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PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 4:07 pm


(This is my first poem ive done it was for school idk if its good or not would like feed back)

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The brother angel (name edit)


Lights levee the earth and houses turn to dust
Family members gone missing including the sun
Burned out left in darkness with the only reason being time
Cars left to rust jungles to forests its all over and done
Human life extinguished like a fire in an oven infested with dust
No more honking or squeaking no more shots will sound through out our country
Our world diseased sun burnt out no one to scream and shout
The darkness sinking in and life seeping out
Love lost never to be found
Only in the dreams of our world may we show
The way of our life on earth unknown
Our dreams realized in a second home
And old planet serving a new purpose
Supporting life for our children, wives, daughters, mothers
Life reborn and show once more to a new home a new world adored.  
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