I'm working on a commission for someone and I want CC on these before I finish them up. The second one is mostly unclothed on purpose, because I'm less confident with the pose and I want CC on the anatomy, before I put more clothes on her.
Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:11 pm
Mind if I redline 'em? It's hard for me to write out the critique, I'm in a drawing-type of mood anyway. XP
EDIT: Couldn't wait, I have to go soon anyway. XP I re-drew the pose because I wanted to understand it better, so apologies for the sketchiness of it.
Basically, watch the thickness overall, sometimes the limbs are thin, sometimes they are thick. I highly recommend posing for yourself (and take a few pictures for your own reference!) if there is anything you don't understand.
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