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SnowflakeCO808

PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 2:41 pm


This isn't my best but I would love if you could tell me how it is and critique it.. I don't mind if you're a little harsh, I won't mind...
PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 2:48 pm


What Can I Do?


Engulfed in smoke
Like a mask
She tastes the cig
Acting like it's air
She isn't the same
A dark and cold girl
I'm shunned from her
Even though she's my sis
We've known each other
Since the good ol' diaper days
And now when I look at her
I don't see my lovable sister
Instead I see
A lost little girl
Who is messing up her life
I've tried everything to help her
And made myself go insane
But what can I do?
She needs me
And yet she wants nothing
To do with me
Should I give up?
Or should I try harder?
Save her?
Or myself?
What can I do?
What will I do......

SnowflakeCO808

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