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 Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:27 pm
I'd recommend you stay away-
Away from me without delay,
Please keep your love for me at bay,
Before I send you far away.
My love for you must come first,
Althought it mqay seem like it hurts,
Those painful memories always lurk,
In the darkness I cant't shirk.
I hope that our love is true,
so I can run away with you,
Our troubles come out of the blue,
And attract to us just like glue.
You wish to always stay with me,
But don't you see we cannot be?
The drama, you are blind to see,
And come to me on bended knee.
The tears flow out, the pain we share,
I wonder how we'll ever bear,
But now I know you'll always care,
My love for you will never wear.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 8:03 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:33 pm
thx!! it only took me about thirty minutes to create mainly because i needed rhyming words lol
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 4:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:15 pm
That's so awesome! How are able to create rhyming poems and still make it sound poetic? wink
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:33 pm
I thought the rhyming was the hole point to poems
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:52 pm
no... well I can't explain because poetry is kind of perplexing, but there's more to it than just rhyming.
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:58 pm
well yeah like any text the wrighter is trying to convay some thing a thought or idea or just plane entertanemint but still these can be done in storys or song or other sutch written form
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 7:04 pm
Acaelus Thorn well yeah like any text the wrighter is trying to convay some thing a thought or idea or just plane entertanemint but still these can be done in storys or song or other sutch written form Well yeah. All of those things you said are done in a lot of things.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:56 am
This is awesome. You really have a great talent. You should see someone about it. xd
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:42 pm
very good. i liked it alot.
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:21 pm
Usually I'm not a fan of the rhymers because they always seem forced but you definitely made this one work. You're a good poet. whee
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