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Fearmie

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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 8:18 pm

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Hey! I'd really like some red lines on this one! I cant get that hand right! D:<

Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:20 am

Photobucket apparently hates me right now, so I dunno if these'll load...
I think the main problem with the hand is the thumb - it seems to be posed in a sorta impossible way. I think I changed the original angle in my red line, though... I think the body could curve in more around the waist... Eye to the left could be more to the left, I think. And uh... I dunno, look at my redline to see more like how I'd do it...
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 1:36 pm

Thanks! That hand helps a lot. The curve at the waist you added is more of a difference in aesthetics since the way you drew it implies she's making a conscience effort to arch her back

Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 4:09 pm

Ah, yeah sweatdrop Plus she could be wearing something looser. She probably shouldn't be as thin as I made her there, but maybe curved in a little bit more than you have since it doesn't seem like she's hunching over... or it might be fine as is, I dunno. Shading might be all it needs.

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