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 Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 6:07 am
|- General Info -| - Username: Takashi Xero
- Character Name: Akiri Minami
- Character Squad: 3rd
- Character Seat: Taicho
- Sexuality Straight
- Character Personality A man with no regard for his past, nor the future. He seeks only to judge the unrighteous and to ensure justice within the Shinigami world. No matter how many lives he must take, he will see to the good of the human world over that of the Shinigami realm, he happened to be on a journey through void-realms, seeking a way to become a Vizard-Class Shinigami.
- Character Appearance Age: Seems to be 16
[Shinigami Age] [122]
- Character Skin Color/Ethnicity: Caucasian/Japanese
- Character Height: 5'5''
- Character Hair Length/ Style A rather simple short cut with a uniform length all around. Aido always styles his hair spiky including the back and sides. As seen in the picture provided which can give him a street wise punk kind of appearance.
- Character Eye Color: Akiri's eyes are a very rare crimson. They are a more accentuated form of red and almost look to be glowing. This effect is increased when emotions are flared or in the midst of combat.
- Character Description: Akiri's body is an athletic build, he is not overly muscular though is not skinny. He does possess a very defined muscular structure which is clearly visible when he is not wearing a top though with it on he seems to have a very average build. The become even more defined when in combat or training just like all muscles when they are put to work. Attention is more often then not drawn to Akiri's face for his eyes but that is not the only factor for also he possesses a scar on the right side of his face which stretches from just below his right eye down as far as the bone of his jaw and about a centimeter under his jaw bone. On his left shoulder there is also present a tribal style tattoo
- Character Birthday: April 19th
- Character Zodiac Sign: Ram
- Character Blood Type: O+
- Character Reiatsu Color: Red flaming aura
- Persona: A man with no regard for his past, nor the future. He seeks only to judge the unrighteous and to ensure justice within the Shinigami world. No matter how many lives he must take, he will see to the good of the human world over that of the Shinigami realm, he happened to be on a journey through void-realms, seeking a way to become a Vizard-Class Shinigami.
- Bio: Akiri Minami. A warrior in ever sense of the word. His past is something he does not speak of but is one that is painted in blood and tears and the bodies of both enemies and family. After his death in the real world and his rebirth in soul society Akiri has always had a knack for getting into tough situations, not always of his own doing. Growing up he was a quiet boy with little interest in the world around him or those in it. Growing up in one of the lesser known Rukon districts it was not a hard life. Wanting for nothing and always having enough food so as never to go hungry. But this was far from enough for this youth, constantly out in the vast country sides it seemed Akiri did not care much for his own existence. Many a time was he attacked by hollows as he went about his long walks but when ever they showed up he simply starred them down and only for the shinigami he would have been killed many times over. It was almost as if they were his guardian angels, showing up precisely when he was in danger. But he never talked to them or thanked them, turning away he would continue his walk.
This however changed in the blink of an eye. Although the boy never spoke to anyone or even showed an interest in those who called him family he loved his younger sister and brother deeply. They were twins and in the background Akiri did everything he could to keep them safe and happy. One day however during his hikes he failed to notice the twins secretly following close behind. Playing a game the ran from one tree to the other stalking Akiri who was oblivious for the longest time until a scream broke his daydream walk. Turning lazily around he spotted his sister on the ground covered in a crimson liquid and he brother no where in site. She seemed to be looking in the direction of the tree line. Without hesitation Akiri shot forward towards her running as fast as he could but moment before he was about to reach her a large hollow emerged from the treeline. But this did not cause him to falter. As the hollow reached out it hand to retrieved the girl Akiri lunged forward with all his power and slammed into the creatures forearm knocking it away but before Akiri could reach the ground to gain his balance the hollows other arm shot around and hit him with such force it sent him flying back with break neck force. Fighting to keep conscious, he could only watched on as the hollow devoured his loving sister. A moment later shinigami appeared and slaughtered the hollow but it did not matter at this point, they were gone. From that moment on Akiri swore he would get power no matter the cost and becoming a shinigami was a perfect way to do so.
With that he entered the academy and trained, studied and fought like a man possessed. Passing everything at the top of his class. Friends were of no concern to him but being surrounded by people day in day out and having to rely on them when it came time for missions, bonds were formed regardless of weather he wished them to be or not. Though on one particular mission on earth he lost one of those people he would call friend which only brought up the feeling of helplessness once again. With that his training increasing 10 fold. His main goal was to be captain one day and he would do everything he could to make that a reality. He swore an oath to himself, that no matter what he would gain power not just for himself but for all of Soul Society. No matter the personal cost to himself he would never let anyone feel helpless again. So when he caught wind of the Vizard-class shinigami he was now not only determined to be a Captain, but also a Vizard class Captain.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 6:08 am
|- Zanpakutō -| - Zanpakutō Elemental Affinity: Fire
- Zanpakutō Name: Gekido Tamashī [Blazing Soul]
- Zanpakutō's World: The Inner world of Akiris soul is one of a blazing tundra. A scorching landscape where the phoenix spirit of Gekido Tamashī resides and reigns over like a god. The landscape is bare for nothing could grow in this heat though there are lakes dotted around the area which is unusual. The heat of the lakes is even more odd for it is only lukewarm water and is quite refreshing in such a desolate landscape. However when Akiri finds himself in this world conversing with his Zanpakuto he is unaffected by the heat and often prefers it in that world then the real one in which his true body resides.
- Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: [See top picture] Gekido Tamashī is an amazing creature known as a phoenix. The mythology behind this legendary bird is this: A phoenix is a mythical bird that is a fire spirit with a colorful plumage and a tail of gold and scarlet (or purple, blue, and green according to some legends). It has a 500 to 1,000 year life-cycle, near the end of which it builds itself a nest of twigs that then ignites; both nest and bird burn fiercely and are reduced to ashes, from which a new, young phoenix or phoenix egg arises, reborn anew to live again. The new phoenix is destined to live as long as its old self. In some stories, the new phoenix embalms the ashes of its old self in an egg made of myrrh and deposits it in the Egyptian city of Heliopolis (Greek for sun-city). It is said that the bird's cry is that of a beautiful song. In very few stories they are able to change into people. In his humanoid form Gekido Tamashī is a towering night in blazing armor. Moving from his mythological bird look he now seems more demonic of sorts. In this form he never holds a weapon though if he is required too he usually wields his own Bankai form, the naginata.
- Zanpakutō Sealed Form: The blade is made from a pure black metal unlike most katana, its length is a fraction longer then a normal katana being roughly 5-6 feet in length. The sheath is also pure black and within the tsuba is a red cloth which contrasts nicely against the black covering. The remnants of a black chain dangles from the back of the tsuba also but it is only about 5-6 links with the last one only half there. The tsuba itself is loner then average to compensate for the elongated blade and can accommodate 4 and a half hands holding it simultaneously.
- Zanpakutō Shikai Activation Statement: Reign Over The Burning Heavens, Gekido Tamashī
- Zanpakutō Shikai Appearance: Release
- Zanpakutō Shikai Abilities: In his shikai form the blade of Gekido Tamashī does not change in physical appearance but it does become coated in pure flames. Getting hit at all will cause not only a cut but also burning of the skin. But the flaming blade is not the only reason for the fire, Akiri can also send slash waves of flames at the opponent and at the head of the slashes the form of the phoenix is seen as it tries to consume the target.
The second ability of the shikai is centered around the chain that is attached to the tsuba(handle) of the katana. The chain elongates and stretches to the roughly the length if not a bit longer then Akiri is tall which is 6 feet. The chain is often either held in his opposite hand or wrapped around his right forearm so as not to get in the way too much though he has trained with it enough so he is more then capable of using such a weapon. At the end of the chain is a hook that is used to anchor the chain to the opponent when it strikes and can be used to hold him or even tear away flesh. Akiri can pass flames down the chain also if he so wishes to burn the target
- Achieved? Yes
- Zanpakutō Bankai Activation Statement: Awaken, Gekido Tamashī
- Zanpakutō Bankai Appearance:In its Release form Gekido Tamashī takes on the style of a bladed staff weapon known as a Naginata. It is beautifully decorated and the scenes depicted seem to be that of a phoenix rising out of a flaming pit. A not too unfamiliar sight for those who knew the story behind a phoenix. It stands a fraction taller then he does reach just over 6 feet in length. Both ends can be used as weapons, the top for the obvious blade based strikes but also the end can be used as a staff to knock people out or pin them down without too much fear of piercing their skin and killing them.
- Zanpakutō Bankai Abilities: Unlike the normal feeling off increased weight pushing down on someone from increased spiritual pressure Akiris now changes so that when the opponent or anyone is within a certain distance from Akiri it is almost like they are standing in a furnaces. The heat does nothing, physical damage wise to a person, though it can be very disorientating and the heat haze generated can be a bit off putting but not too greatly.
Flame step is an ability where by Akiri can use the fires dotted around the area that were created from his flame attacks, to move around. He can appear from any of them at any given time and its speed is comparable to a master shunpo user if not slightly greater though if there are no fires in the area the technique cannot, obviously, be used.
Akiri is still able to send slash waves of fire at the opponent but now he another move is available where by Akiri stabs the naginata into the ground and a few moments later pillars of fire form around the target and close in on him creating a prison of sorts in which the target will or should be burnt to death or severely wounded.
