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Kuuhaku-shou

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PostPosted: Thu May 27, 2010 4:36 pm


In Italy, for thirty years under the Borgias, they had warfare, terror, murder and bloodshed,
but they produced Michelangelo, Leonardo da Vinci, and the Renaissance...



Heh. I also spotted another "grammatical" error with ta française. In the second-to-last line of Chapter 3, "Les visiteurs sont ici." <> "Sont", a form of the french word ĂȘtre, meaning "to be" or "are, am," et cetera, is supposed to be used in the context of "I actually am this something"-which cannot be done. Instead, you should write <> or, "The visitors are arriving."

There's your French-thing of the day. I don't mean to be overly critical, but I'm doing this for my sake-as practice. Ask me if you're unsure about French, I'm your man for it. razz


... In Switzerland they had brotherly love, they had five hundred years
of democracy and peace, what did they produce? The cuckoo clock.
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 8:15 am


Haha I'm perfectly fine with you correcting french errors. No only does it help me story wise, but your help could definstely come in sue when i take french next year for school.

Which will eventually get rid of a few errors in its own lol

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PostPosted: Sun May 30, 2010 6:35 pm


In Italy, for thirty years under the Borgias, they had warfare, terror, murder and bloodshed,
but they produced Michelangelo, Leonardo da Vinci, and the Renaissance...



Haha. Just ask if you need any translation.


... In Switzerland they had brotherly love, they had five hundred years
of democracy and peace, what did they produce? The cuckoo clock.
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