Criticism: Light, please, still an amateur. Advice is more than welcome.
Rating: PG-13 I guess.
When the bell tolls, do you hear it ringing?
When answering this, what might one reply?
Is it an ending, or new beginning?
Upon your own senses you must rely.
The nature of man dwells far in the past,
To see through the looking glass what they lost.
Careful, move on before breathing your last,
Lest you miss the future you would miss most.
In the past, as you left me wandering,
Wondering how you could leave me stranded,
I realize the endless suffering
Was from my love that had never ended.
What we once had leaves a vestige in me,
But I must go fulfill my destiny.