Akiris bankai possesses a heightened form or second release stage that grants another power to the shinigami. In this form, released by the phrase 'True Awakening', Akiri is surrounded by flames which engulf not only his naginata but also his entire body and also form two large flaming wings on his back, he now resembles his zanpakutos soul even more for his form is now reminiscent or a phoenix. The heat of this fire is comparable to that of molten magma found in the earths core. Because of this the ability can not be held indefinitely and could also damage Akiri causing bad burns. But this also means that the flame attacks released from his weapons are far more powerful and can cover a wider range. The main skill used when in this form is a charge attack, the flames engulfing Akiri reach their hottest and he points his blade at the target and with amazingly enhanced speed charges at them in an attempt to drive straight through his opponent and burn them to ash. This of course also increases the heat felt from his spiritual power. The inferno now grows in heat and now it could also cause physical damage with the fact that people would start sweating a lot and become dehydrated, disorientation grows and it becomes harder to see in the heat haze though this would only most likely apply to low ranking and weak opponents
- Achieved? Yes
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 6:08 am
|- Kidō -|
- Bakudō:
1. Sai (Restrain) — Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
4. Hainawa (Crawling Rope) — An energy rope entangles a target's arms.
8. Seki (Repulse) - Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.
9. Geki (Strike) — Engulfs a target in red light, completely paralyzing them.
Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
26. Kyakko (Curving Light) - Hides the target from sight, presumably by bending light.
30. Shitotsu Sansen (Beak-Stab Triple Beam) - Shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his/her body in three places in a shape of a perfect triangle.
37. Tsuriboshi (Suspending Star) - Creates a star-shaped cushion of Spiritual Energy, which anchors it to nearby objects with "ropes" of spirit particles. It can stop falling objects, acting like a safety net.
39. Enkosen (Arc Shield) — Summons a shield of condensed Reiatsu to block opponents' attacks.
- Hadō:
1. Shō (Thrust) — Pushes the target away from the caster.
4. Byakurai (Pale Lightning) - The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (Reading Lightning) - Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.
31. Shakkahō (Shot of Red Fire) — Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"
33. Sōkatsui (Blue Fire, Crash Down) — Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to 31, but over a wider area and with more power.
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."
Standard Point System
Zanjutsu - 10/10
Has complete mastery of his/her Zanpakutō. Is able to use virtually every aspect of his/her Zanpakutō for offensive and defensive purposes, can also use unorthodox methods of fighting with his Zanpakutō. Shikai and Bankai.
Kido - 3/10
Has basic knowledge about Kidō. Able to use low-level Kidō spells. Bakudō and Hadō spells numbers 1-50.
Agility - 9/10
Air Walking can be done even when upside-down, in relation to the ground. Dashing can be done at near Shunpo level speed. Shunpo is often times used in combination with Air Walking and Dashing. Senka is mastered, but the Zanjutsu requirement is still present, and the Shinigami can perform the elusive Utsusemi, provided his/her Agility points are maxed out. Shunko can be done as well; if the Shinigami has at least has 6-8 Kidō points.
Hakuda - 9/10
The Shinigami transcends human levels when it comes to speed and strength. Kicks and punches can become blurred and grapples can come out of nowhere.
Reiatsu - 8/10
Reiatsu is given off unconsciously over a large area, the size of a large house is the center and stretches out over a few acres. This is when the Reiatsu becomes harmful to the opponent, hindering his/her combat abilities. It also starts to act as a shield, completely nulling damage from low-level attacks.
Physical Strength - 9/10
High Strength and Endurance. Able to throw material weighing a few tons, can sustain fatal injuries over a period of time and brush-off non-fatal ones.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 6:09 am
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 10:54 am
 Other than the many spelling errors, I really only see one thing that I have a bit of a problem with and that's the unlimited thing for Bankai. All Bankai should definitely have limits, likely the limit of one's Reiryoku. I'm sorta kinda on the fence about the Spiritual Power thing. Part of me wants to say you can't have it yet, but then the other part reminds the first part that he doesn't have it yet. Aside from that, fix up the spelling errors. For people like myself, if there are errors, it makes it harder to read. Not trying to imply that you suck or anything of the like. Seriously. It just irks me and only me. 3nodding Angel might fix it for you if you are nice. biggrin
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 11:04 am
I think i have fixed them all. Ran through it will a spell check[which i did not have when making it first time] and everything checks off.
What would you prefer to see about the Spiritual Power aspect. The fact its overwhelming is it that you dont like? I would only have it if i were a captain and there's would be overwhelming in a sense all things considered. I kinda based it off Ullquiorra's spiritual power the way Ishida compared it to it being like an ocean over the sky.
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 11:14 am
The spelling issues I saw were usage of the wrong words, so spell check wouldn't catch that. Though MS Word might... Regardless. Yeah. That's a problem. You see, a little while ago, I used that very comparison to describe what happened when both of Hei's Spirits were released in the Zan mini-arc and fused their Reiatsu, but only after receiving a power-up. With that said, I intend to use that very comparison for the feeling that is let out when Hei uses his mask properly for the first time. Because well, I don't lie: he's pretty strong. So I guess I'm just saying it can be powerful feeling and the heat and s**t is fine, but the ocean aspect, not so much. Make sense?
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 11:24 am
Yup perfect sense. Your vizard class captain at full strength is stronger then mine at full strength so me wording it making it seem stronger doesn't make sense really.
Ok i reworded it so it just refers now to the heat not the pressure really. Though i hope its ok that at one stage i try for Vizard status if thats allowed in this guild
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 11:26 am
I like it when people make this easy for me. Approved.
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