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 Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:32 pm
Welcome to my page for my Raevan concept!
All constructive criticism is appreciated and thanked, I'm usually around to reply to it as well.
I'd love crits on either the essence, Raevan itself or Axel. Thank you =)
[25.02.11] - Again another change of owner, I liked my owner, was quite attached, but I want to try something else now. Axel is the new owner.
[25.07.10] - I am officially happy with Isobel, actually way more happy then I thought I could be. I'm going to wait on some crits for her powers and see how getting a semi custom goes smile
[01.05.10] - New thread since I switched to another account. Thread also gets a nice little revamp.
[31.03.10] - A new soul and one I am quite happy about. I've also picked FINALLY my fel essence, you should also expect a new owner some time.
[08.01.10] - Another new owner xD I shall find my perfect fit at some point. I wouldn't mind some roleplay's either if anyone's interested. Ohh and new essence, again xD
[08.11.09] - New thread layout, as well as a new essence is in the making. A new owner has been introduced.
[06.04.09] - Updated again! Woo
[08.02.09] - Recent funds have been added, I'm still trying to figure out what to write for my essence -.- -facepalms-
[19.01.09] - Well, I thought I'd drop by and upgrade this a tiny bit xD
[05.01.08] - Yea it's a pre-update, my god it's my birthday! Woot Woot. Though I'm not any closer to my goal. I was away all week and I'm about to leave again hopeing to get my computer.
[02.12.07] - Oh me god, spent my monies again xD It's almost my birthday, how about that eh?
[18.09.07]- I spent my 25k on an item ._. and my necks all better! Changed my name too! I also passed the 100k so far, and the devi tail price has gone down! Yush!
Oh yea and the answer to my devinet is, my raevan because he/she wont have legs and some bark hopefully.
[04.08.07]- Well even after spending a couple days in the hospital and coming back home with a neck brace, Ann still manages to almost get 25k in her bank for this little fellow.
[23.07.07]- My my, better start questing if I want to finish.
[22.04.07]- Everything is finally done. Hope you guys enjoy reading the little story I included.
[18.04.07]- Open and critics are welcomed, well once I finish of course. Might take a little while. Intro | Fel Essence | Soul | Raevan | Owner
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:32 pm
Recollection Blossoms Long ago, parted lovers used to wear these sweet white blossoms in remembrance of their romance, and in the hopes that their dearest would not forget them. These flowers were dubbed 'forget-me-nots', and inside this vial you can see three perfect specimens of them... but what's this? On their petals, you can see tiny, shifting images... someone's forgotten memories? Once used, these flowers have always retained their owners' memories, and are still displaying them to this day, so as never to forget. Intro | Fel Essence | Soul | Raevan | Owner
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:33 pm
Panther Chameleon 
[Habitat] - It lives in the eastern and northern parts of Madagascar in a tropical forest biome. A daytime temperature gradient of 75-90 F (24-32 C) is needed when in captivity, with a basking spot at 95 F (35 C). At night, they should have a temperature drop of about 10-15 F (5-10 C).
[Diet] - They Require a lot of particular vitamin supplementation and have a demanding diet, consisting of mostly crickets. They also eat mealworms, super worms, wax worms, and butter worms, though the latter two are not recommended for sustained periods of time, as they are very fattening. All insects should be gut loaded (fed fresh veggies and vitamin/minerals) before feeding. In addition, some chameleons will also eat a bit of plant matter (including live plants in the cage, so it is vital that only non toxic plants are used). Collard greens, mustard greens, turnip greens, and sugar snap pea pods can be tried.
[Color Change] - All chameleons have a natural colour range with which they are born and is dictated by their species. Colour change is, for the most part, subconscious. It is affected by temperature, mood, and light. If, for example, the colour purple is not within the range of colours their particular species can change, then they will never turn purple.
[Colors] -Colors of the Cameleon
 Intro | Fel Essence | Soul | Raevan | Owner
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:35 pm
 Isobel [Name] - Isobel
[Gender] - Female
[Fel Essence] - Recollection Blossoms
[Soul] Chameleon
[Alignment] - Chaotic Good
[Personality] - Blunt ; Finicky ; independent ; curious ; arrogant ; territorial ; fussy(More to come! XD)
[Powers] - Mnemokinesis - Isobel will have the ability to enhance memories, meaning the memory along with any of the 5 senses a person had during this memory.
e.x. Someone wanting to remember their mothers cooking, Isobel will enhance the smell of the cooking.
Along with enhancing, Isobel will also be able to retrieve long lost memories. I've decided to put a time frame on this as a restriction, Isobel will only be able to bring back the memory for a certain amount of time. As she gets older, this time constraint will lessen. I only plan on making her able to officially help with keeping the memory if she ever gets close to the special stage.
Passive - Isobel will have the ability to change some of her colors, like her eyes or hair and maybe in some cases her skin. This will generally depend on her mood, the lighter her colors are the happier she is, the darker the gloomier.
