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 Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:59 am
Every day i feel sadness, I want to cry
Everyday i feel lonely, i want to die.
What life is there to live for?
Should i even live anymore?
Who am i to feel happy and glad,
me who always feels lonely and sad.
I am a nobody, i don't belong,
I think thats why i always feel wrong.
everday i cry my heart out,
every day i want to scream and shout.
every night sobbing myself to sleep.
how will i get out of this hole so deep.
My life is sadness, full of tears,
and silent crying no one hears.
I wish i could find a way
to find that one good day.
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:50 pm
i understand the feelings in this poem...it's a good poem, full of emotions that i can understand...just know, if ur ever too down, u can come here and we'll help u out! =)
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Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 1:56 pm
For the most part, your meter's solid--and I'm a sucker for good meter. It was the rhyme, though, that made me pay it any attention. Good work!
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:14 am
Very very nice, like it smile
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