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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:29 am
I figured I'd just make a thread where I post some poems, and hopefully hear some feedback. If poetry were simple words And simple words could save the world And the world were a happy place Where simple words form poetry Would not all the simple words Be lovely?
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:32 am
The wind propels me forward Into the great beyond A world where moon and sun beams Mingle in the sky A place where a single dewdrop Throws color for a mile A place where misery Vanished in the air
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:33 am
It's as if I revolved with the world But it left me behind I let in the noise But was engulfed by the silence The moon shone through my window But the room was dark I believed in myself But doubted who I was I wrote something down But it never came out
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:34 am
I wish the words That I type here Had the power to fix everything To make it all Fit back together And yet they don’t I wish and wish But try I might Words have no power Except all the power in the world For they are sharp as arrows And poisonous as darts Yet they can’t do anything But they can do everything They ruin our lives They ruin our hearts Yet words cannot fix Whatever they break And cannot heal Whatever they wound
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:35 am
Things that no one seems to hear Whisper softly to my ear Finding me in the dawn-lit hour While someone else would contemplate a shower
The thoughts of all the outcasts here Around the world and many like deer That sing the same old quiet tune That probably was once written in rune
The quiet ones, the warrior warners The silent could-be mourners Somehow they’ve been silenced Forced to bear witness to our violence
Have you counted up their tears? There’s just as many as their fears For every fear you hide at heart You can be sure one of them shares it in part
The power the human being craves Has forced so many to turn to wraiths But these are the few, the pure Perhaps they hold our forgotten cure?
Not many see something quite like this No, their too busy pondering a kiss But when you see through open eyes The guardian angel beside you flies
But by seeing in this new perspective You risk become quite the skeptic Can the human race be good? Well, they all know that they should
So now we come to a large conclusion That you can see truth or illusion But either way, the outcome’s grim Because we all stand on this same rim
The world changes as we speak Perhaps there will be a good change this week But now look at all the sad The miserable, the musty, and the bad
Are these people that we think of? Because we see to be thinking of the rough Gritty, gross, grotesque and grimy Smelly, sulfurous, and slimy
These words more accurately describe Something that we refuse to inscribe The human soul, that mythical thing The one people forget to bring
Can this world continue on? When all we care for is tonight’s filet mignon Save us! Save us! Someone please! That’s what we cry, we might as well be fleas
Annoying, selfish, leaching slugs That’s what we’ve become, simple rugs And yet there were those silent few Who watched the morning collect its dew
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