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Reply Poetry and Lyricism
A passive-aggressive sestina, whooooooo

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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 10:27 pm


from the poet to his mistress: mid-coitus, more or less
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:04 pm


Hmm.

This felt a bit forced, to be honest. I know sestinas are tricky but this one just didn't seem to come together as I was reading.

I'm sorry I can't really give specifics, but it was more of a general vibe than any specific details.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:18 pm


Were you perhaps struggling with which direction to take it?
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