myennaius
I have a thought for both your poem and your avi.
As for the poem, sounds very interesting, and I think you should try to make even better. Almost like something you'd expect to read in a major poetry book.
Awesome avi, by the way, but I almost can't believe that they let you make something like that. It could make someone want to stare at it alone in a dark room, if you know what I mean (this is meant as a complement).
I know, it needs more clarification, i could only think of one verse though.
As far as my avi goes, gaia made the items, I just perverted them. I only used heartbreaker, the shackle set, and colbert. Heartbreaker is the only item of any real value and gives that string bikini black leather part to my avi.
and the colbert part is just funny as hell.