[Food Source] -
UVA light - Main food source as both soul and essence need light in their diets. Forget-me-nots like shade and since UVA lights emit very little visible light, and Isobel's soul requires the vitamins from this light, it's safe to say this is the best food source.
Water - In little quantities, Isobel will generally only liked it sprayed on her with a little spray bottle. She won't drink it and will never enjoy large amounts of water on her.
Memories - As Isobel grows (And I'm talking like past the frei stage or close to the next stage), she will most likely indulge in a bit of memories.
Intro | Fel Essence | Soul | Raevan | Owner
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:37 pm
 
[NAME] - Axel Taylor Halkias
[GENDER] - Female
[AGE] - 24
[OCCUPATION] - Wedding Planner
[RACE] - Human
[LIKES] - Anything old, fashion, traveling, weddings, animals, satin
[DISLIKES] - Rain, violence (especially against animals), meat, people who can't decide, deceitfulness, snakes
[LOOKS] - Standing at a 5'9" with a large bust, Axel takes great care of her appearance. Her hair is loose, curling naturally and ending half way on her back; her light rosy skin contrasts sharply with her jet black hair. Turquoise eyes stare out in amusement from under think eyelashes, lush pink lips always kept alive with gloss. Heels make the women look taller then she already is, and her great fashion sense always make Axel look elegant in whatever she's wearing. She sometimes has an air of authority around her, however her smile usually gives away the opposite.
[PERSONALITY] - Axel is kind especially to those in need. She befriends lots of different people, and does all kinds of charity work such as soup kitchens, and animal shelters. She's always willing to lend someone a helping hand, and she will go out of her way for anyone. It makes her a very friendly and sociable person. Axel can be rather stubborn, it causes her to be a rather independent person, and not one who relies on others. No matter how hard something may be, she will stubbornly turn down help from anybody. This can be a disaster when she truly needs the help. Sometimes, it may seem rather annoying how stubborn she is. Axel is an extremely curious and spontaneous person, she needs to be when she's out looking for new creative ideas for weddings. However, some might find her a bit to curious for their liking as she tends to ask a lot of questions. Though she may go to the extreme to get what she wants, Axel will never walk over others when she gets competitive and she can get very competitive, liking the challenge and always going for a win. Axel doesn't like dancing around to get answers, nor does she like deceitful people. She likes to be straight forward with people and expects the same from others, she won't lie to satisfy anyone's ego or to make them feel better; if somethings wrong, she'll tell you.
[HISTORY] - Axel was born a few seconds after her twin sister Idylla in their family home; both parents and grand parents were exceedingly pleased, girls ran more along in the family then boys. While the twins spent many days together, learning the very same things, Axel took a more creative path for her life. When her father died when she was thirteen, it pushed her even further into her arts. Her mother was a bit worried, especially considering her other sister was leaning towards becoming a lawyer. Enjoying more and more the arts and crafts in school, and excelling in anything that required her creativity, Axel took an art major. However, it wasn't until her second year of college that an art teacher asked for Idylla's help for a wedding, this was the spark that set her on that career path. Seeing that Axel had a knack for the creative and organizational aspect of weddings, she was given an intern position which later turned into a full time job. It wasn't long before Axel headed out into her own, setting up her own office for a growing list of clients. She's been able to make a good name for herself, the rows of binders filling her bookshelves containing cutout, articles and what have you of creative ideas for weddings.
[POSTING COLOR] - #207399Intro | Fel Essence | Soul | Raevan | Owner
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:39 pm
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Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 11:11 am
Just to bump it up.
New art :3
Finally satisfied xD
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:31 am
I guess I'll give it a whirl XD;; Sorry, I'm not good with crits .__.;;
Definitely like most of your stuff, the essence is interesting and the soul is awesome.
But the powers make me really nervous. I can understand enhancing memories and I can understand retrieving memories. As a matter of fact Doucette would be smitten to remember her childhood. However, giving people memories and taking away their memories (and erm...recycling them into flowers @__@) seems a stretch. Taking away memories I think is a total no-no and a bit of a godmode. The only way I think it would work would be if someone asked to have their memories erased, but then once she had the power she could use it whenever she wanted and that's just...too much in my opinion. As for giving people memories, I'm 50/50 I suppose. My girl will be able to cast illusions, but illusions can be broken. In a sense it's up to the other character to choose whether they will believe what they see or not. Your girl on the other hand, is essentially forcing them to see/remember what she wants them to giving them the option to "opt-out" so to speak. You can not -choose- to have a memory or simply ignore it if someone's planting it in your head.
But that's just my two cents D;
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 5:52 pm
Yea, me and Atma actually talked about it.
So I`ll tell you what I told her :3
I`ve been meaning to change her powers over completely, but with the moving (which is tomorrow) I haven`t had tome to do -anything- o.o;;
I appreciate the crit though, and will keep it in mind when I do get back to fixing it.
And yes I love my soul too XD
Thanks Kitten biggrin
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:10 pm
Powers officially redone.
Crits would be welcomed since they seemed to break some major RP etiquette before smile
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:31 pm
Changed the owner again XD
Boy I change quickly xD
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