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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:22 pm
Name:Asylia Age: 22 Gender: female Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual Craft: (If none, ignore this.) Rank: (If they are both a candidate and rank in a craft, put their rank followed by "/candidate".)
History: Asylia was born to a minor beast hold near Fort. She was searched by Fort Weyr when she was 15. She impressed the gold dragonette Tesilelth. They now reside at Fort Weyr learning from the senior Weyrwoman. Asylia's parents were split up when she was 9. Her father was a drunk and a dead beat and her mother worked hard to support her. After Asylia was searched her mother died from an unknown illness. She doesnt speak to her father or speaks of him. The Weyr is her home now.
Appearance: Asylia is about 5'7" and slender. She has dirty blonde hair and a scar over her left eye where a beast got her when she was young. She has vibrant blue eyes that seem to look straight into a persons soul.
Personality: Asylia as a very loving personality she would do anything to help someone if she could. But dont double cross her or back stab her. Even thought she is very lovable she has a very bad temper and sometimes gets very angry when she has been hurt. She is a very brave person and will stand up for herself and what she believes in. But sometimes she can be very stubborn and think that she is right all the time when she might be wrong. Other: (If you don't want the OOC responsibility of metal dragons, put "no gold/bronze" here. Anything else you think we should know about this character.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:54 pm
Hi and welcome to DRoP! <3 I need a few things expanded on/changed in the profile and then you'll be good to go.
- Unfortunately, we don't accept characters with pre-existing dragons. You can join as a candidate, a crafter, a Weyrbrat, Weyrfolk, and pretty much everything in between but dragons, whers, and flits all have to be acquired either through IC means (i.e. hatchings) or in contests. If you would like for her to be a candidate, then her age needs to be between 12 to 21.
- Fort is not a Weyr currently in play. Our two Weyrs are Telgar and High Reaches, and we also have a unique Weyrhold Ghenza.
- Parental death is still on our current restriction list, so her mother needs to still be alive.
- Though I'm not super picky about scars, scars over eyes tend to result in damage to the eye which would make her unfit for candidacy. I'm also assuming you mean herd beast instead of beast? Unless you can clarify the situation more for me, I'm afraid I can't accept facial scarring too close to necessary bits like eyes.
- We usually like about two-ish solid paragraphs for personality. It helps us match up candidates and dragons together when we have more to work with. If you could add on to your personality (maybe tell us how she interacts with other people, authority, teamwork, things like that) and add in another flaw? Getting angry when you've been hurt is a fairly common, human characteristic and so I can't count it as a flaw.
Good luck and I look forward to seeing the changes!
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