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 Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:56 pm
 Two of my characters, Marcellus (left) and Violet (right). I actually enjoy drawing couples, but that doesn't mean I'm very good at them. So, it's time to practice! Suggestions and critique are wanted. I really want suggestions on how to make this more hot/sexy, generally with the placement of their hands and legs, while keeping their facial expressions intact.
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 6:54 pm
Depending on how steamy you want it, his hand could be a little...um......down closer to her lower...you know...lady regions. And she could be arching her back more to look at him, like she's leaning in and encouraging his touch...though she looks kind of angry, so maybe she wouldn't...unless its a game between them. I don't know enough about these two to be sure.
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Profitable Conversationalist
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:09 pm
Here's a summary of their relationship: she hates him, he likes her, she's forced into a relationship with him, he likes getting physical. XP
He could be um... using his fingers a bit, to her lady regions (trying to keep this PG-13, lol), but I'm afraid that will change her expression.
I'll sketch out the arching back suggestion though (without the encouragement-face), thanks! xD
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 12:56 pm
His other hand could be reaching around and cupping underneath her breast.
Also her head looks sort of awkward. Like she just got her neck broken.
Maybe if she doesn't like him so much, she should be keeping as much of herself away from him while he's trying to keep her close, instead of her sort of just standing there.
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 9:02 pm
Heheh, that is a possibility. I'll see what I can do with the second suggestion. But for the breast one, I'm not too sure. Grabbing onto a woman's breast right off the bat is kind of an amateur sex move. Not going into details about why (this is a drawing guild, not a sex advice one, tee-hee X3), but I think I'll avoid that for now.
Could you please elaborate on the neck-broken part? I am not quite sure how to fix it myself.
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:22 pm
Given her body's angle, I guess the way her head is twisting makes it look her chin is reaching beyond her shoulders. I dunno about you, but that's extremely uncomfortable for me, especially if you raise your chin up as high as she's doing... though some exaggeration even in more realistic drawings is acceptable, of course. Her shoulders are also rather broad. I think she also looks kinda thick, but I think that's just your style.
The guy's hairline seems a little odd to me... not that I know exactly how it's supposed to look. His hairline looks like it might have the M shape going for it with it parted at the top point on the left rather than at the middle (which seems to be a more popular choice in anime/manga with those types of bangs (or "fringe" as Americans apparently call it)).
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:10 pm
When I showed this drawing to some of my other artsy friends, they noted that the girl has too small of a head, and I'm inclined to agree with them. So that's probably why she looks a little bit too thick. But, she is a tad bit more muscular than the average woman, so I'm not inclined to making her thinner. You are right about the angle of her head, it is quite uncomfortable. Thank god for the transform tool on Photoshop. As for the guy's hairline, he doesn't have a widow's peak. Also, his bangs aren't being parted at the center either, they're more to his right. Here's a reference. With this in light, I may have given him too much of a forehead.
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