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 Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 9:02 pm
Er...guys....
I haven't been getting good feedback about the song. Would you like to know what I've compiled or just keep doing what you're doing?
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 7:38 am
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Youthful Scarlet Sister Captain
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 8:28 am
There's some helpful advice mixed in with it soooo here it is:
Although the song and volume are good, the harmonizing sounds awkward and at some points doesn’t seem done at all or unnecessary. Some parts seem like they should be Luka only. Even though it is a chorus, there should be some part with her in it where she could be heard well; she sounds very faint throughout.
1:21, 1:36 One or multiple people are hitting a high, awkward note.
Only one person mentioned that the Japanese sounded way better than the English parts.
Some people get louder and then get soft and hard to hear, and then back to loud. Some standardization on singing volume would make it sound better. If it was an intentional effect added, instead of making them soft, loud, soft, etc. to get “harmonization” through a wave like effect, perhaps turning the persons voice on and off would be better. That is what other chorus groups do.
There are parts where everyone harmonizes very well, but they are very short lived. It makes the song sound a little clunky and the harmonization a little “accidental”.
2:04 The singing is high/nasally sounding, which makes the singing a little awkward. There are exercises that can help with this.
The sections where someone is singing “Yeah yeah” as background singing is a little awkward and too loud to be background singing. When adding it, make the volume on it softer so it falls to the back instead of staying in front.
3:43 WTF WAS THAT?
There were few parts where harmonization was decent/good, but its overpowered by the un-harmonized pieces. There are also many parts where people are off-key, too high in pitch, too low, or the volume of their voice. Further practice and a little more work with the sync-ing and mixing is highly recommended.
Kenichi's note:
THIS IS WHY, I NEED YOU TO AUDIO EDIT!!!!No, that's not just what we need.
And please don't edit my post, I find it kind of rude.
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 1:33 pm
x Tiryn There's some helpful advice mixed in with it soooo here it is:
Although the song and volume are good, the harmonizing sounds awkward and at some points doesn’t seem done at all or unnecessary. Some parts seem like they should be Luka only. Even though it is a chorus, there should be some part with her in it where she could be heard well; she sounds very faint throughout.
1:21, 1:36 One or multiple people are hitting a high, awkward note.
Only one person mentioned that the Japanese sounded way better than the English parts.
Some people get louder and then get soft and hard to hear, and then back to loud. Some standardization on singing volume would make it sound better. If it was an intentional effect added, instead of making them soft, loud, soft, etc. to get “harmonization” through a wave like effect, perhaps turning the persons voice on and off would be better. That is what other chorus groups do.
There are parts where everyone harmonizes very well, but they are very short lived. It makes the song sound a little clunky and the harmonization a little “accidental”.
2:04 The singing is high/nasally sounding, which makes the singing a little awkward. There are exercises that can help with this.
The sections where someone is singing “Yeah yeah” as background singing is a little awkward and too loud to be background singing. When adding it, make the volume on it softer so it falls to the back instead of staying in front.
3:43 WTF WAS THAT?
There were few parts where harmonization was decent/good, but its overpowered by the un-harmonized pieces. There are also many parts where people are off-key, too high in pitch, too low, or the volume of their voice. Further practice and a little more work with the sync-ing and mixing is highly recommended. Hmm, I need a better editor for audio other than me. Someone who owns FL studio and all that. But for you tiryn, I may assign you as for audio editor in chief. But anyway, other than that, yeah, we do need more coordinance, if you don't follow up on this. Erhem, we need to all talk on visual via webcam, so I can monitor your process. I suggested the phone but I assume, no one wants to go for it, because I can't comment directly on how are you doing, and how I'm gonna teach a chorus right. Remember, A chorus director's job is to get the chorus and the voices straightened out, so that one time, is required to go for it. okay.
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Youthful Scarlet Sister Captain
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 1:43 pm
I'd be better at video editing than voice stuff; I've only taken one voice class so my knowledge in singing is minimal. I can ask my boyfriend is he wants to help with voice...being a singer and whatnot. Don't count on that though.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:19 pm
Sign me up for melt. I just need a lot of practice on Japanese songs...
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:35 pm
Love Is War is great. I can't go as high pitched with my voice though... T.T
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