollow mask remains are that of a smiling face that cover the bottom half of his face.


User ImageAbilities-
Rewire- He can rewire the nerves by cutting his opponents to make them move incorrectly. i.e. You want to move left arm, you move tongue. Note: Even the smallest p***k will rewire the nerves system.
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Release Form-

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His mask will fully regrow to cover his upper face, which is meant to intimidate his opponent. His blade will split into a thousand of his swords which he can control and make move where Lucian wants. The sword will chase the opponent down and manifest the form of a certain fear of his enemy and attack him. Other times the multiples swords will each touch a part of his body and then pierce the enemy very slowly knowing that the enemy cannot move to evade it correctly.
Personality- Will not leave a comrade to die, which is odd considering his fighting style. Kind to the ones who aren't his enemy. He prefers not to fight.
Weakness- Uncontrollable when Hollows are slaughtered
Etc-
Pesadilla Cero: Manifests physical form in the shape of his opponents worst fear and comes after him, somewhat of a homing cero, and will explode when it makes contact with the enemys reiatsu/chakra or when Lucian commands.

Cero Barrage: One Gran Rey Cero split into millions of much smaller blasts that are impossible to dodge. You can only sit there watching as you are destroyed by the deadly blasts that pierce you.

He has a powerful Hierro.

Aspect of Death- Madness

Fastest Espada (Approved by Foust.)
His Pesquisa works like a bat's echo (except in all directions) that bounces off of reiatsu. The sooner it returns, the larger the reiatsu.

Fighting style: Very psychological, for example, he will not fatally wound his enemy, but rather wound him mildly about 100 times, so the enemy is in much pain, and will possibly retreat before having to administer the killing blow.
PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 4:22 pm


Your first ability doesn't make much sense. Change it to; you change the nerves in the part you touch. If you stab your opponent's arm, then when they try to move their whole arm, a finger moves. If you strike their limb, and mix their whoe body, it can be considered an autohit.

You release ability sounds cool, but unfair to others. Sending them into a dream world wouldn't make much of an rp. It is their dream world in their mind, threfore you have no way of harming them on the inside. Plus, this sounds a little on the godmod side.

One minor problem, you kept say,"I" in your released state part. You want to say your rpc.

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Lucifers Banana

PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 4:24 pm


Whoops I'll fix that.
PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 4:27 pm


Is that better?

Lucifers Banana


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PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 4:31 pm


Fix one more thing- You have no way of affecting senses such as smell, hearing, and sight, because of how your sword is, so take that part out. Do that and you will be approved.
PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 4:35 pm


Okay, done.

Lucifers Banana


Lucifers Banana

PostPosted: Thu May 27, 2010 7:32 am


Is it approved?
PostPosted: Thu May 27, 2010 7:44 am


Yes!

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