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Fizzle: can you hear them? the people crying for help?
This was a very vividly colored piece. You used descriptive words to great effect. I've never thought of writing dreams to work on learning to paint vivid scenes in writing, but it seems to have worked excelently for you. Keep writing your dreams, but start to incorperate your own (concious) imagination into your work. Eventually, you'll be able to come up with this sort of stuff in your waking moments as well.