Two Poems in need of Critiquing

[Hacked Row]

New Beginning

A tortured soul
With a painful past
But they will not let this stop them.
A future open,
With opportunities at last
But they will not sink to narcism.
A wise youth
With an open mind
but knows what's foolish.
So if you we're young again,
With what you know now
Would you change your future?

Story time

Bring on to me
A new beginning
Bring on to me
A happy ending
Let me leave and
Read my story
So I can see
If I make it out alright
Slowly I see
Where this is going
There's no need for me
To continue on
So here I leave
Without an ending.