little_miss_lex
It felt like fire running through her
vains veins, Thunder in her head
And lightning in her heart
, Her cheeks stung
. It was
Mad
ness. Mad
ness. Not just a feeling
, But a statement
. Keep in mind, mad(ness) means numerous things. It can mean euphoria, carelessness, insanity, anger, etc. You may want to consider using a thesaurus to find a word that better suits the meaning you're going for.
Remember that grammar and punctuation are still very important in a poem. You should generally punctuate the first letter of every line, and in this poem, you ought to consider punctuating mad(ness) in the fifth line to emphasis the word as a statement. You didn't include punctuation at all, except in M.A.D., which frankly, didn't add anything to the poem.